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Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole
Sweet. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole
Oh my god I in love with this story. I have to have more of it. Oh of course not to rush you or anything but *pleads* I need more!
Great writing!!
Jace
Author's Response: Hahahaha thank you for being such an avid reader and it does me well to know you are enjoying yourself with this as much as I seem to be enjoying writing it.
Eva
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole
LOL... Bella's nervousness is endearing, and Edward's just so sweet to spend literally hours in Bella's bookshop just to be with her. :D And the underlying chemistry? Priceless. This is getting really good - I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing this fic! More, please.
Author's Response: :D Yay! Happy happy happy that you enjoyed it :) And I am certainly glad you thought the chemistry was good. Sometimes people can't look past the awkwardness. Thank you for a wonderful first review on this chappie!
Eva
Reviewer: bitmorechaos (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Full House
more. now. please. <3
Author's Response: Can't speed up the validation process sorry lol. But am glad you enjoyed it :)
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Full House
I can't find out if they finally get together!! *squee!!*
jace
Author's Response: You can! :P You just have to keep reading! So happy you enjoyed what I have so far :)
Reviewer: Crista Irene (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Full House
This is awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thank you! happy you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: stargrl678 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Full House
oh I love it already!! i hope they see each other again soon!!!
Author's Response: Glad you did! thanks :)
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Full House
yay !
this is so cute .
...like I said before .
I'm so glad you updated when you did ,
I just got back from greece and my laptop got all screwy down there for some reason ,
but...YAY !
you updated !
update again.....SOON !
.Sophia.
Author's Response: Well...that's Greece for you. Wonderful scenery but obviously not very lappie friendly ;) Oh well...the Ancient Greeks did just fine without internet connection...only an indication how "far" we have come now (I would crawl up the walls without my lappie :P ). Goodness look at me rambling.
I hope you had a good time and I'm very glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thank you.
Eva
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Full House
what an enchanting start! looking forward to more!
love his assessment of himself -
Author's Response: :) Very glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:27 AM · On: Full House
Great plot, check. Well-written, check. Engaging, check. A little spelling errors here and there but it's a solid A++++! I can't wait to see what will happen next. Edward's behavior towards Lily was shocking though... hmmm.
The Cullen banter is fascinating, especially over Edward's shaving skills or lack thereof. :D Not everyone can be surgeon indeed. *LOL* More, please!
Author's Response: You make me blush. Thank you for all the compliments! My ego is plastered to the ceiling by now lol. As for the spelling errors : I hope they are not too profound. I shall re-read it again. English is my third language, hence the occasional slip. Not that that is much of an excuse. I guess when one stares at a page long enough everything looks the same and spellcheck is halfassed at best :p. However it might be, I apologise.
As for Edward and Lily... the guy got carried away. They will make up. ;)
I am so very glad you enjoyed this! :)
Kind regards,
Eva
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Full House
I'm really liking your story! I love how long they are also! I really feel like I'm getting into the story. Can't wait to see how Alice helps Edward find Bella!
Kathy M.
Author's Response: So very glad you enjoyed it :)
Reviewer: clumsy like bella (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Full House
What a lovely story, I'm still completely absorbed by your writing! Looking forward to Alice tracking Bella down, and I really hope Edward buys Lily a nice present to make up for being so mean :-)
Author's Response: He has been kinda mean, hasn't he :P They will kiss and make up. I promise :) Glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: vampyrgroupie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Full House
Your writing has a nice flow and your characters are very appealing and real. I also liked that you did not rehash the first scene as you alternated POV, but rather simply referenced some of the feelings instead; I really prefer to get on the with action. The thought of Edward as ANY Jane Austen hero is completely swoon-worthy, by the way! Your story has me very intrigued and I look forward to future chapters.Thanks for writing so well.
Author's Response: Thank you for your encouraging and kind words! And I do fully agree, Edward as ANY Jane Austen hero is swoon-worthy. I hope I can keep this story read-worthy :)
Eva
Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Take off
Awesome, awwwesome start! I cannot wait to read more!! :D
Author's Response: :D hahaha! Well chapter 2 is up ;)
Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: Tulips at Twilight (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Full House
Loved it. Poor Edward and his phone. At least Alice is smart enough to know that you can google someone and get their information. Bella probably has a web site for her bookstore that will at least give her address. Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Edward lost his brain in the heat of the moment :P Oh what are sisters for, if not to remind frazzled brothers about the wonders of the technological age :) Happy happy that you enjoyed it! Thank you for reviewing.
Eva
Reviewer: graceisgone (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Full House
this story is fantastic so far!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks :)
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Full House
Oh good! Alice + Edward + the internet = How To Find Bella!
Can't wait....wonder if Edward will just kinda show up at the bookstore. Won't Bella be surprised!
Author's Response: Hehehe you might be on to something ;)
Glad you liked it! :D
Reviewer: bspest04 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Full House
oh, i really like this story so far! Please keep updating as fast as you can! YOu're a great story teller!
Author's Response: Thank you! As for the updating it is partly up to the betas :P But I am trying! I am trying!
Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Full House
I like the glimpse of Edward settling back in with his family, and though he overreacted to the phone washing, it was a cute moment. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Happy you enjoyed it :) Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: mysteryink (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Full House
Oh man. I love this story! You are doing a simply wonderful job. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful compliment :) More is to come soon! Eva.
Reviewer: Djanga (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Full House
I really like it, and hope there's more to come soon, :)
Author's Response: :) Thanks! And yes, there is more coming soon
Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Full House
loved it great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you :):)
Reviewer: deb33 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Full House
Oooh fun story! More please.
Author's Response: hahaha more coming up! Glad you enjoyed it ;)
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Full House
aww, so cute.. can i have more?
Author's Response: hehehe yes, more coming up! thank you for reviewing :)
Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Full House
Awwww, Edward in love, yea!
Too cute! I' can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: hahahah perhaps not in love just yet, but certainly hooked :P
Thank you for your review!
Eva
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