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Reviews For Raven Song
Reviewer: molo (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2014 11:22 PM · On: Raven Song

So you decided to begin a workout plan and Zumba will be the 1 you've selected bridesmaid dress with sleeves . Following all it s enjoyable and it functions. Now you're most likely questioning what dancewear do I require to get a Zumba workout? You don t wish to put on workout evening dress with sleeves clothes that's also unflattering or that's also uncomfortable. Let s get going on what sort of dance clothes you'll require for the Zumba workouts. 1 from the initial elements you'll wish to think about when choosing your Zumba clothes will probably be comfort. 1

Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2011 07:06 PM · On: Raven Song

I NEED more!!!   Awesome story!

Reviewer: hissmiles (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Raven Song

Impressive. Do continue with it!

Reviewer: silentsilhouette (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 07:09 AM · On: Raven Song

HOOOOOT!!! i think it would be great if it were to be continued... :)

Reviewer: BlushingBeautyTheOnlyOne (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 11:56 PM · On: Raven Song



Reviewer: alice rules (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Raven Song

Ooh.. Spicy and smokin' hot! Absolutely love ur take on the shifters. Soo beautifully written too. Thanx for sharing!

Reviewer: Alizabeth Roc (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Raven Song

My measure of a good "love" scene is when it is so hot I forget to be embarassed. This story did that. I'm glad I found your story through the contest. Great writing and I can tell you had a good time doing it. I sure enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: ginaaaa (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Raven Song

I really think you should continue with this, it's amazing so far.

Reviewer: KimmieB (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Raven Song

I think you are on to something here.  I loved that it involved werewolves and a totally different universe.   I see a lot of potential in expanding this out beyond a one shot.  If you get the opportunity to expand it, which I hope you do, sign me up, I will be front row centre to read it!!!

Reviewer: Myheart (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Raven Song

um so what happened?

Reviewer: srocha (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Raven Song

good storie when are you going to finish it ?

Reviewer: Cresent Moon (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Raven Song


Reviewer: MathGoddess (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 05:39 AM · On: Raven Song

Very nice! I haven't read Original Fiction before, but you've made me believe in variety. I can't criticize anything because this is my first read, so... be happy with the praise!

*Worships the ground SassyGeminiMom walks on*

Reviewer: dellatwi (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Raven Song

great story keep it up Id read more thx

Reviewer: tamalady (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Raven Song

Would definitely like to read more!

Reviewer: Bexsta (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Raven Song

My gosh. This was brilliant and so creative! It was so much fun to read. Well done.

Gotta love them alphas who know how to smirk.

Reviewer: Webcat77 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Raven Song

I loved it, I can see why you won.  If you continue it, I think it would be a great story.

Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Raven Song

Awesome.  You most definitely need to expand this fic.

Great Job!  Congrats!


Reviewer: carrottop14 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Raven Song

really really good... please wright more.... cant wait to see what you come up with. more more more more please.



Author's Response:

There's definately a whole story and a government conspiracy that I didn't even have a chance to elude to here.  Thank you for your review and I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: nuttybrunette (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Raven Song

that was really fun, keep it up

Author's Response:

I am, thank you.  There's so much "more" back plot than 5000 words could give.

Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Raven Song


Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it and left a review.  It's been a wonderful ride.

Reviewer: darkchyld1980 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Raven Song

You should totally continue this story!!!! Love it! AND...I want to know what happens next!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I am.  I have a prologue which let's the reader into some of the backplot.  I've even thought about posting it here.  We'll see.

Reviewer: michstargazer (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Raven Song

Great story! Congrats!

Author's Response:

I appreciate the review and thanks for the compliment and congratulations.

Reviewer: yosely (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 12:37 AM · On: Raven Song

LOVE IT!!! please tell me that you are going to write some more of this story

Author's Response:

I already am writing more.  There's a lot more than just Raven/Wager and the trial.  So, so much more.

Reviewer: verysubtlegift (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Raven Song

Congrats on the contest.  Wonderful story, I especially liked the details at the beginning (lupB) and the idea of the whole thing being a scientific "discovery" .  It all feels very well thought out and planned.  The twist at the end was very good - makes me wonder where it would all go.  Also - I really liked their banter in the club, which I feel fit well with the guidelines of the contest.

Very nice!

Author's Response:

I love writing banter.  The science stuff just kind of came to me.  I didn't want my shifters to be secret but couldn't figure out at first how to get them public.  I guess that inspiration comes from years of playing tabletop role playing games. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I get so excited knowing that others like this story as much as I do.

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