What s guy, showing up at 3 am to tell her he misses how she folds clothes and picks up after him.  DG, he needs to add a little something else to his game if he wants to win the girl back.  lol.  

The get to know you phase and first kiss B/J share is very sweet.  Like James, I was glad Edward saw it.  However, there may have been a little backfire there if he was out to impress Bella by exchanging words with Edward. I don't know that B/E can ever become what they were but I do look forward to how Edward is going to possibly win her back.  Then again I think most of us have that one person we could let back in.  :)

Coffee with the girls was fun.  Lovin your Laurent!  Jame's call was quite cute but there was that moent when he covers the mouthpiece that set off a flag.  (You know you've read too much ff when, right?!!)  On the other hand our new friend Laurent was not concerned so who am I to grasp at straws.  It should prove interesting to hear what he has to say once he meets James in person.

I love it! Can't wait to read more :)

LOL  Cute!  Can't wait for more!  :)

Author's Response:

Yay! You reviewed again!

As soon as i have my latest chapter proofed and made sure it makes sense, i'll have it up!

Good lord I love how tough she is!  SO proud...wish I could have been that smart! *puffs out chest for Bella's awesome attitude*

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading my humble little story. I'm so glad that you like tough Bella, she's the side of me that i wish came out more often.

Thanks so much for your review, it means the world to me!

You've got me...idk what's going to happen next.  LOL  Loves!!

Author's Response:

Thanks! you're so sweet! I can't wait for you guys to find out what happens next too!

I'm glad she is going to Alice's for a few days. I hope Edward doesn't do anything crazy.

Author's Response:

Yeah, Alice can be a pretty safe person to run to, but i wouldn't expect Edward to go all buck wild because she went out of town. He knows there's something wrong with him and i'm pretty sure he wants to fix himself. Thanks for reading and reviewing, you rock!

Totally in tears!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! i like knowing that i'm doing a good job!

LOVE IT!! hehe 

I just hope the mystery man isn't Jacob

he irritates me to no end! D:<

Author's Response:

oh he's not. I don't like him much either!

I still don't know what to make of this story but I am going to stick it out.

I do wonder is this a Bella moves on story?  Not a Bella/Edward story? I can live with that but I always hope for them together.  On that note... a review.

I still find Edward's behavior confusing but I think so does he.  Is he really having some kind of a breakdown.  Why did he choose to treat Bella so badly - "falling in love" with someone else and kicking her out?  Even if things were going badly why has it taken him this long to realize that he treated her badly and feel remorse.

I look forward to finding out if James is a good guy for Bella - I have a hard time with Bella and anyone but Edward but if a story is good it is good.

Glad Edward took Bella's suggestion of getting help the right way and that she reopened the door for future communication.

My first suggestion to him - his relationship with Victoria doesn't seem to be a healthy one - he should end it right away and get some therapy to find out why he handled things all wrong and his life is a mess.

 

 

 

Author's Response:

Well said! I think that you will like what's coming in the future chapters :) Thanks for reviewing and sticking around. Btw, this is going to be a non-cannon story as far as BxE go. sorry.

argh last chapter up, oh no!

i hate edward so much, he's completely self-absorbed, narcisistic and selfish, and all the 'she's mine' bullshit wears so thin, especially when he said this: " I mean don’t get me wrong, she’s amazing, smart and beautiful, yet I just need someone who’s slightly crazy, spontaneous, and different"

WANKER

i'm maliciously glad that victoria sucks, coz he deserves it... i'm interested to see where you take this story, whether or not you intend to have edward and bella get back together, and if so, how you're going to depict edward's change from immature, stomach-turningly-selfish ass to someone we'd actually want bella to be with.

in the interim, i'm excited to see bella and edward have a proper talk, because i feel like it's yet to happen... i'm hoping that it happens soon.

this is just phenomenal: "Spare me the bullshit, screw boy! I already said it once, and I’ll say it again. If you don’t leave Bella to live her life, you will deal with me AND my tire iron.” everygirl needs a friend like that.

loved the story, every second of it!

love netra

Author's Response:

All i gotta say is... I seriously love your reviews, like every single one of them. You give me confidence in my writing and it makes me feel better! Your are awesome! Thanks for the reviews ;)

everytime bella owns edward, it gets better and better! *round of applause*

why the hell does he think he has the right to call her up and ask her questions about her life? what a .... UGH i'm running out of words to describe him

i loved alice's little display of hyperactivity re: the kissing, and found myself laughing out loud when she says that her precognition was no big deal hahah

loved it, asper usual

hahaha james' awkward message was absolutely adorable. i never normally trust or like james in most stories i read, but i find your one really sweet and disarming, maybe because he's not cocky and arrogant like alot of them are... this dorky, cute portrayal really helps me not feel like he's going to turn around and do something evil.

loved it

:D