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Reviews For Honeymoon Suite
Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 05:40 PM · On: The Ties That Bind

I truly fall in love with this chapter. I really loved getting a peek at things from Alice and Jasper's pov's.

Until next time.

Ciao,

Brie

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Consequences

This is really your first fanfic? You must write in some other format. Your writing is amazing!

I see how being outside and in the water made things so much easier for both of them. Everything was great until they came inside.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your multiple reviews and very generous rating!  Chapters 1, 2, 3 were my first fanfic, but the further you go the more experience I gained by writing other fanfics.  So, I am hoping you will actually see an improvement!  I'd like to think my sex in the water is somewhat original among all the honeymoon fics (???).  Thanks again for the kind words and hope you enjoy the rest.  It's a roller coaster ride of Edward's emotions (the final chapter will be nothing but pure joy!!).

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 04:18 PM · On: Finally

This was great, but I was surprised that they stayed in the water all night. By the end of the chapter, though, it seemed very natural. Great job!

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Expectations

Chapter two is calling me on to chapter three. This is great! It is so fresh and feels so natural.

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Forbidden Love

This was a wonderful first chapter. I definately want to keep reading.

Reviewer: estee_shaun (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Relinquish

That was amazing, I couldn't think of a better way to have changed Bella!  Pure extasy!!!



Author's Response:

I have to admit, this was my favorite chapter.  I remember exactly where I was when I wrote it.  THIS was how I wish he could have changed her too.  The most romantic, smexy death ever!!

Reviewer: ejmroczek (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Paradise Found

I only wish I had known about your story when I came to the very disappointing honeymoon in the original book.  I thought the readers deserved a more explicit honeymoon as much as Bella.  Everyone needs a break from all the worry and agonizing in the books.

Very well done with just enough erotic without going too far.

Thanks for taking the time to write!



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review!  Actually, now I'm glad the honeymoon was such a let down -- I would have never put pen to paper and discovered fanfic!  Wow, never thought of it that way....  Thank you again for the kind words and for reading.

Reviewer: LCCullen (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Relinquish

That was beautiful. That is all. :) 



Author's Response:

That's enough!  So glad you like it so far!!

Reviewer: mugglesmith (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 05:44 PM · On: The Ties That Bind

This is really lovely.  I particularly like when you write from Edward's point of view.  I thoroughly enjoyed your take on Breaking Dawn and look forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  I appreciate you dropping a note.  I'm trying to get to the 'good stuff' as fast as I can!

Reviewer: carolinablonde (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 07:15 PM · On: The Ties That Bind

I started reading this today and couldn't stop until I finished all of the chapters written so far.  Your writing is excellent and I had to stop a couple of times because my computer screen kept getting blurry!  I really like seeing the story from the different points of view. 

Very much looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

You are very kind!  Thank you so much -- Ch. 20 is about 50% written -- I hope to finish this week.  Looking forward to hearing from you again.

Reviewer: Cathrine1604 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 02:26 PM · On: The Ties That Bind

I can't wait for the next chapter! This story is the best I've read yet! So much emotion, so much tension - love, pain. It's really captivating! I hope to see Edward supporting Bella at some point, and Rosalie a little less selfish (eventhough I know her intentions are 'mostly' right..). Please post soon! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your very kind review!  The growth of this story has surprised me!  I am in such a hurry to get to Edward hearing the baby, but have to bridge it along (but I am dying to get to it!!).  Rosalie, hmmm, I have tried to write her so that the reader can draw their own conclusions about her motives and character.  I also like leaving some things up to interpretation...  I have been slacking horribly on my collabs and might have to address those and my beta work first, but I will try to get the next chapter up as soon as I can.

