Wow.

That was one hell of a long ride you took us on. As usual, I printed the update and read it in bath - my fav place to be besides my bed since I'm pregnant- and girl, I don't mind the time in between updates, as long as you keep the good work up and me at the edge of my seat. I laughed out loud when reading about Bella's 5 hours preparation, I think I never needed more than an hour, so I really have no clue what she had to do :) But then again, I never was asked out by the hottest actor of the world so I cannot really compare.

So the thingie with Jasper and Edward is still not cleared up I see? Too bad that it ruined Edward's mood and maybe a bit of Alice's party as well. But the liplocking and snuggling close at the couch made it for me. And Edward finally had some sleep *squeeee* They have to do slumber parties more often :)

Hope real life is going good for you! *waves*

Author's Response:

Always so lovely to hear from you :) Very glad you enjoyed it. Alwyas good to hear someone is at the edge of their bath ;) 

Real life is meh, have a serious case of sniffles. Can't smell, can't taste and there are not enough tissues in the world. Wat wil je ook met did kutweer??? Argh *blows nose*

Hope all is well for you and baby!

I love how much [felt] like it occurred.

I love this story!!!

I think it would be hilarious if you had Bella and Edward just chiling in her apartment one day, not doing anything sexual, just hanging out eating pop corn, watching a movie, maybe playing a little twenty questions.  Then have Angela come home thinking Bella's just hanging out with some guy she hasen't met and flipping out when it's Edward Cullen!  It would be awkward, but extreamly comical for the readers!  Or, have Bella tape Edward reading the phone book for around an hour and post it on the Internet, just for when you want to fill up some space or add in a little fluff, it would be a pretty funny and random side story to see how many "hits" they could get and tease Angela after she finds out, or have her watch the video when she doesn't know yet. 

Sorry if this was a bit much to read, but I just love the story and my imagination gets away from me to try to do hilarious things with character mine or otherwise (such as Stephenie's...) 

Update soon! ;) E.

Author's Response:

Hahaha that's alright! It's lovely to know that you are enjoying yourself to the point that your imagination taps in! ;)

Thanks!

Great chapter!!!  I love this Edward!!!

Author's Response:

Having a little crush on him, too ;)

aww sweet.. the Jasper stuff intriguesme..hmm were they lovers ?

Author's Response:

What made you think that there were lovers? 

It was a fabulous first second encounter. Lol

Edward is very gentlemanly? Lol

Lets see how Alice makes magic tricks

Great chapter

Wonderful as always.  Keep up the great work.

Author's Response:

Thank you:) 

Another amazing chapter. I was so excited when I saw this tonight. I really love the interaction you have with these two and then the family in this one. The talk in the bathroom with Rose was perfect and just so Rosalie. You've done a good job keeping them true to character while bringing in new elements.

Author's Response:

:) Always great to see you back! Thank you and glad to hear you are still enjoying yourself!

Im really enjoying this story.  I like that you bring out the toumoil that Edward feels of bringing Bella in to "his world".  I imagine that is what celebrities think, to be recognized and flagged down by fans all the time must be exhausting.  I hope you post again soon!

Author's Response:

Lovely to hear you are having a good time reasing this :) It's never easy to get into the whole "what is it like to be famous" thing...for obviously I have zero experience with it.

 

Thank you!

 

Thanks for the laugh. I was almost crying from laughing so hard at the beginning

Author's Response:

Haha! De nada! Glad it coaxed a giggle or two out of you ;)

I love this story!!!  I can't wait to see what happens next!!!  Lovely!!!