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Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Take off
I wasn't sure when I read the description, but wow it sucked me in. Very compelling for a first chapter. I'd love to see where this is going. I can already see the coulda, wouda, shoulda saids since these two don't know each other and are misinterpreting signals and pauses. Can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: Not a very compelling description? :P I'm glad that my first chapter indicated the contrary. Chapter 2 is now up :) Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: kgostorm (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Full House
I like the story line. I would like to know what happens.
Author's Response: I'll try to update as soon as possible :)
Glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Rinna (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Full House
Can't wait for Edward to find Bella!!
Cute reference to the yellow porsche :)
Author's Response: hahaha kudos on catching that one ;)
Thanks!
Reviewer: Tweaker (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Full House
I LOVE this story. So well written, original... Your characters are lovely and realistic. I can't wait to read more, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Wow! Way to boost my ego lol! Thank you for all the compliments! :) I'm really glad you are enjoying yourself with it - it seems - as much as I do writing it :)
Eva.
Reviewer: amandasaurus (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Full House
I love it!
Update soon?
Author's Response: Thank you :) As soon as possible.
Reviewer: Sarahcini (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Full House
cuuuuute!
Author's Response: hehehehe :P I take it you liked it ;) ?
Reviewer: Rinna (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Full House
Discovered this story tonight and love it!! Can't wait for more...hint, hint :)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! And hint taken ;) Eva.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:04 PM · On: Full House
That was quite fun! I love how you show that Edward is just a regular guy in his family home (getting disproving looks from mom and dad), and pretty empty when he's outside in the world. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: :) Thank you for a wonderful review. Pleased to hear you are enjoying it :) Eva.
Reviewer: AndieLand (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Full House
I like the alternating POVs! And poor Edward - luckily he has a devious sister than can help him track Bella down. Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Glad to hear the alterning POVs are working in the story's -and my- advantage! :) Thank you for your review. Eva.
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 12:34 PM · On: Full House
Go Alice!
Author's Response: Hahahah thank God, for baby sisters, huh? ;)
Reviewer: Crises (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Take off
All I can say is, wow.
I love how you kept the Bella/Edward flight interaction amusing. Especially with their little argument lol. Teasing, cute Edward is just awesome =]
I can't wait for your next chapter. I have a feeling that either Bella will be making use of the little note Edward left for her, or he'll be looking up all the Swans in Seattle. I can't wait to find out!
Author's Response: :D Yay! Happy you liked it! Thank you for your review. Chapter 2 is now up :) Eva.
Reviewer: Hayles80 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Take off
Wonderful, when are you posting again? I can't wait.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I already have uploaded the next chapter. So once it is validated it should pop up.
Reviewer: Lanemyer (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Take off
Really really good. Gold Star!
Author's Response: :D thank you!
Reviewer: reedinthewind (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Take off
I really like this story! Good capture of the characterizations, and the plot is sweet. Please continue!
Author's Response: Thanks so much :)
Reviewer: marteloise (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 03:41 AM · On: Take off
Oh!! Love it! Can't wait to see how they will meet again!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: Lady of Shadows (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Take off
I like this! I can't wait to see where you go with this. Maybe Edward will mysteriously make his way to Bella's bookstore.
Author's Response: Maybe ;)
Glad you like!
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Take off
Wow! Amazing, funny, LONG first chapter (I really like long chapters, my reviews tend to ramble along as well, lol!) Snorted loud at Bella's bitching out the check-in staff, she's usually too shy for that. Her reaction at seeing Edward was so hilarious, loved their interaction during the flight. The way Bella held his hand and massaged his hair to confort him, so sensual while totally innocent.
This story is going to be so good, please update soon!
Author's Response: Kiitos! (Took a peak at your profile and noticed you were from Finland! Going there myself coming fall for half a year. Anyway...random addition lol). Your review put me in a very good mood! :D I am hyped up on coffee as I'm trying to salvage what is left of my exam that I have to take this evening and well...stress levels are soaring! But then I found this in my inbox and it put a smile on my face! SO thank you for your kind words and I am immensely happy you enjoyed it :)
Oh hello...ramble : I'm sorry. I tend to do that.
Näkemiin ;)
Eva
Reviewer: The_Reader (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Take off
SWOON! My, my, my that Bella Swan is one lucky lady to be speaking let alone sitting next to Edward Cullen! ahah Awesome read so far! I will be on the lookout for chapter two most definitely :D
Author's Response: hehehe I'm glad you got your swoon-fix out of this ;) thanks!
Reviewer: Lena (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Take off
I loved it.
I want more.
Brilliant pick-me-up.
HAIR! (but not Rob. Ewww.)
Author's Response: Thank you! More is coming up.
lol oh rob and his hair, he will never live that one down, will he?
Reviewer: Story_Unfolding (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Take off
Very nice opening! I would love to read more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! More coming up :)
Reviewer: darkchyld1980 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Take off
Are you going to write more? I am very much interested in reading more.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Take off
Wow, long chapter! I was really having fun with all the banter on the plane-can't wait for your next one!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! As for the chapter size... the rest of them won't be much shorter...in fact, this is the shortest one so far :P. I have no idea what came over me.
Reviewer: edwardsangelluv30 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Take off
I so love this story. It is slightly different. GOOD Job.
Author's Response: The concept isn't new. In that aspect I'm truly lacking originality. There are many stories evolving around a famoud Edward (at least on fanfiction.net), but I hope I can still give a spin to it. And it makes me very happy you are enjoying it :)
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Take off
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP !
this is adorable !
UPDATE !
...SOON !
Author's Response: Hahahahaha! Thanks! :P more is coming up, coming up!
Reviewer: queenboogie21 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Take off
Oh my gosh this story is so cute! I absolutely loved when Bella spilt her drink on Edward and tried to wipe it up. Lol. Awkward much? Anyways I can't wait to find out what happens next. Plz update soon and keep up the good work! :D
Author's Response: Lol. Yes... awkward indeed :P
I hope I will be able to keep up this good work you speak of :)
Thanks!
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