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Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2013 10:42 AM · On: We Are Family
A very good story...I love Seth the most of them all! I liket the amount of detail you gave, enought to make the story intereting but not boged down with a day by day detail of each hour of their lives. Thank You - Xanath
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much :) I plan to rewrite it one day, and put in the detail I wanted it to have originally. Stay true to the same story, of course, just...fluff it. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 06:58 AM · On: We Are Family
awesome. simply awesome. Do you think Kimmi would give me her Teddy bear backpack? 'Cause I kinda want it...
Author's Response: Haha thank you so much! But probably not, she really loves her backpack :)
Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 12:56 AM · On: The Newcomer
They should so totally make a column in the paper called "Ask Alice". It would come in handy, I think. ~RPW
Author's Response: Haha it probably would.
Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 12:38 AM · On: The Peace Breaks
I'm trying really hard not to picture that scene in my head right now and IT'S NOT WORKING!! I don't know if I wanna cry or puke... maybe both... ~RPW
Author's Response: Yeah that scene tends to get a lot of reviews like this haha.
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 01:08 AM · On: The New Girl
Hey, Blood! I'm revisiting some of my old favs, and thought I'd say hi.
By the way, you went totally MIA! RL being too hard on you, dear?
Don't be a stranger. ^_^
Author's Response: Hey Costa! So great to hear from you :) I know I went all MIA on everyone, and I'm seriously sorry for it. As you guess, RL is getting in my way -.-
I plan to be up and writing again now that it's summer time. Maybe I can dig up some free time...or just write after midnight :p
Thanks for stopping by ^-^
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2011 07:14 AM · On: We Are Family
i loved ity as much as the first time i read it. honestly, it really helped me with some ideas of my own. i'm also writing a story where Seth imprints, but not on a vamp. on an 18 year old girl, who was raped, and got pregnant by her attacker. it's called Lexi's Gift. so, if ur interested, keep an eye out for it.
luvz u always, bri.
~GODBLESS~
Author's Response: It sounds good :) I'll deffinately keep an eye out for it
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 09:33 PM · On: We Are Family
About that nowhere to go with a sequel stuff...
So, ok, you have nothing for a new story focused on Seth and Kimmi. BUT, if you ever come with a Post-Breaking Dawn story involving the Cullens, you could use THESE Cullens, and of course Seth and Kimmi would be part of the family. This would be something close.
Just a thought. ;-)
Author's Response: Hm...interesting thought. I'll have to remember that for later :)
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 04:02 AM · On: We Are Family
Heh, heh! And here goes the theory of Imprinting being about reproduction through the window! :-)
I like Seth and Kimmi as a couple. Star-crossed, just like Bella and Edward. Maybe even more so, but if a Wolf was to fall in love with a vampire, this one was Seth! Should I mention he is my favourite Wolf?
I like the way Kimmi fitted well with the Cullens, how she was childishly happy playing with Emmet, and bonded with them all in general.
That thing about her eyes, changing color all of a sudden, was a peculiarity of hers, right? My guess is that they became red when she was under intense emotion. Like in that scene where Seth found her bear backpack under her bed. Am I right?
I have to admit that scene scared me. For a split second, I thought she was going to strike Seth. :-)
Kimmi's story begining was really sad. Specially the part about her grandma and the rape. Makes me understand her wish to become a full vampire. All the more reason why I'm glad the ending wasn't! :-)
No thanks to Allison, though. What a freak! To see her once best friend going nuts like that...
Now, about that thing of venom and Wolves...I know the story is over, but I want to share my thoughts, just for future reference.
It's my understanding that venom is only dangerous when it enters the blood stream. Bella and Edward kissed countless times, and she wasn't turned because of it. In the real world, indeed, I heard there are poisons that only have effect when in the blood, having no effect if ingested. So, the only care Seth and Kimmi should have while kissing is with her sharp teeth, which B&E had.
