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Reviews For On Our Way
Reviewer: stargrl678 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

More more more!! I love it and I can't wait for more!! I hope that they are able to actually go out on a date soon!!



Author's Response:

Haha! Very happy you enjoyed it! They will get their date! I promise! :)

Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

I do hope these two can get it together and make it work. They're good together. I can't remember how far off Alice's party is . . . maybe if they've managed a date or two beforehand Bella could go with him to the party. It would be amedia circus but would show her he really likes her if he's willing to go public. And I think he really likes her - so upset when he looses her call and almost nervous asking her out. Eventually he's going to have to bust out the male version of "I'm just a girl standing in front of a boy speech from Notting Hill" ;)



Author's Response:

Hahahaha! You know...I thought about Notting Hill just today ;) I never noticed that the two match so much lol.

Happy you enjoyed it! :)

Eva

Reviewer: redvampee (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

I'm totally hooked so please keep to story moving along! Love the character development...can't wait for move. Alice is great...can't wait for Edward to figure out about Jasper :)

Author's Response:

Hahaha I'm trying to move it along! So far so good, no? Can't really help the validation periods and shooting out 20 pages takes a little time ;)

Very happy you enjoyed it! :)

Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

interesting start..... looking forward to seeing where it goes!



Author's Response:

Hopefully it will remain interesting throughout! Thank you :)

Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

I like it :)

Can't wiat to read more. I like Bellas cell phone LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) More is coming up.

PS. I don't want to hear one bad word about Bella's cell phone! :P

Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

haha ,

this was just blueberrie sweet !

please update !



Author's Response:

If you would only know, how much I am craving a blueberry muffin right now... *Sigh*

I'm glad you once again enjoyed it.

Thanks

Eva

Reviewer: michi77hp (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

ohh...gosh....love it soo much...pls update soon



Author's Response:

thanks!!! :) working on it

Reviewer: darkchyld1980 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

Loved the banter between our two favorite character! Love the long chapters too!

can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

That makes me very happy :) As for the long chapters...they don't feel that long when I type them...but they are...odd *lol*.

Thank you :)

Reviewer: The_Reader (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 03:16 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

Edward is so gallant and charming!

He's totally pushing my buttons as well!

Bravo on your third installment! :D



Author's Response:

Hehehe. Glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 02:54 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

Im liking it- More Please!



Author's Response:

I'm glad! More coming up :)

Reviewer: VivianDarkbloom23 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 02:46 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

Swooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!

Books, coffee, and Edward . . . now *that's* a fantasy.



Author's Response:

ahahahah! quite a nice image isn't it ;)

glad you enjoyed it!

eva

Reviewer: sauerkraut888 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 02:37 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

To be honest, I wasn't exactly sure what to expect when I started reading this story. But somehow halfway through the first chapter, I finally realized that I've stumbled across a real germ. Perhaps it had something to do with the fact that I was snorting and shrieking like a pig with tears streaming down my face from laughter... (Just hope my roommates didn't see me or I'll never hear the end of it... *sighs*)

So basically, this is one of the most hilarious fanfics I've ever come across (and that's quite a few I have to admit... hehe). I wholeheartedly hope that these two don't get together too soon, because I'd miss their weird antics too much... haha



Author's Response:

You are not the first person to tell me that my summary is not very inviting : Perhaps a hint I should do something about it. But it makes me the more happy that the story was capable to convince you otherwise!!!

Glad I put a smile on your face ;)

As for them getting together...the antics don't have to end there :P

Thank you!
Kind regards

Eva

Reviewer: CandaceC (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

Just came across this story today and absolutely love it! I enjoy seeing both Edward and Bella nervous and look forward to see seeing through their interactions that they will grow more comfortable with one another. Keep up the good work and look forward to the next chapter!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :) Positive feedback like this makes me a very happy camper. Bear with me through the awkwardness lol.
Eva

Reviewer: allygator1666 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 01:09 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

Great chapter, really enjoying this story! Update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you are enoying this. :)

Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

I love this story! Can't wait for more:D Hurry!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) More coming up...

Reviewer: Belladonna75 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 11:38 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

I'm thoroughly enjoying this story!  Can't wait to see what these two do next!  Excellent job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

That was great!  Bella doesn't know which way is up!  I hope Edward has a better sense of direction, because I am dying for them to go on a date!



Author's Response:

Hahah LOVE your phrasing. Wish I'd come up with it myself. :P
Glad you are enjoying it so much!!!
And they will, they will get their date ;) Patience

Thank you,

Eva

Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

Yeah!  He found her!  So.....Bella, find the first free night you've got and CALL THE MAN AND MAKE PLANS!!!  NOW!!!



Author's Response:

hahahah! They will get their date, I promise :P

Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

Please, again again, MORE!!! LOL, i just really really like your story, it's so good and it's so satisfying, I love it!

Please please update SOON, this is offiialy my fave fic now ;D



Author's Response:

Wow! That's quite a compliment! Glad you like it so much! :D

Reviewer: hmonster4 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Take off

TB reco'd this - it's so sweet, I'm really enjoying it!  I love seeing the all wonderful E as having flaws and fears - it makes him all that much more appealing!

On to the next ch!



Author's Response:

He can't be perfect ;) He is human here after all :P
Do you happen to be the person that is my only hope at grammatical conquest?

Thanks :)

Eva

Reviewer: geek_chic (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

am loving this! hope to see more soon



Author's Response:

Thank you! :] More coming up...

Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

Loved this chapter.  It shows Bella's uncertainty and Edward's shyness well.  Good job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Positive feedback makes me smile like the Cheshire cat :D

Reviewer: wishful19 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

I love the flow of the story.  Hope you update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you! That's great to hear, especially since I keep jumping between POVs. :)

Reviewer: Dr Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

Love it so far... can't wait for Bella to meet the Cullens and I think that Edward owes his niece an apology. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! Edward and Lily will patch it up eventually ;)

Reviewer: samasa (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

so far i love this story!!! keep it coming!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

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