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Reviews For Comfort--One Shot
Reviewer: angelrob (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

Sweet.

Reviewer: koko23cat (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

ah sweet x x



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

What a cute one shot! I love Alice and Jasper...



Author's Response:

I love Alice and Jasper too!  I'm glad you appreciated my interpretation of them.

Reviewer: Lillyme (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

I always wondered why nobody ever wrote about the ridiculous height difference between Alice and Jasper. At least someone should've mentioned it even if in passing!

Great fic. I loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I actually wrote about the height difference at the suggestion of someone else.  It was really fun to incorporate into a story, though, to show how it would affect their interactions.  Thanks for the review.  My apologies for the late response.  I just saw this.

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

The ending has made my eyes well up!! I actually feel like crying because of how perfect that was. Awww.. I just love it :)

Your one shots are amazing, I just love how you write Jasper and Alice so true to character.

Reviewer: jackley-love (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

aww that was so nice, it was a good pick me up after bad day.....LOVE IT!



Author's Response:

Yay!  I'm glad I could give you a pick-up on a rough day.

Reviewer: Twivamp (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

Awwwwwww...

Jasper does need some comfort here and there. I am a true Alice/Jasper fan. You caught their relationship so perfectly here. I really enjoyed this story. It was so sweet.

~Twivamp :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind review.  This story was really fun to write, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Rorylondra (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

YOU CAPTURE THEIR RELATIONSHIP AND LOVE PERFECTLY.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: Auna (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh, I absolutely adore this fic!  You brought tears to my eyes!!  Well done.  Beautiful.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm glad my story moved you.  I appreciate the feedback.

Reviewer: WriterMerrin (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh, how touching.  Very beautiful.  Great descriptions.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: OXfacficaddictXO (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

aww!! i read this with my friend the other day and we loved it!! s i had to find it today and review... it was adorable!!



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you.  I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.  Thanks for taking the time to come back and find the story to comment.

Reviewer: Noodles (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

That was so sweet. I like it. A lot.



Author's Response:

This one was just a little bit of comfort to make us all smile.  There is angst even in my comfort, but I had to give Jasper something to make him feel better.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Thank you for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: helewisetran (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

beautiful



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I appreciate the comment.

Reviewer: catarinajones (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

AWWWW!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  That's exactly the response I was going for.  Thank you for commenting.

Reviewer: Black-Vampire (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

aww



Author's Response:

Thank you for commenting.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

So sweet! great job

 



Author's Response:

Awww.  Thank you.  I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Kameosis (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

A nice glimpse into Jazz and Al personal life, besides Esme and Carlilse I think they are the most fascinating Cullen couple



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Alice/Jasper are my favorite by far.  I'm glad you enjoyed my little story of their time together.  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Jaina 12 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

Aww, that's so sweet.  I love the fluff!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I don't normally write fluff, but I simply had to this time.  Jasper needed some comfort.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: gogetter187 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

so sweet!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I appreciate the review.

Reviewer: Sunrae (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love your jasper one shots they are the best! This one was so sweet. I absolutly loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  I love writing Jasper one shots, so its' good that people enjoy them.  This one was just a little bit of cuteness I simply had to write.

Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

AWWWWWWWWWWWW



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Thanks so much for commenting.

Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

Aww!  What a perfect Alice and Jasper moment.  I loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I don't normally write fluff, but Jasper needed a little bit of comfort.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: lada_8 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

i definitely loved it. it's so great to see alice and jasper alone. I don't think SM gave us enough of the cullens as they are by themselves. You could make it longer . . . lol, or write more stuff from their point of view. You seem to really catch their love and Jasper's thoughts. How about writing when they first met, you would be good at that. 



Author's Response:

All of my stories are from Jasper's POV, and I have a few. I'm gradually posting more and more of them here.  So don't worry, there will definitely be lots of Alice/Jasper from me.  This one was so short because I wrote it as a little break from a very lengthy piece I'm writing.  That story, a long chaptered fic, is the story of Jasper's journey from Maria to metting Alice and finally finding and accepting love.  You'll definitely get to the see the Alice/Jasper meeting in it.  Keep an eye out for it.  I just have to get up the nerve to submit the first chapter here.  The series is called "Incomplete Without You."

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

=D AWWWWWWWW!!

I definitely enjoyed that!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I thought we all could use some comfort and a smile.  I'm glad I got the aww reaction from you.  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Miss Erin Ashley (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was really sweet! I liked it a lot.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I write a lot of serious and angsty stories, but I just wanted to give Jasper some comfort for once.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Thank you very much for reviewing.

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