So, if you assume that as true, our couple won't have to stick to on-the-lips-only kissing. BUT, for safety reasons, I guess Seth should avoid sticking his tongue on her mouth, and let her do that. Heh, heh! *blush*
All in all, a enticing story, Blood_, I simply couldn't stop reading until the last chapter! :-D
Author's Response: I never liked that theory anyway, lol
I ADORE Seth Clearwater. He's just so...spunky, I guess. I mean it's awesome to just have someone be that happy all the time. And star-crossed lovers are my thing, tho in my original stories I'm not nearly this nice to them ha ha.
In the Cullen family, Emmett and Kimmi's relationship is probably my favorite. They're just so much freaking fun together. I have all kinds of little scences in my head that, sadly, never made it into this story.
Yes, you are right about her eyes. Originally they would switch to all kinds of colors, like a mood ring does. In the end I decided to just keep it more simple than that. I'm actually a really big fan of that scene because there's so much emotion in it that I wasn't even sure I could potray. I'm glad it scared you though, lol, the whole point was to make the readers unsure of what she would do.
Kimmi's backstory I knew before I really even decided to write it out. I knew her past would have to be heartbreaking, just to show why she's the way she is now. Allison is my little tragady, one of these days she'll have her very own story (along with Jace) so people can understand them better too.
Sharing you're thoughts is always a good thing, lol. And certiantly welcome. Sometimes I forget about the whole venom thing so I never really throught about it while I was writing this thing. Now I think about it more, lol. I guess Seth should avoid sticking his tongue in her mouth...not that he will or anything, LOL.
I'm really glad you liked the story ^-^ I miss it so much! If had somewhere more to take it I would write a sequal but I really don't...
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 03:30 PM · On: We Are Family
i want 2 know about the wedding!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!! lol!!!!!! i loved yhe whole story for the 2nd time! thanks SO much for the awsome story!
~GOD BLESS~
Author's Response: You know, I never actually thought about writing out the wedding...hmmm, I'll have to do that. Tell ya what, I'll write it out and put it in the Extras. So keep an eye out.
And thanks so much for thinkng it's good enough to read more than once :)
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Letting Go of the Past
awwwww. i knew they would get back 2gethet!!!!!
P.S. i HATE alison. lol
Author's Response: Lol, well of course!
I kinda like her, lol.
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 06:59 AM · On: The Peace Breaks
oh! my! gosh! this is my second time reading this, but it still hits me hard!
Author's Response: I know me too...and I wrote it, ha ha
Reviewer: seththenewjacob (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 06:41 PM · On: The Cullens
lovelovelove!
Author's Response: I'm glad :)
Reviewer: dhebabydoll (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 03:22 PM · On: We Are Family
just read this whole story
& i love it to bits & pieces!
i'm so mad about jace & alison
dying... & her not choosing to be
w/ drake... i understand the imprint
thing, but it would've been soo much
longer & more entertaining if she couldn't
let go of jace! LOL, i love when seth gets jealous..
& i wish there could've been an alternative ending for
alison... poor kimmie had to kill her own sister, after
said sister killed their own brother... it's so sad! but great story =]
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the story :) And honestly, even as the aurthor, Jace and Alison dying made me mad too. I really, really like them. So much that they have their very own story sitting somewhere in one of my folders. I might put it up later if I can...
Drake and Kimmi...honestly, they were a good couple way back when but there was always just something that didn't quite fit with them. They loved each other but somewhere in their mind they both knew that there was someone else out there who they could love more. Hence the reason why Kimmi ended up picking Seth. You're probably right though, it would've been more entertaining, lol.
I have to admit I like jealous Seth too, it's pretty funny. I couldn't wait to write that part when the story was still in progress.
I honestly never thought about an alternative ending for Alison. Once I realized that my story was talking on a plot instead of just being fluff I knew Alison would ned up dying. I was actually really sad to see her go though. Jace's death was actually spur of the moment. I really loved his character although the readers never really got to see it...
I'm glad you liked the story anyway. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :)
Reviewer: SuperK (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Bonfire
Lovely! Finally they're talking emotions! Can't wait to read Kimmis reaction! Way to go!
