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Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2013 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

  Hey, Becky!  I was feeling nostalgic of some old favorites, so I'm rereading the Baby Sister.

  And, since I didn't comment it first time, let me say that I liked you jumping the whole birthday fiasco, going straight to what I like to call "the good part", Leia returning for Bella.

  Also, that she was conscientious enough to not presume anything.  She, at least, checked if Edward was right before intervening.  He should have done that, the arrogant fool.  But he evolved visibly along your story, which is another point in your favor.

  So, oh loved author of mine, any chance we will hear more about Leia, Adam & Co.?        ;)

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2012 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 9

I just realized that in the book they arrive in Italy on St. Marcus's Day. They don't here because it was the meadow scene that led to this. Is it sad that I said all of Aro's lines out loud in his voice after I read them the first time? And then I went over the origional scene from the movie in my head, with the voices and the movements... "Goodbye, my young friends!" -RPW

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2012 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 9

I knew that Leia would have to suffer through dinner with the Volturi as soon as Aro said to wait for Heidi... OMG poor Leia!

Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 15

Great continuation of the story, I love Adam and Sarah.  Now to get on to the next story!

Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 15

lol, i loved it, but why hasn't adam seen her yet??? HE NEEDS 2 SEE HER SO THAT HE CAN IMPRINT ON HER!!!!!!!!!

luvz u always, bri

~GODBLESS~

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 15

  Emmet.  Right.  So not good to give him fuel for his jokes! :)

  Bella still slight traumatized with Edward desertion, I see. :-/

  Ah, finally Leia will have her motorcycle ride! :)

  A ride that didn't end so well.  *shakes head to Alice*

  Hmm, with Leia's help, maybe Bella accepts Edward's ring sooner. :)

  Becky, I love your Leia-spiced version of Twilight.  I will read the next story soon.  Thank you! ;)

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 14

  I like Sarah, she seems to be willing to give her friend Leia and family the benefit of doubt, at least. :)

  Leia and Adam...Well, the series is not over yet. :)

  "Who said anything about discussing it? I hear the wolves heal pretty quick..."  Uh-oh, better keep an eye on Jazz if/when Adam is around. :-}

  Ok, now to the wrapping-up.

Next

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 13

  You know, I don't understand Rose.  For someone that never really wanted to be a vampire, who would supposedly give anything to be human again, she is the one in the family wich most despises them, specially Bella.  "I didn't know he would react like that. Over a human!"  Frankly, doesn't fit. :-|

  "I resisted the urge to slap my forehead and groan at Bella’s words."  I know the feeling. :)

  Leia intends not to tell Bella about what happened in Volterra?  Good luck with that. :)

  Ah, I wish the scene on the plane, with Alice promising Bella she would turn her herself, and in Leia's POV, was fully presented. :)

  Well, at least the plasma in the other room was spared this time.  :)

  Interesting.  Bella took the initiative about talking Edward to be the one this time. :)

  Eight years? I thought it was ten.

  Nice as always.  I mean, I always liked the Vote's scene.  Leia's influence and the preceding scenes just add up to that. :)

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 12

  I bet it is not with Leia Carlisle is angry.

  Yep, I was right. :)

  Looks like, within the whole family, only Leia gave Bella's feelings real credit.  Not even Carlisle;  I'm disappointed.  :-/

  Carlisle wasn't there;  I still think what Leia did was the best possible solution, under those circunstances.

 

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 11

  You misled us!  She didn't feed!

  I know she will be forever haunted by the memory of what she was forced to do, but I believe she followed the best possible option.  She is awesome!  :-)

  Leia really gives good advice.  She said everything we all wanted to tell him when he was being a moron.  Will Edward really listen? :-/

  Well, time to face the family.  But I don't think Carlisle will disappoint. :-|

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 10

  I'm on the verge of exploding here!  Will Leia...? 8-{

  Alec left her catatonic?  What happened?

  Oh!  She...*sigh*  Well, like Edward said, they were dead the instant they entered that room.  And maybe she did it faster than the Volturi would.  My worry is how much will it shake her confidence in her self-control. :(

  I hope she will be ok.  Eventually. :(

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 9

  Heh, heh!  Funny Leia. :)

  Hmm, it almost degenerated in a fight!  Good thing Aro snapped Jane out of it.

  Ouch!  Sorry Leia got her share, too.  Good thing this pain is just illusory! :-{

  I imagined the collector in Aro would be interested in Leia.  A blind vampire would be a interesting oddity in his 'shelf', if not particularly useful strategically. :)

  Funny Leia again.  I love her thought-comments! :)

  Heidi's return?  Blast!  I was hoping that the altered timing of their arrival in Volterra would spare Bella of THIS memory!  And, I suppose, Leia and the others too. :-{

  Leia waiting till Heidi returns?  With her 'fishing'?  Dinner-time entertainment? Crap!!!

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 8

  Yes, it's true, it's coming earlier.  Two weeks...It means it will not be Saint Marcus day, and the city will not be so crowded.

  Ah, Alice is going.  Good.  I don't think Leia could handle that alone. :)

  Oh, of course it couldn't be a nice overcast day!  Would make Edward's dramatic scene not so dramatic. :(

  Uh-oh!  What is Alice hiding from Leia?

  And to the audience we go, to have a pleasant chat with Aro and his minions. :(

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 7

  Oops!  Wolf-Adam in the picture! Our hero! :)

  Well, Sam continues to be prejudiced, but at least they didn't turn against Leia. :-|

  Oh, great, if it's not the cliff diving...

