Hopefully she will have newborn strength and break is neck!!!!!

yeah!  I'm glad Bella got to come to terms with everything with James before going back to Edward, it really gave a sense of closure to the story; rather than her just running back into Edward's arms with no further thought of James

Since I'm loving your other story, Nothing Left to Lose so much, I decided I'd read this one too..I read it all in one day haha  Short and sweet and to the point, loved it!

And I can't believe it but I felt bad for James and hated what the Cullens did to him! I kinda think Bella should have been angry at them more, but that would have just dragged the angst out a few more chapters I think.

I laughed, I got close to crying, and yay for a happy (and hot!) ending! <3

hmmm. i like it. great job!

 

loved it! ,,, i was kinda mad at rose and jazz for killing james but still eddie and bella are together again yay!

This is way weird. It's totally creepy, the speed that Bella got over someone who loved and lived with her for six years and accepted another that she shyed away from for the same period of time. Also, the way that Edward believed Bella would just accept him: that's pig-headed.

I could come up with a lot more flaws in the plot, but it was good in the beginning. The story just kind of failed towards the much too hasty end.

that doesn't feel like the end to me they made up way to fast you can't get over stuff that fast you just can't!!!!!!!!!

I reall enjoyed this. I thought you had an interesting take on the side charaters, especially James. I thought the ending was a bit soon and perhaps slightly abrupt, but it's alright for a slightly open ending where you wonder how they will work through all the problems when they come up again (which it seems likely they will).

Anyway, great job.

 

I agree w/ you.  I mean, wasn't she jealous of Tayna at her own wedding?  And to have James plant that bug in her ear ealier (the will he want you like this bit), then to see Edward holding another woman, what was she to think?  Good job, dearest!  Kisses!

I love that you showed another side of Rose.  SM shortly shows that Rose has no hard feeling against Bella as a person (doesn't she say that she doesn't vote no b/c she doesn't object to Bella as a sister, only the choice to throw her life away?).  So often in fic, Rose is either a heartless bitch or Bella's new best friend (not really in character at all).  Kudos.

i cant believe you killed james . why , i love that pairing so much 

Great ending, but I thought that it might have been better if Bella said those last words, as Edward thought them?  Bella needing so much convincing that she was worth it, it would seem more likely for her realization to take hold.

Great sex scene!  HOT!!!  But then anything with Edward and Bella is usually hot!  I don't remember any sex scenes with James though.....was that on purpose????  I think!

Thank you so much for this, I really enjoyed it.

Pretty harsh on Bella, eh?  I'm hoping that James had some kind of control on her, maybe he had a talent too, and when he died, the spell was broken.  Well, I liked it!, too bad it's your story.  LOL

I'm sure Bella will come around to Edward, maybe with a last minor pang for James, maybe in a dream or something????