You know, I think it's worse that Jake and Tanya didn't sleep together. This means that it wasn't just some moment of passion. It also means that Jake was in control enough of himself to stop before hitting that last threshold. And he obviously didn't immediately regret his actions, since when she saw them they were relaxed, after the fact, still mostly naked, you know, and he was smiling and kissing her neck... I unashamedly love Jacob Black, but I don't approve his actions in this story. I'm glad that Bella found Edward at just the right time :)

i think that while bella wasnt a hundred percent wrong i still think that she should have been apologizing more then edward,...maybe he shouldnt have gone to tanya for the bella thing but she is like a sister...i am curious if they get over it if tanya will always be in bellas and edwards life

i cant believe she barely acknowledged the i love you as really anything,,,she is being a bitch,,,i am surprised edward puts up with her at all....still curious about what tanya and edward discussed that day,,,did she know of bella or no?

i am glad that he is helping her...her lack of self assurance is annoying sometimes like when she says she is damaged and not good enough for him,,,,,i mean she broke up with someone because it wasnt working...it doesnt mean she is damaged...the relationship was..,.but i get that alot of ppl are like that,...she is just fustrating

bella and edward have the same insecurities...he doesnt see how gorgeous and great he is and she doesnt see that about her self

i kind of wish charlie could just be the dad and didnt play the jake sympathy card....it kinda took the specialness of their relationship away...for once i just wanted him to do what he would have done if it was any other guy that hurt bella...i want to know what he would do if he heard what happened that night when edward saved her...he would not be so all about helping out jake then i bet

lol....loved it,..jake is annoying like a flea...however i see why he cheated,,,i mean come on bella

he obviously said like friends do because he thinks she still with jake...she is so clueless sometimes! 

i like alice she is great...i dont get why bella needs to stay with jake when she knows freely that she doesnt love him like she should anymore...staying with someone you dont love is wrong..and i dont mean for you but for them...they deserve to be with someone that loves them

I love awkward and insecure Edward.  Thanks for the great story!

This was a great story I really enjoyed it.

I would like to know where Edward was sitting at the diner? Possible right behind them and heard every word? I hope so!

Very cute story, I enjoyed it a lot.