  But its always Rosalie that make the mess! |:(

  And, of course, Bella don't believe what Leia said about Edward.  Must think she just want prevent her from doing something final. :(

  Hmm, this time it will be only Leia and Bella?  Oh, no, no, no, this is not good!

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 6

  I see.  The werewolf problem are the sightnings around town and the missing hikers.  She thought it could be the Quileutes.

  I don't know if Jacob is being as biased toward the Cullens as in the books, despite all the hanging with Leia, or if he is just being forced to follow orders.  Good thing at least Sarah doesn't seem to hate her.  Maybe she can soften him later. :)

  And, of course, Leia and Bella still have Adam!  :-D

  But I see it's not enough to help Bella to stay whole. :(

  I bet the nomad is Victoria.  Or Laurent.  After all, the fact James died remains the same.:-|

  Taking Bella in the tracking expedition...Doesn't sound good!  Not that Leia have a better choice.

  Must be the Wolves that block Alice's vision.  I hope it's not a fight. :-|

  Well, at least Bella didn't face Laurent alone.  On the other hand, knowing her, she must be worried sick for Leia and Adam. :(

  Oops!  Leia is feisty!  That I want to see.  I just hope the Pack is willing to differentiate between the two when they come. :-|

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 5

  Whoa!  How didn't Leia see that happening?  Wasn't she looking through Adam's or Bella's eyes?  Well, sure not through his. :)

  He seems to be...enticed.  Am I seeing a new star-crossed affair in the horizon?   :-D

  Adam becoming a Wolf?  Hmm, that would make things even more interesting. X-D

  Leia stretching?  Just part of the charade, of course. :)

  Why is Bella in panic?

  Oh, right, the CD have Edward's music.  Too much for the poor thing! :(

  What?? She is disclosing things to Adam? :-o

  Oh, so this is why.  Well, except that he already figured it out. :)

  Werewolf problem?  What is she talking about exactly that made her reveal herself?

  No romance between then? *sigh* Oh, well, good thing this series isn't over yet, right? ;)

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 4

 I knew it!  Even Leia can't fix that hole completely. :(

  Geez, Edward would go berserk if he knew where Leia is now. :)

  Hmm, shouldn't Bella become dizzy with the smell of blood and all?

  Am I seeing things or Leia and Adam are becoming...closer?  I wonder if it will go anywhere when her premonition is fulfilled. :-|

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 3

As I said, Leia there, Bella in heaven. :)

  Well, Jacob came around after all.  Good thing Leia seems to be fine hanging with him.  And Jacob too.  I wonder if getting acquainted with Leia will make him a bit softer later, at least toward her.

  Whaaat?  Jacob have a girlfriend?  How did this happen?  Just because Leia stopped Bella from going to La Push with the bikes?  Hmm, I wonder if she will be Jacob's new imprint or if she will be just hurt later, when you-know-who arrives. :-)

  Uh-oh!  Leia made a serious slip with that armload of parts. :-|

  Sarah's brother, huh?  Well, looks like they made a new friend.  I wonder if he will bust Leia.  He seems to believe the legends more than Jacob.  :)

  I wonder how fine Bella really is.  Leia's presence sure makes her happier, and help her to cope, but she is not Edward.  I wonder if she believed Leia's assurances of his love for Bella. :-/

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 2

In Midnight Sun, there is a moment Edward realizes he is Bella's guardian vampire, if not angel.  Now, Leia took to herself the vacant position. :)

  Oh, right, her first hallucination with Edward.

  Alice is covering for her?  Good!  In fact, I always wondered why didn't she do what Leia is doing. :-/

  Oh, boy!  Now I understand what you said about things changing after this chapter.  Does it mean Jacob and Bella won't fix the bikes?  That Bella won't hang with Jacob?  If she will really reveal herself, I imagine Bella will be in heaven for seeing Leia.  Well, just one way to know.

Next

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

  I was asking myself how Leia did fare in that unfortunate party.  She is so young, after all.  Blessed Carlisle!  :-|

  One year tops?  A fairly accurate guess.  Edward, in New Moon, confessed to Bella he was about to go back to her, before the cliff dive.  Leia really knows him well. :)

  Yes, it's one of Edward's greatest flaws.  He always underestimated Bella.  At least until New Moon.

  New York?  Is the weather there suitable for them?

  Leia.  I love this girl!  Can't wait for her to begin to make the difference against Edward's foolish plan. :)

 

Reviewer: HBosher (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 13

PHOAH !!! Another amazing book ! I loved it, Leia fits in so perfectly ! My only regret is that you let her swear ( when she was on the stairs, the older brother comments were funny ) but it made her look slightly less innocent. But WOW your a great writer :)     H x

Reviewer: NONrealityrules (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

this is one of the best series i have read so far!!! 3 cheers for Liea going against edard and looking after bella :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. :) I'm glad you're enjoying.

Reviewer: mdnghtsn (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 7

I'm so glad you took out the Jacob/Bella romance - that is the only part of the Twilight saga I hated. I could have handled it if they found out they loved each other like brothed/sister when they kissed but the love triangle I hated. i am a diehard Team Edward fan too!



Author's Response:

Thank you. :) As much as I loved SM's stories, the triangle always irked me. My little sister actually still hasn't read the middle of New Moon. Heh. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

Reviewer: irishgirl23 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 12

Oh my gosh, my heart just broke for Leia! I felt like I was going to cry for the entire chapter.  Great job on this!



Author's Response:

Thank you. :) I hope you're enjoying the rest of the series, too.

Reviewer: Fadewind (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 15

nice ending - next up viki :) can't wait to see your take with Leia



Author's Response:

Thank you. :) I hope you like Turning Point too.

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