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Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Meeting

Well isn't life full of surprises!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

i know...but never when you need totally ripped this off a calvin and hobbes comic...gotta luv em

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Meeting

WELL, CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SHE'S GOT TO TELL EDWARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!EVEN IF HE DOESN"T REMEMBER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

i knowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Reviewer: Jaz (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Unfair


i think ur chapters r 2 short they're gud but wayyy to short and you should update more often or sum ppl wont b as loyal....(Unbiased critisism)

Author's Response:

i'll keep that in mind...thank you!!!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Unfair

More words please. M..u..s..t have words...........

Author's Response:


Reviewer: litlle_miss_vampire (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Unfair

please finish and load the next chapter as soon as possible i like your story so much i just wanna read it all! i think this is a really good storyline having edward as the bad person he's always the poor sad, lonely one instead.

Author's Response:

well, technically, he's still the poor sad lonely person, but you don't know that yet. that comes later


and i'm glad you like it

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 04:01 AM · On: Unfair

ack... dumb stupid boy!!! waiting for him to redeem himself.. he better have a darn good reason ;)

Author's Response:

he kind of doesn't know it himself...that's where mike comes in

Reviewer: Twilight_Saga_Fan (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Unfair

please update soon!

Author's Response:


Reviewer: chewycui2 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Unfair

edward's reaction is...confusing. i know he's gonna redeem himself soon but right now he's such a jerk! :/

Author's Response:

i know. he is a HUGE jerk! but it was a lot of fun to write!

Reviewer: Tarbecca (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Unfair

AHH!  I don't know if I can handle the drama!!!

Author's Response:

i luv drama. it's so...dramatic

Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Unfair

Poor Bella! Edward is a jerk! How could he do that and NOT Remember??!!?

I cannot wait to see how you do the big reveal. 

It would be funny if she did it when Edward & Carlisle are introduced to her by her mom. I can just picture her asking Carlisle his opinion on unwanted pregnancy and then explaining what happened to her at the party while Edward sits there(while the penny drops) and then her calling Jasper and Emmett to come over to beat the crap out of Edward....

Please update soon!!


Author's Response:

well edward does make a comment about seeing bella at the drugstore in front of esme and carlisle, but bella lies about why she was there.  (what else could she do? in front of them?)

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Unfair

How could Edward not remember at least her face? Had he been drinking too? Well, that's gonna be an awkward conversation between the two of them. Can't wait to see what comes next!

Author's Response:

well, no he wasn't drinking. but he still wasnt very aware of what was going on. it was almost like an involuntary action.

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Friend

It's nervewracking to go buy a pregnancy test. i went as support with one of my friends. I'm excited to see how this plays out!

Author's Response:

wow! i'm glad you like it! how did that work out for your friend?

Reviewer: msrsEdwardbrooks (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Unfair

omg I think that was the best ch. yet but you did take a little long time to update but I still think you are so awsome no out of this world awsome hurry and update cause I cant wait to read it.



Author's Response:

really? thank you very much! and i hope i can update as soon as possible, but i don't know how often that might be...stupid science project


Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Unfair

lol oh man bellaand rose bonding yay cant wait for more

Author's Response:

i know. rose is awesome when she's nice, isn't she?

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Remembering

So the drama begins. I wonder why her mom is so secretive about her dating life. Especially if she's supposedly engaged to the guy. Good job so far.

Author's Response:

well there is a whole reason for that, and i'll explore that later, when bella tells her mom that she's pregnant

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Stranger

Hmm, I wondered how that was gonna happen. Good job so far. Now for the aftermath...

Author's Response:

lol...wait until bella starts yelling at edward after he eavesdrops...chapter fave part that i've written already

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Unfair

wow!!!  looks like edward is a little prick...and poor bella...she's pregnant with his kid and he doesn't even remember her...ugh...

can;t wait for more

Author's Response:

i know. edward's horrible, isn't he?

Reviewer: Ceradee22 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Unfair

AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!  How can he not remember her! Prick!

Author's Response:

lollll, thats what i thought when i reread my writing!

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 12:56 AM · On: Unfair

i like it a lot. update soon please...

Author's Response:

thank you, and i'll do my best!!!!!!

Reviewer: missam908 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Unfair

I cant beleive he doesnt even remember her at all. Poor bella, but I like seeing this side of rose.

Author's Response:

i know. rosalie is really nice in breaking dawn.

Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Unfair

Wow this EDward is an ass! love it

Author's Response:

lol, ikr


Reviewer: leythestrange (Anonymous) · Date: May 11, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Unfair

I don't know why but that was really funny. Can't wait to see Edwards reaction when he finds out.

Author's Response:

i'll tell you. he just doesn't get it. he offers to help, but bella...well that's enough sneak peek for now

Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Unfair

i seriously have to get to chaps 8 and 9 to see how assward finds out.  i hope he remembers the entire incident and how on earth are they going to live as brother and sister?  i have a hard time being patient and waiting for updates....  your story idea is truely original and riveting...i hate to beg, but can you give a few more teasers?

Author's Response:

sure. edward eavesdrops on a phone conversation, and that's his confirmation. and then he confronts bella, and'll just have to wait and find out.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Unfair

Longer chapters please. These short one are just terrible teases. Love the storyline though. ;p

Author's Response:

tease is fun :D jk

Reviewer: butterfly_kisses (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Unfair

holy shit...edward's a jerk.....hopefully he takes care of bella...

Author's Response:

i know, rite? i would hate any guy like that. but he gets better...eventually

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