this is a good storyy, i like.

why is edward ignoring her?

Wow, pretty surreal description of Bella's injury.  Wonder why Edward is so upset with Bella?  Is he upset with Bella?  Is it something else entirely?

Eager reader wants to know...post update soon please...

Author's Response:

Oops. sorrry if I ddin't make it clear....he was more than a little turned on by our lovely bella ;D.....and trying to hide it.

Cruelty to fic readers! That cliffhanger is evil, my dear. Pure, unadulterated EVIL!

lol awww poor bella but i gotta admit, with all her drama bits and that phone call and gettin so freaked over emmett she is pretty funny

Yeah well, Emo doesn't really do it for me ... at all! Sorry!

Anyways, I like the fact that Bella truly is too stubborn for her own good - but there was this scene where Jasper goes out to eat with her and although she has already started to eat she just lets the food go to waste when she sees how much it costs? Can I pahlease say unreasonable and plain stupid? Yes, clearly Alice needs some flowers more than Bella needs food. I think the lack of it is getting to her ...

The end was soo funny, I think I scared everyone when I randomly started laughing (I was supposed to study ... oh well) Actually, thinking about it now, it's very sad; snuggling with the stone cold floor?! Like I said, the lack of food must be getting to her!

And now, I'm curiously waiting for an update and the list of her injuries ;)

 

Author's Response:

I'm glad it made you laugh! yeah, the idea IS that she needs food, and sleep, AND all the other stuff. I tried to take the "martyr" bella from the origional story and make her a little less detestable (sorry if you like her)

Thnaks for reading!

WHOA. That was very enjoyable to read. :) I love your premise. And how you introduced the characters. Oh, and your word choice. Haha, I love so many things about your writing that I can't list all of them.

Niiiice. I can't wait to read more!!! ;) Thanks for writing.

Already loving this! But god, it gave me a shock when it turned out Renealie wasn't an actual baby...

Edward trying to hide in those clothes made me laugh as well! Great job and please write more soon, I love your characters! xxx :)

haha, and i bet edward is the lead singer:P

ooooohhh likey!!!

update soon!

Me likey. I totally appreciate and love Bandward. I can picture him as part of a slightly one off, can't quite believe they're a fuelled by ramen, Band.

And Bella is destitue without being whiny, strong enough to deal with her problems-- But still with that looming feeling that her pride will be her downfall.

 

Update sooooooooon!

Author's Response:

thank you! i love when people leave me detailed reviews. yeah, for my edward, think The Academy Is, except with alot more talent and with a body to match William Beckett's face.....throw in a little Rob, a little Pure Edward hotness, and voila. there he is.

hey! I did like it - it caught my eye. I mean, usually I won't read a "random" story until it has at least 3 or so chapters, preferably around 10. So that I can actually see if it develops nicely and so on so forth. you know?

but there's something about this. And I'll say that there will continue to be something about this - but PLEASE don't feel bound by the character's roles in the books. I mean, a lot of the good stories I read are the ones that don't try and transplant the Twilight book into a different setting? Huh, I hope this isn't coming out as condescending - sorry if it does......

Poor badly dressed boy.

i like it, just please update soon!

ps: hahahaha, love the band's name