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Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Resolve
I liked it. far better than the pregnancy thing... you are doing a great job!
Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 04:59 AM · On: Resolve
Yay! I finally got a chance to read this chapter. Even though I kind of know what the next chapter will be like. The twisted cliffhanger at the end, has me excited to read the next chapter.
Brie,
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Resolve
oh goodness gracious, i cant handle waiting for the next chapter, i need to know everything now! lolz. i think that you should finish writing the book that stephanie meyer stopped because it was leaked so that we can get a better view of edwards side of things. cause im not gonna lie, i knew that edward always made decisions in what he thought was in the best interest of bella, but he seemed kinda jerk-y, haha. but you bring this whole other view point to thier story that is really opening my eyes, and now instead of thinking "stop being so overdramatic, edward!", im thinking "wow, he really does care intensely and beats himself up way too much". its easier to care for a character when youre getting the story from thier view point. like when your friend has a fight w/thier signifigant other, than you pretty much always take thier side cause you only get half the story. how can you feel real sympathy for a person/character w/out getting thier point of view/opinion, you know? anywho-im half asleep so im sure im not making sense at this point. i just wanted to show my appreciation for your writing skills. you have real talent and skillful/beautiful writing thats really helping me get into edwards head and it feels real, like it came straight from sm's head. ok, im gonna try to sleep now cause ive gotta get up for work in 6 hours, oops! cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for brightening up my evening! Edward is a gift from the god for an emo writer like myself. And people seem to love his angst! It's fun to get in his head, how he overanalyzes and tries to do right, but often misses the mark. Jacob always seemed to get it right (although he overstepped the boundries often) and that just pissed Edward off so much cuz he tried so damn hard! But he is a good soul and that's why our hero wins in the end. I hope I continue to give insights into Edward's thinking that is believeable and interesting. So thanks so much for the nod that I am on the right track...
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Resolve
Well, I HOPE Edward thinks about changing her himself now!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Lotus (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Resolve
Yes, it was worth waiting for. This chapter was great! and how you ended...talking about cliff hanger...lol. Please update again soon! I can not wait!
Thank you for the great story!
Author's Response: Thank you. Edward's got more angst coming up -- but after another bedroom scene (yea!). I love the twist Alice gives -- it will make the upcoming scene more believeable when you know Edward's motivation... I'll update ASAP (cuz I can't wait to see how it turns out either!)
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Resolve
Nice insight into his morning after angst and motivations for the activities during the few days after. Really nice twist with Alice's call! Him being so sure he had to make the safe choice for both of them and then to find out his tactic is the absolute opposite makes me want to cheer for Bella! lol
Love what you do, as always!!! I did a little happy dance when I saw the update! :D
Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: windchime (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Resolve
You write very well and I'm enjoying the story so far. The twist has me intrigued and I look forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: nurseB (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Resolve
Oh how funny, I just read your response to my last comment. I take it your a nurse as well. We definitely have to stick together b/c there is not enough of us. I don't know how you have time for this, but I am so glad you MAKE time for it. I am sure it is a great stress reliever (which we need). You truly are a great author. Thanks for the entertainment, and I am excited for another bedroom scene, lol ;)
Author's Response: This is definately my new hobby. I love it. And you are right -- nursing fills you with so many emotions that, quite frankly, you just have to deal with on your own. This has been a wonderful outlet and I so thank SM for giving us characters with such depth of emotion. I love Harry Potter, but I just couldn't imagine writing fanfic on that. But Twilight -- to me it's all about the feelings. Perfect...
Thanks for the very high compliment. I am glad others enjoy my stories. It's more than I ever hoped for!
Reviewer: nurseB (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Resolve
Wow I really liked this chapter but wished it was longer. I almost feel as though I am readin Stephanie's writings. You really grasp the character's personalities when you speak thru them, the way she invented them anyways. I lvoe it so far :)
Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Resolve
Good stuff - can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Resolve
eek that Edward is often a complete prat but the bed scenes are well written
Author's Response: Prat -- a person who chatters foolishly? Thank you my Brit friend for expanding my vocab! Yes, he does over think and over analyze everything. I know I am on the right track with him when I feel like I am writing in circles (lol). I've got one more bedroom scene coming up (oooooh, I can't wait!). Then, I guess it's on with the preggers....
Reviewer: Miserae Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Resolve
Oh you have to keep going!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!
Author's Response: Thank you -- I can't believe how many readers just love Eddie angst!
Reviewer: nurseB (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Contradictions
Wow, I only stumbled upon your story and I am truly impressed. You have great attention to detail, and you keep it interesting. I really like hearing EPOV. You seem to really understand both their characters as Stephanie created them. Great Job, don't stop, it's good stuff, and of course I love the lemony parts!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The rest will be in EPOV though I still haven't decided how far to take it yet. I just submitted ch. 6 for validation, so come back soon for more...and let me know what you think...we nurses have to stick together!
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Contradictions
i so hope to see more of this story from you. you will be added to my very limited list of favorite authors. yay!
Author's Response: I am honored! Thank you and I hope to continue to meet your expectations!
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Consequences
please continue to write more, this is very good. i just cant say it enough-very well written! i dont enjoy having to read through 20 stories to get 1 good one, but it does make these good stories even better. maybe you should give some tips to others & save us readers the pain and suffering, hahaha
Author's Response: You are so funny! Sometimes I agonize if a chapter is any good, so it helps to get reviews like this one to know I am on the right track. I am really a novice writer, so thanks for the encouragement! I should have the next chapter up in a few days -- let me know if it measures up if you could... oh, and TMI means 'too much information' -- sorry about that...
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Finally
cant wait to keep reading! this is very well done
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Expectations
i cant wait to get to the end either! haha
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Forbidden Love
whats TMI?
Reviewer: Carlisle060 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Finally
i found it sweet when bella was caressing edward!!!!
so sweet :)
Author's Response: Me too! I am guessing by your sceen name that you are a Carlisle fan? If so check out my other stories -- Carlisle and Esme: How the Love Story Began and Through Their Eyes. They are both C&E centered. Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment!
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Consequences
GREAT!
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Expectations
Okay, okay, let us procede to the SEX!
Nicely done!
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Forbidden Love
This is how this scene should have been written.
Reviewer: RandomInsanity (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Contradictions
Love it! you know, this is one of the first BD fics i have read which is actually in character.
Author's Response: Thank you. I would never consider writing OOC, so it is helpful to know from others that I am staying true. Next chapter in a few weeks.
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Contradictions
I am so glad you continued the story. Please go on. Your writing is lovely! I love Edward's POV. His out pouring of emotions and thoughts. I also enjoy seeing his conversations with his brothers and especially with Carlisle. The relationship there has not been explored nearly enough.
Go on with this story ... puleeeeeeeeeeeeeease!
Author's Response: You are so kind! I love the guys in Twilight! You're right -- maybe we do need more on their relationship. Thanks for something to consider....
I will continue this story. It just takes me some time to plot it out. But I plan to work on it this week.... Hope to hear back from you when it's done...
Reviewer: hanitahanh (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Contradictions
so are there going to be anymore chapters? i need to know,so i can keep this story under my radar, checking often for updates.
Author's Response: Sorry if I wasn't clear on that matter. Yes, there will be more chapters. On the flip side, I have no idea where this story is taking me. At this time, I am planning on following thru with EPOV up until they leave the island.... Boy is Edward going to beat the crap out of himself when Bella reveals she's pregnant! What an angst-fest!
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