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Reviewer: VaniV (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: VaniV (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 2
Wow this seems really nice, but what a mean cliffy is that... please update soon.. I'm dying to find out what happens next...
Reviewer: VaniV (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was totally not what I expected (story-wise) but extremely well-written. I am intrigued by this... will it be an Edward-centric one or will Bella eventually get over him ?
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 2
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Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
WHAT AN IDIOT. BELLA SUCKS
Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
Nice one, Bella. She reallyl doesn't deserve Jacob. Keep it up!
Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 1
Nice one, Bella. She reallyl doesn't deserve Jacob. Keep it up!
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 2
dude. um, im not sure what to say. its a little dark, haha, but good. i just want edward to come back and rescue her now!!!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 2
I'd be super nice if you updated:) I like this story
Reviewer: JasperBella0015 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 2
make more, please
Reviewer: rosy1015 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 2
when are going to post a new chapter??? im so into the story now..
Reviewer: wearefanpires (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 2
OOOOOO WRITE MORE!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 2
Looking forward to where this is going!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was heartbreaking and horrible but so unique and well-written!
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 2
yay!! go find her edward :)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 2
I want her and Edward back together. I hope Edward isn't too much of a jerk since she had sex with Jacob, due to what he put her through.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 2
Chapter was a little short, but I can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 2
oh wow...jacob was being a complete jerk. And I am really happy that edward will make a reappearance in this story because bella needs someone to protect her now. Great chapter and i cant wait for the next one!
Reviewer: puzzle fan (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 2
Nicely done.
Reviewer: luckycharms0210 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
Damn good writing! I mean really! Wow! and I'm overly critical about everything. Awesome! Write more. I wish someone would write a happy ending on the scene in Bella's bedroom from the movie. You should do it. Just an idea.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 1
I liked it! Can't wait for the rest!
Reviewer: Ariel Ameigh (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, this is really off to a good start! I can't wait for chapter 2. This is definitely how it would have happened in New Moon, had Bella given in. I'm curious to see what will happen next... how Bella and Jacob will handle this.
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
Poor Bella! Gosh, what was she thinking. She obviously didn't enjoy that.
This story is off to a great start and I am looking forward to whats next!
Reviewer: Amaterasu (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
I really hope you continue. I like the opening. Will Jacob and Bella survive this? Or will Edward come back?
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