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Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Epiphany

I am glad that Edward has come around and told her his true feelings. Alot for her to take in and how will they explain Edward getting beat up by the boys they really should of listened to Bella.

Author's Response:

well, theyre emmett and jasper... what do you expect from them???? anything for a fight.....

Reviewer: La Tua Cante (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Epiphany

Love the story but totaly hate the fact that Emmett and Jasper did that to Edward, this is all getting blamed on him but it's not ALL his fault!!

Can Edward be happy for a bit?? We could perhaps see a little of the shining light which I believe is at the end of the tunnel??

Please don't let Esme freak out, that kind of thing happened to me with a situation just as serious and to be honest I don't think either of them deserve it.

Author's Response:

well, that is coming up, as soon as this next chapter gets validated, we'll see more of that. we'll finally get a chance to get inside edward's head and see exactly what goes on in there.

Reviewer: roroduff (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Persuasion

Ahhhh, 50-50 then lolz.

Oj, I'm sure it was gorgeous! Love the story!

Author's Response:


Reviewer: roroduff (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Persuasion

I think it was because you would have to absolutely adore someone to put up with it. Aawell, hopefully I'll never have that problem.


Le Grá ...

Author's Response:

idk if i want something like that to ever happen to me......

Reviewer: roroduff (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Persuasion

Yeah, I definetly know what you mean! The other thing tat annoyed me aswell was limited affection. That would irritate the hell out of me ! Lolz


Le Grá ...

Author's Response:

i know, right? i mean, why limit affection of all things?!

Reviewer: Sheperdesz (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 08:45 AM · On: California

I hope u can update soon!

Author's Response:

i don't know how long it will be, to tell the truth. i have a lot of studying to do for the psats and i can't get the mood right in the chapter. i have a lot of work to do...

Reviewer: klarsen117 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Unfair

wow, what a douche

Author's Response:

i know. wait, you're talking about edward, right??

Reviewer: EdwardCullen_Sexy (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:05 PM · On: California

wen ru going to update i can wait ANY longer!>!!!?!?!?!?!?! plz hurry!!!!! i already added this to my favorites i love it!!!!!!!!!!??!?!! hurry plzz

Author's Response:

i'm going to do my best, but i can't make any promises. i start high school sooon, so i have a lot of prep to do...

Reviewer: EdwardCullen_Sexy (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 09:21 PM · On: California


Author's Response:

i am reallllly happpppyyyyy that you like it sooo much!!!!

Reviewer: roroduff (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:55 PM · On: California

Ugh Irina's a bitch.

I've never liked Tanya, so her being a bitch wasn't much of a shocker lolz.

dont wait too long to update!!


Le Grá ...

Author's Response:

i'll do my best!!

Reviewer: roroduff (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Confrontation

Wow, this is all moving so fast !! lolz I like it!!

At least we wont have to wait 'til like chapter 50 for some real drama!! lolz


Le Grá ...

Author's Response:

i know exactly what you mean. that was the main issue i had with twilight. the first chapter moved really slowly, in my opinion. but once edward and bella started talking, it was awesome...

Reviewer: roroduff (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Meeting

Whoah, that's some Jerry Springer shit!

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Reviewer: roroduff (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Unfair

Ugh, Edward's an ass

Never EVER thought I'd say that.

Well done for makin' hell officially freeze over lolz


Le Grá ...

Author's Response:

haha...welll...nothing is impossible...

Reviewer: roroduff (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Friend


I really like this story !!


Le Grá ...

Author's Response:

thank you..i'm so glad you like it!!!

Reviewer: roroduff (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Remembering

Oh God... What will she do if she is pregnant?

Oh well, I suppose I'll just have to read on and see!!

Not that I mind, it's a great story!!


Le Grá ...

Author's Response:

glad you like it...

Reviewer: roroduff (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Stranger

Edward taking advantge!!

I'm very disappointed lolz.


Le Grá ...

Reviewer: roroduff (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Ready

Oh God... I'm gettin' kinda worried now...


Silly bitch lolz.


Le Grá ...

Author's Response:

i'm really not sure...i think she forgot about it...

Reviewer: roroduff (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Persuasion

The dress you have in mind.... does it make Bella look like a stripper?

Sorry, just trying to set up a visual lolz.

Great start! Cant wait to read on !!


Le Grá ...


Author's Response:

well, in bella's opinion, she looks like a stripper, but alice thinks it's the latest thing in fashion...

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 12:30 PM · On: California


Author's Response:

glad you think so...

Reviewer: sochain is solas (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 02:34 AM · On: California

great story! can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

i'll update as soon as i can!!!!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 12:17 AM · On: California

yeah friends and mike cause he helped

Oh in Bella's point of view at one point you have tanya trying to feed her the pill not irina

Author's Response:

reallly???? ooppsss. i'll have to fix that....i don't know how i missed that in editing....

Reviewer: The Darkest Vampire Queen (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 07:26 PM · On: California


Author's Response:

i'll update as soon as i can, but i can't promise anything...

Reviewer: Clair_Delune (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 03:31 AM · On: California

Great story!! I really liked it. I didnt really like this last chapter muchy though :(

It seemed kind of crazy and rushed. And it didnt really make sense with the irina thing. i wass hoping her revenege would be a bit more elaborate then what she did. And also how did she get the note on bellas pillow? Maybe its just me, i read the whole story in like half an hour so it might just be me. Please don't take this the wrong way its a great story, and i love everything about rosalie, because even though its not true to vamp rosalie it seems like somthing rosalie might do.. Please post more soon:)

Author's Response:

no, i understand. it was just that i'd never actually been to san diego, and i didn't want to say anything about it that isn't true, so....welll to tellt he truth, i've never actually been to phoenix either...but anyway....i get your point....

Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 12:52 AM · On: California

GREAT!!Please let Bella and Edward get together soon, I ro be happyeally want them to be happy and together.. ;D

Author's Response:

i dont have it all planned out exactly, but i think that edward and bella will get together for real, shortly after bella and edward start school

Reviewer: EmberRayne (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 04:09 PM · On: California

i think they could be friends and omigod, that was cruel! how could you willingly kill another human being! i mean, even if ur bf dumped you and the new girl he dumped u for is pregnant with his child, u cry a river build a bridge and get over it! life goes on! mmm, fav new character had to be kate, cuz of how nice and helpful she was. she was awesome, and totally unlike irina and tanya, the bitches.

Author's Response:

i know....out of all the denali coven, my personal faves are kate and carmen, so i think that's why i made kate the nice one....

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