Reviewer: kh64835 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 09:17 AM · On: The Ties That Bind

This chapter was so great! Its the nitty gritty and pure emotion that I love about your writing. The incorporation of Alice and Jasper was perfectly executed. We don't get hardly enough of them in the book and hearing their pov's is truly great. Also I can't wait to see what you create with Edward hearing the baby's mind for the first time...it will really be beautiful however you write it. Keep writing, your truly talented.  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for such a lovely review.  I get so happy when I hear my writing makes other happy (or, I guess, with the last few chapters, sad).  I'm gald you found Jazz and Alice satisfying -- I don't know if I really have connected with them like I have with C&E and B&E.  I'm ready for some happy too and will get to it ASAP (but hang on for that birth -- we're not out of the woods yet!!)

Reviewer: Danielle629 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 04:49 PM · On: The Ties That Bind

wow that was borderline painful!  i'm a huge jasper fan and edward telling him he owed him cut me :( but very well written, can't wait to continue reading.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for sending a review!  I am actually having fun writing the manipulative Edward we saw a glimpse of in Eclipse -- he really screwed with Jake several times -- this story has allowed me to take that trait up a few notches.  If anything, Edward is very controlling but masks it behind his good heart.  This is why I liked having Bella 'come of age' in these last few chapters.  She actually starts to take some control back.

Reviewer: RiceReader (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 10:53 AM · On: The Ties That Bind

This was fun. The APOV part was especially powerful. I like that Jasper was able to deny Edward's request, but am surprised that Edward brought up the debt. When Jasper tackled Edward, I thought maybe that Edward had chosen this way to die, but Jasper would not kill a brother. I too look forward to Edward's acceptance of the baby and the huge change that will have in his attitude. Do you have an estimate of how many more chapters, or an estimated time of posting (are we talking weeks or months)?



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review and saying this story is 'fun' was so cool! 

I have worked hard to bring everyone a very desperate Edward who is trying everything in his power to change the course of events.  Heck, I figured if he asked Jacob to father a baby with Bella, asking Jasper to manipulate her emotions was nothing -- and he tried to manipulate everyone he could.

I don't have a end date or number of chapters in mind as this story is writing itself as I go.  But I'm thinking maybe four to five more chapters....

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 08:38 PM · On: The Ties That Bind

Love it babes!  Eager to see what pics of Nessie people come up with!

Good job with the tough nut that is BurningMan!



Author's Response:

Well, I'm hoping folks start stopping by.  I thought a challenge would get more peeps to visit Isle Esme -- maybe not.  Ah, well, still having fun!  Thanks for the review and your dedication to this story!

Reviewer: solecito (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 03:41 PM · On: The Ties That Bind

WOW...WOW...THIS JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER THANK YOU. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response:

No, thank you!  I love reviews in all caps!  Update in a few weeks...

Reviewer: saroya (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 03:09 PM · On: The Ties That Bind

Please don't take too long for the next chapter.  I am dying to find out how Edward lead to the decision to ask for Jacob's help.

Poor edward, I cry for him.

 



Author's Response:

I know, I suck on my timeline -- but, I am always thinking in my head about this story.  Once I work out the majority of it, it goes on paper (yup, paper).  The a rewrite on the computer.  A few more days of mulling then off to prereader and beta.  But, I promise we have some happiness coming with the Edward-hearing-baby's-thoughts!!  And then lots of blood, a little angst and then finally happiness.  I love a HEA!!

I always thought WTF when Edward asked Jake to father a baby with Bella.  So in this story, I push him to make many desperate attempts at manipulating the circumstances and the people around him trying to 'save' Bella.  Now, it makes more sense what he asked Jake to do -- it was his final attempt to convince Bella to end the pregnancy and save her life -- and his.

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 01:48 PM · On: The Ties That Bind

Omg this family is being torn a part! I wish Bella would've know about everything that happened between all of them! I know they wouldn't want Bella to feel guilty though so that's probably why they never told her what happened while she was pregnant!

