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Reviewer: helenareject (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2020 11:27 AM · On: Epilogue

I loved this. Very true to the characters.

Reviewer: helenareject (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 03:54 PM · On: The Rising of the Sun

This is good :D

Reviewer: Squirt (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 05:03 AM · On: Epilogue

I think Edward is by far the most compelling character of the saga and I enjoyed your window into his thoughts and his "soul". Well done!

Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 04:26 AM · On: Epilogue

W.O.W. !

Reviewer: twilightcrazy4evr (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 07:00 PM · On: Beginning of the Night

I absolutely LOVE your story! it's so beautiful and i can honestly believe that this would go through Edward's mind. You're a terrific writer! can't wait to finish the story!

  xoxo

<3 Katie

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Epilogue

i like your interpretation

Reviewer: xxleoniexx (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 04:21 AM · On: Epilogue

All of it was totally awesome, every single chapter! It made me laugh, cry, wish and hope. Its everything i imagined hed be thinking and feeling, and more! Thank you for writing something truly beautiful, and inspiring me to never settle until i find my edward cullen ( who shockingly- yeah right- is exactly like mr edward cullen himself) x

Reviewer: Carlisle060 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Epilogue

so cuteee :)

Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Epilogue

Thanks for writing this - it was beautiful!

Reviewer: twilightjunebug (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 05:20 PM · On: The Loving Breeze

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am wiping tears right now. Loved it. I could actually feel his angst at what he had done. But truly loved the ending. Looking forward to see more from you. I read alot on the FF site also. I think it is awsome that she has no clue because he is the same way. Would like to see some Eclipse work out of you. Like the scene where she kisses Jacob but runs to Edward.Just a suggestion.

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Epilogue

amazing i will put you on my author fav

it was very good i always wanted to know what happened during that time

so thats why i chose to read this

well until next time

mbellaandedwardm

Reviewer: ROTCchicq (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 04:11 PM · On: The Loving Breeze

I think my fiancée just owned me.  Love this line!

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Epilogue

This really was beautiful. Great writing! :)

*hugs*
Joan

Reviewer: AllieH123 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Epilogue

Beautiful and breathtaking

Reviewer: AllieH123 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 09:35 AM · On: The Loving Breeze

I love inner cocky Edward. He makes me smile :)

Reviewer: AllieH123 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Storm of the Day

I LOVED this chapter! This was my favorite part of New Moon. I think some of Edward and Bella's best conversations happened in this chapter and you did a fantastic job bringing Edward's POV to us. Well done!

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 06:38 AM · On: The Loving Breeze

I love Bella in this scene ... she completely wraps both men in her life around her little finger ... You go Girl!

I smiled  at Edward ... such a sweety really.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Epilogue

You did such a beautiful job with Edward's voice this whole story!  I especially like your last paragraphs this chapter, I love how absolutely sure he is in their love for each other.  Great writing!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Epilogue

great ending

Reviewer: mommakat (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Epilogue

Thank you for sharing your gift of writing!  I thought you did a wonderful job with both your storyline and Edward's POV.  I'll be watching for future stories.

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Epilogue

Nice ending.  Having them in the meadow.  It was awesome hearing Edward's thoughts and feelings during this period.  Also great to actually hear your interpretation of Jacob's thoughts that Edward relays to Bella.  Enjoyed the entire story.

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 11:27 AM · On: The Loving Breeze

Wonderful to see the return to Forks through Edward's mind. The boy sure does think a lot.  But it is great to see Bella outwit him.  Bella does have Edward wrapped around her little finger, too bad she doesn't know it yet.  She doesn't truly learn until she uses "Please" in 'Eclipse'.  New idea of getting Edward's frustrations trying to explain why he left and why he will never leave again.  Along with trying to convince Bella that she is awake.  Bella can sure be stubborn at times.  Most times actually.  You have handled Edward's thoughts and opinions very well.  Gives a new slant on Stephanie Meyer's "New Moon" version.

Reviewer: mommakat (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 01:44 PM · On: The Loving Breeze

WOW!  I just read all 5 chapters and they were wonderful. You have a gift for writing and I thank you for sharing it with us!

Reviewer: WA1270 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 12:29 PM · On: The Loving Breeze

Great story. Are you planning on any more for this??
You did a great with the Edward's point of view. I like it.
Thank You

Reviewer: rgb (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 04:05 PM · On: The Loving Breeze

Well done!  Sometimes you just want to smack then both for being so stubborn, but that is part of their charm.  Keep it going.

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