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Reviewer: born2dance94 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

Woah. That was so super sad. Great job! Your writing is amazing, and you did an excellent job with the emotional aspects! :D

Author's Response: Thank you! You're an author I admire, so it's pretty cool you like this!

Reviewer: sladky_devotchka (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

That. was. sad. What else can i say? Seriously...just sad.

Author's Response:

Honey, you know you still love me, dontcha? Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

Holy cow! I am alittle lost? this was suppose to be after Volterra? Didn't Edward come back? Why did Alice tell her Edward found someone else? What happened?!!!! I need answers!!!

Author's Response: Ok, ok, I'll answer! Alice never saw Edward dying, he left at the airport because Bella 'faked a smile so he wouldn't see'. He thought she was happy, so went to the volturi to die. And they killed him. Bella doesn't know he's dead. That alright? Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: JAYS1 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very sad, tears in my eyes.

Author's Response:

I'm glsf you like it, thanks for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: KimberlyCullen (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this story.
What I liked the most was how you incorporated the lyrics to the song into the story so well.
Like how it ended her faking a smile like the end of the song.

You made me feel like I was feeling those exact emotions!
Great Job, keep it up :)

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot. After listening to that song around thirty times while writing, I'm glad I got the lyrics to fit well. I'm glad you liked the end, it was just so Bella-ish.

Thanks for such a nice review!


Reviewer: Anishaluvsu (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

Nice, I love that song, and this really makes it alive...thank you

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

xparawhorextwerdx (Can you believe I almost spelt that wrong?!?!)

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