I'm so excited for Edward to hear the baby's thoughts!! Yay I'm so excited lol! I'm hoping for a huge chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the enthusiasm and the rating!  We share the excitement about the baby's thoughts.  But I am anxious about writing them so they are (more) believeable.  That's what takes me so long to write a chapter -- getting all the pieces in place.

Hope to hear from you again! 

Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 12:38 PM · On: The Ties That Bind

I was excited to see this had been updated!

Man, I felt my heart breaking this whole chapter! Alice has a way of describing her pain that just gets to you. I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

You are a very kind and generous reviewer!  Thanks for the words and rating.  Alice is tough for me to write -- that who 'pixie' thing, but I think she is just overwhelmed as is Jasper.  I do hope that came though.  Hope to hear from you again.

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 12:24 PM · On: The Ties That Bind

Edward's devastated state of mind has him asking the ultimate painful request to Jasper.  Alice and Jasper return home to the pain of the emotions in the house.  Edward wants Jasper to manipulate Bella's mind to terminate her pregnancy.  Jasper won't do it.  I'm surprised he didn't ask him to kill him after Bella's dies.  Alice will have a fit if she sees that decision in Edward's mind.  Charlie thinks Bella is ill and Carlisle is trying to provide her the nutrition she is missing.  The scream at the end if Bella with pain.  Another nail in Edward's mental stability coffin.  Looking forward to the chapters where Edward can hear the baby and the birth.



Author's Response:

Jazz certainly was put in the proverbial rock and a hard place!  And I'm with you -- how about some happiness for a while!  This story is like a roller coaster ride of ups and downs!

Reviewer: sissonsj01 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Consequences

I am new to fan fiction, in fact I didn't know such things existed.  I like many others have alsways wanted more detail of the honeymoon.  I wanted the adult version!  Just by chance by googling key words like Edwards point of view honeymoon I stumbled onto this story.  I am so pleased I did!  That chapter is just what I imagined was going on in Edward's head.  I cant wait to read the next chapters.  Thank you so much for filling in SM's gaps!



Author's Response:

I was so excited to read your review -- you were me just over a year ago!  I so wanted more on the honeymoon, I just started writing it and when I googled to see if anyone else had done the same I was blown away by this whole other world!!  I'm so happy you like my adult version -- I know the lemons are tame, but they seem in character for me.  I know there are more 'adult' versions out there....  Again, welcome to FF, HS and I look forward to hearing more from you!!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 09:54 AM · On: The Ties That Bind

that was gut-wrenching! I sobbed through the whole chapter!

I'm glad the angst is winding down for Edward & look forward to Edward hearing the baby's thoughts.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the awesome rating on this chapter!  And sorry I made ya cry!  I hope to have you in tears of joy by the end!!

Reviewer: bwen (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:56 AM · On: The Ties That Bind

Edward is scary as hell, the burning man is never an image I enjoy but it is needed for the story. His desperation to approach Jasper only affirms how far he has fallen into this balck hole. Edward never seems to see the galss as half full, but you gotta love him all the same.

The depth of despare you have conjured for Edward is painful to read and agonizing to imagine, so kudos for you writing ability!!! Now can we get onto some happier times???



Author's Response:

Bwen, thanks again for sticking with me through this story!  I hear you, I feel like my mind is starting to split with Edward's angst.  I am trying not to rush, but I want to get Jake over there, skip the whole wolf attack and get right to Edward hearing Nessie.  Since Jake ran out at that part, I am so thrilled to be able to write a WHOLE chapter on Bella and Edward's bliss -- I just hope I can write 'happy' as well as my 'angst'!!

Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:26 AM · On: The Ties That Bind

wow



Author's Response:

Thanks for the 'wow'.  Hope you enjoy the rest!!

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 03:04 AM · On: The Ties That Bind

how do you help such a desperate man?



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment on Honeymoon Suite, and oh, I know, Edward is so desperate he makes my brain hurt!  I am shocked how many readers really love the angst, but I am so ready for happy.

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