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Reviewer: E L L E (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2013 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 1: Trapped
You really need to update. This is one of my most favorite stories. I read this story on fanfiction.net but why did you delete it? Its a really really REALLY great story. Can you please upload it again on fanfiction.net?
Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 11: Piano Man
The story is so sweet please write more.
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 11: Piano Man
Awww he lurves her *giggle*
BUT of course he thinks he's some monster that doesn't deserve her so he won't tell her how he truly feels plus he doesn't think he'd be able to handle the rejection he THINKS he will have to deal with if he ever told her.
I doubt she would reject him :)
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 11: Piano Man
Hey awww the chaoter was so sweeeeeet and the ending awwwwww lol they are all rolling in it =]
Reviewer: ChangVang218 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 1: Trapped
That was amazing. Thank you for updating!
I'm so glad we finally get to read some of Edward's thoughts. Even though this isn't a canon story, you still wrote Edward's perspective extremely well. Especially with the whole "I'm a monster" thing. :)
Your chapters get better and better each time. Can't wait to read the next one!
p.s. I had no idea that something like a Kindle existed before reading this chapter. lol.
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 11: Piano Man
AWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!! and that ladys is why we love Edward so much!!!!! So thrilled you updated please please uupdate soon!!!! Great chapter by the way!!!
Reviewer: Delphius2004 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 11: Piano Man
This is just too sweet. I love this story. I can't wait for another update.
Reviewer: Sylvia Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 11: Piano Man
SO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY. THIS IS MY FIRST HUMAN STORY I READ AND IM GLAD IT WAS THIS STORY!! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 11: Piano Man
Such a sweet chapter!
I'm DYING to know what the skeleton in Edward's closet is.
Reviewer: vannaaaaheartsjacob (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 11: Piano Man
Awww!
Reviewer: ToTheEights (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 11: Piano Man
Good good good.
Keep it up and update ASAP!
~8~
Reviewer: freshonlybakery (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 10: Movie Night
Ahh. So cute. :)
I'm officially addicted to this story, I need mooore! :)
*tries to resist reading ahead on ff* Will fail miserably xD Argh.
Reviewer: freshonlybakery (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Stairs
I have a sneaky feeling that date is going to be a certain Edward.. (;
Anywho, I love this story! It's original and I love the way it's written!
Okay, towards chapter 4 I go! :)
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 10: Movie Night
Hey awwwwww this chapter was so sweet aww the ending was o so so good =)
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 10: Movie Night
*sigh* Don't we just LOVE a knight in shining armor Edward? :D...the answer is yes..yes we do :) :)
Scary movie Time...NOW WHERE is MY Edward and Tiger to snuggle with???
Great chap!!!
I want them to get together sooooo badly :(
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 10: Movie Night
AWWWWWWWWW How sweet! i loved this chapter! please update soon!!!
You rocked this chapter!
:)
Reviewer: Feelybox (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 10: Movie Night
*sigh* I want my own Edward now. If only I could get my husband to hold me like that. We recently upgraded to a King sized bed and he even went as far as putting a pillow between us....what a jerkface. Lol. Anyways. I really enjoy this story I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 10: Movie Night
Aw, Eddie's such a sweetie pie ;)
Cute chapter although I'll admit, I'm curious about what Emmett said to recieve such a smackdown
Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 9: Breakfast
LOL @ Poor Edward being made fun at by his family at breakfast.
Even better was Edward trying to tell Bella to eat by just staring at her intently that was fricking hilarious! :D
And Alice.."Bella are you cheating on me?...shopping with someone else?? LOL
Reviewer: ChangVang218 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 9: Breakfast
LOL!
That was awesome. Alice's line, "Are you cheating on me?" made me start laughing, and my brother had to come over to see what I was laughing at.
And I love how Rosalie and Alice met. That was great. :)
Update soon, please!
Reviewer: Bopstar (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 9: Breakfast
HA
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 9: Breakfast
Lol. that was a great reaction from Alice and Rosalie when they met each other. I can totally see that. Great writing,
Jace
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 9: Breakfast
ROTFLMBO!!!!!!!! this chapter was AWSOME! Soooo funny. "Bella are you cheating on me" S o funny Great job!
Reviewer: Ljchurch21 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 9: Breakfast
awww cute
Reviewer: right2write (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 8: Pantry
Very funny loved it!
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