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Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 2

Bella cracks me up, but I have a feeling Edwards is going to have is own issues. I can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 2

Such a nice turn on Bella! I love this version of her and I'm completely interested to see where this story of E/B goes...

Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 2

Damn, that girl has such a low opinion of herself. Let's see who can help boost her up...

Reviewer: sg360girl (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hmmm, your Bella's complexes seem more complicated that simple esteem issues in most fics I see. Anyway, you've already got me hooked. Hope to see more soon.

I wonder if Edward was asking about her tonight?

Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

INteresting. Very interesting. I'd love to see where you go with this. :)

Reviewer: kms1979 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

I like this chapter so far. I'm curious though, does your Bella look different?

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is hilarious, I was cracking up the whole time i was reading.

Reviewer: avaesyn (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hahaha Bella pinching Emette's nipples. Crack up. This character pairing is interesting.. I like it! I like Bella's wit. Bring it on baby.

Reviewer: cummingsismyhomeboy (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hmm, a different version of insecure Bella, but an intriguing one without doubt! Though waiting for Edward to develop a personality - he isn't actually going to be a model is he?!

Reviewer: kg15 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was awesome! I love this Bella, can't wait fo the next chapter!

Reviewer: mysticsavantpixie58 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

i love this story. please continue it. it's awesome and funny.

Reviewer: justreadit (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

awwww! nice start!

Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

i like this, tho i think bella should ease up on the "i'm weird" stuff, she's constantly apologizing about it and mentioning it, like she's trying to force that image on edward rather than being it...tho the part where she met emmet and jasper was down right hilarious! omg this is awesome i can't wait for more =D

Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

I like it. I always appreciate a different take on the characters. and who doesn't like snarky sarchasm? Can't wait to read more of this.

Reviewer: chelleb (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is great - keep going!

Reviewer: hoobastank22 (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

Lol I like your Bella..

Reviewer: effward (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

This story is gonna be good. I can't wait until the next chapter!

Yea!

Reviewer: tobyxx1xx (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ok im gonna keep it simple, 1st chapter is amazing! keep em' coming!

love 'n' respect,

toby.

p.s im a girl : p

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