Author's Response: A new reader :) It's been awhile, lol. Glad you're liking it enough to review, and thanks for that :)
Reviewer: Saiyuo12 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 11:39 AM · On: We Are Family
Great story.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 05:02 PM · On: We Are Family
i liked that ending very much. it was short, sweet and gave me the filling of the sun slowly warming me up. starting from my toes and cheeks. i like kimmi because how you write her is so easy, yet complicated. it doesnt make sense but i dont know how else to explain it. a jar of honey for the writer and a slice of fresh cake. author's choice.
Author's Response: You know, honestly I was so afraid people would hate the last chapter but so far all I've gotten is good feedback, so I'm glad. I really had a hard time ending this fic. I love these charactors so much I just wanted to keep going and going. Only problem is that you can't continue something that obviously has nowhere else to go. It took me a long time to find the right ending. Lol, it doesn't make since but oddly enough I understand what you're saying. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Reviewer: myoung228 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 10:40 AM · On: We Are Family
Great story. The ending was wonderful. I really like that it showed their lives over centuries.
Author's Response: Thank you :) and I'm so glad you liked the ending. I never did very much, so I'm VERY glad you did lol. Thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: sleeplessnight (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Make a Wish
omg omg omg omg! i think this chapter. turn kimmis pov 2 seths pov.
<3vampgurl777
Author's Response: ha ha, I think you got a little excited in your typing there, what exactly do you mean?
Reviewer: sleeplessnight (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Soulmates
let me help. awsome.
<3vampgurl777
Author's Response: Thank you very much :)
Reviewer: sleeplessnight (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 06:03 PM · On: The Past Always Comes Back
i was thinking both.LOL
<3vampgurl777
Author's Response: Oh I'm good =) ha ha
Reviewer: sleeplessnight (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 05:11 PM · On: The Peace Breaks
hi. i am not sleeplessnight. i'm vampgurl777. i'm on the sisters acount. but i loved it.
<3vampgurl777
Author's Response: Hi vampgurl777, always nice to see new readers :) I'm glad you like the story :)
Reviewer: razza01 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:51 AM · On: The Cullens
love it
Author's Response: Glad to hear it :)
Reviewer: SkittleE (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 03:31 AM · On: We Are Family
That was the bestest most awesomest story about a vampire falling in love with a werewolf who imprinted on her I've ever read. You know it's good too because I usually use good grammer. To bad it had to end. Alison was creepy. An insane vampire, yikes. I would've liked to know why she killed Jace though. Or why she was pushed over the edge to go completely insane. I'm just glad I skipped the part with the dead people though. It sounded gross the way Seth threw up about it though.
Author's Response: Oh....my...gosh, are you serious? You should see me over here grinning like a complete idiot. I know, I was very dissapointed about ending it and I really don't think the last chapter did it justice. But my problem was that i had absolutely no place to take the story anymore.
Ha ha, Alison was creepy. In the beginning she was just a normal vampire but for some reason her charactor began to change in my mind, she became a new person and in this change she became insane. Her entire life story was laid out in front of me and I had to go with it. You're not the only person interested in it, I have another reviewer that would like to know more about Jace and his life. Perhaps soon I'll write a story dedicated to them, or maybe just a few one-shots in the Extras.
I was hoping I left enough warnings that people would decide rather or not to go on and read that part. Sometimes I have a twisted mind and really get into those bloody gross scenes, but I liked how it showed the human side of the wolves. (i.e, Seth getting sick over it) I'm glad you enjoyed the story though :)
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 08:14 PM · On: We Are Family
Bit of an anti climatic ending but it was nice.
Author's Response: yeah I am not a fan of the ending. Not at all. But I had nowhere else to take this story...I just needed to end it. (In all my writing years, which has been since elementary, I have never once managed to finish a chapter story. This was the first)
Reviewer: AmberGlow (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 07:40 AM · On: Letting Go of the Past
Really well written
Author's Response: thank you very much
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