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Reviewer: koolkat1825 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 01:36 PM · On: The Butcher
Wow. Really interested to see where this is going.
Reviewer: koolkat1825 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Returning Home
I like this story a lot so far. I completely believe it could be a darker version of New Moon.
Reviewer: koolkat1825 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Prologue
Beautifully heart-wrenching.
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 06:39 PM · On: The Butcher
Is she going to look for the Butcher so she can die? Or is she going to crack and copy him/her?
I'd love to see a fic where Bella goes nuts and violent. On Eddie's butt, that is.
Reviewer: addicttwilight2 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:25 AM · On: The Butcher
Hey, I'm so proud of you PinkRibbonScars! This is lovely. Keep writing. :)
Author's Response: OOH! Thank you! You don't know how much that means coming from you! And I will. Please stay tuned!
Reviewer: addicttwilight2 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Reining It Back In
Excellent! So Excellent!
Author's Response: Oh, stop it! I'm blushing! No really I am blushing! =]
Reviewer: addicttwilight2 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Returning Home
Absolutely fabulous! I'm so glad you wrote this!
Author's Response: Haha! Thank you!
Reviewer: addicttwilight2 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:22 AM · On: Prologue
Wow! So awesome!!!!
Author's Response: Omg! I'm sooo embarrassed! I didn't think that you would read any of my other stories! Thank you!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 07:40 AM · On: The Butcher
Looking forward to the next chapter! I'm enjoying the story. thanks for writing it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for returning to my story! Thanks for your review and thank you for reading it. Please stay tuned!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Returning Home
I'm really intrigued and can't wait to read more, but I have to be to work in 6 hours! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Haha! Thank you!
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 04:56 AM · On: The Butcher
Please don't give up on this story. Especially now that you've reined me in. It's depressing to see how badly Bella is suffering in this one, but I'm interested so please continue. Please?
Author's Response: I wont be giving up i promise! Thank you for the wonderful review. Stay tuned!
Reviewer: edwardbellaforever (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:42 AM · On: The Butcher
No! i refuse to be hung around in such suspense! You absolutely can not keep us waiting like this! I am addicted to this stuff and i need my portion now! :D
The story is dark and wicked and I love this Bella, even though it is OOC. Taking her heart out! Oh my God! Are you listening Edward? I hope he comes soon, before she does what she's planning, or in time to save her anyway!
Just one request: make the chapters a little bit longer- add a few more details and stuff if you can.
And needless to say: Update ASAP!
Author's Response: OMG! You are too much, haha! You will get your fix soon, I promise! And this chapter was extremely short this I know. I apologizes. The next chapter will have much detail and be longer. Stay tuned and please give me more reviews...it's sort of my addiction!
Reviewer: frol (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:30 PM · On: The Butcher
Came across this story tonight. Will be adding to my favorites and anxiously awaiting your updates. Interesting so far :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Next update should be up this weekend hopefully! Keep in touch!
Reviewer: sjm300 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Prologue
Oh my gosh!!! What did she do to herself? This is heartbreaking, very well written, though.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and compliments. Hope to hear more from you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and compliments. Hope to hear more from you!
Reviewer: Platinim13 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 06:45 PM · On: The Butcher
I love this seriously dark crazy Bella. Honestly, I'm not even that interested in Edward (gasp) right now, I want to know what CrazyBells will do next!
Author's Response: Ah! Haha! Don't forget poor Eddy! I also want to know what Bella will get herself into next! Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: glooblestroob (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Prologue
I like it. In a twisted sort of way.
This how I would think Bella would react in NM.
I'll keep reading.=)
Author's Response: It warms my bones to know that people thought Bella's reaction in NM was suttle. Thank you so much for your review and I hope to hear from you again!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Reining It Back In
I want them back together or I will cry!
Author's Response: awhz please dont cry! they will be back together soon! i promise!
Reviewer: edwardbellaforever (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Reining It Back In
This chapter reminds me of what Edward said in eclipse, " She's pretty inventive whe she wants something." It's evil, but very very true! I have the idea Bella knows what she's doing!
I know many people think suicidal stuff in fanfics is desperate, but Bella is nothing if not desperate. It is extreme, but I kind of like the idea because I wished it would happen in New Moon.
You've got me hooked! :)
Author's Response: OMGOSH! It does! Thanks for pointing that out, I will keep it in mind. && this is also how I saw Bella taking Edward's absence. I dont think that she would have wanted Jacob (no offense to any Jacob fans out there...). I think she would have been drivin to insantiy. Hence why I'm writing this, haha. Thank you so much and stay tuned!
Reviewer: angela90210 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Returning Home
i like it. im assuming bellas suicidal, but its good. sorry its short but its a little late where i am. but u should continue.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. You didnt have to write it but chose to and for that I am very grateful!
Reviewer: Cullenitis (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Reining It Back In
Okay....I'm STILL liking it! Keep it coming.
XOXO
~JO~
Author's Response: Haha thank you so much. The next chapter will be up very soon!
Reviewer: Cullenitis (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Returning Home
I DO like. Giving this a chance and reading on! Curious as to Bella's "plan".
XOXO
~JO~
Author's Response: Haha thnx!
Reviewer: Cullenitis (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Prologue
did i review this yet? Not sure. I just re-read since more chaps posted, and wanted to say......
Intrigued, and reading on....
XOXO
~JO~
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: edwardbellaforever (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 10:56 PM · On: Returning Home
Please do go ahead with the story! It has great potential.
It's very nice (in a twisted way, i suppose) to see bella struggling this way. There's not much to tell about the storyline for now , but I hope you're taking this somewhere good.
I wish Edward would come soon, though :(. I miss him.
Please dont give up!
Author's Response: Awhz... I miss him as well. The update is being still being processed.... I'm excited. And I'm not giving up. Thanks for the support!
Reviewer: serenity87 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Returning Home
I think you're doing a great job. You've got my attention if there will be some Edward in the coming chapters!!! =)
Author's Response: Edward's on the way! And thanks!
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Returning Home
I'm not sure where you're going with this, or exactly what her injuries are, but I wish you luck with this story. You're writing is decent, but watch the typos, OK? You also leave a word out of sentences here and there and that's distracting. If this is a fresh take on Edward leaving and then returning remorseful at his huge mistake then I'll keep reading. Good luck!
Author's Response: Thank you for the heads up and thank you.
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