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Reviewer: kcullen (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 3
omg!!! this story is soooo exciting!!!please update soon!!!cant wait to read the rest!!! but please get bella back to edward soon!! and please dont write that bella and james did "it" cuz that wud be sooo sad for edward!!
Reviewer: broadwaydoll98 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2008 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 3
omg i love this story it's sooo good. update soon please, i can't wait to see what happens :]
Reviewer: gallantcorkscrews (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2008 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 3
Hmm. Loving this. Already a thick and bubbling plot, with lots of twists. I'm worried about Tanya's name on the list of characters, though. Edward's not going to run to her b/c he sees Bella with James, is he? Will Bella have to drink from people, since she is with James? I would admire the gumption, but wow, that's one hell of a tricky plotline to attempt.
Reviewer: x-stephanie-x (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2008 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 3
oooooooooo exciting stuff! well done and keep up the fab work! i can't wait to read more! - stephanie x =] p.s. i feel so sorry for poor victoria!
Reviewer: Reiko Katsura (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 3
AWESOME!!! AMAZINGLY AWESOME!!! This is incredible! Superb! Magnificent!! Ah~ I could list all the synonyms to the word "Great" and it still coulnd't be enough! I loved reading from James perspective... it was really interesting and entertaining. But thats not all! I love the whole JamesXBella couple! Not to say that I want them romantically involved... but their whole relationship is just fascinating!! I cant wait for your next installment of this story!! Ah~ So incredible! I dont mean to make you feel rushed... but please hurry! (lol)
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 3
Yay! A longer chapter! *beams* "The non-vegetarian variety... If anyone was capable of a stealthy escape from a dangerous bloodthirsty beast, it was not me. I would trip or bring unholy injuries upon myself before I even reached the door knob." *Giggle* My favorite part was the comment about the diet... But I had to add the other part as well. Hehe! 'Cause it's so true! =D "I had to die, and that… well, it sucked." It sounds just like Bella to be so... Bella-esque! I must say, you're doing a pretty good job expressing Bella's sarcastic humor... *giggle* Hmm... I wonder what he did... Hmm... I think that the way James talks about killing Bella is very clever... He never lies to her... She just misinterprets what he says... He never tells her that she's going to die, just that he's going to kill her. He never tells her that she'll stop breathing, only that her heart will stop beating. Clever. Ooh! I can't wait until the next chapter! I'll admit, you've got my attention!
Reviewer: Alice416 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 3
I hope James wasn't talking about killing Charlie! Although, if he was I couldn't blame you, I killed Charlie, along with half the Cullens in one of my fanfics, it's not validated yet though.
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 3
ooo...can't wait to see what happens next!!
Reviewer: fioredellaluna (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 3
Ooh! Keep writing! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: NoMoreThanUsual (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 3
Wow! Excellent premise and I love the story. Very well done! I'm biting my nails waiting for the next chapter! LOL
Reviewer: Alice416 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2008 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 2
I like James' pov better than the other possible ones. Everyone does Bella and Edward's pov, sometimes another of the cullens or quileutes, but hardly anyone ever does the "nomads" as the movie are calling them. I admire you for your use of POVing(I hope that made sense) Good job by the way, I think I forgot to say that before...
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2008 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 2
I really enjoyed reading James's POV; it was just as interesting as I had hoped... I'm glad that you explained his thought process... =D I also like the way that you weaved that little joke into the beginning. I also find it interesting that James regards biting Bella as a 'fasciinating experiment.' He's just barely beginning to think of her as a human -- not just his food. I think it'll be cool to see how his feelings for her develop. It'll be interesting to see him fall in love (if he does, but it seems like a definite maybe since it's a temporary Bella/James pairing). He only thought of Victoria as a business partner; it doesn't really seem like he's capable of love... But, I guess we'll find out, won't we? =P "Their eyes alone informed me of what they were: weak. Afraid to embrace their true nature. Socializing with the food!" I must say, that's my favorite line!
Reviewer: Forbidden_Freedom (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2008 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 2
This, as I said before, is amazing. Please, be one of those consistent writers. NOt necessarily who updates every week, but one who doesn't lose her story, seeing as it's so mindblowing. It has a LOT of potential. really. PLease vow to finish this. Don't be like me.
Reviewer: Forbidden_Freedom (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2008 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, this is extremely creative, with a wonderful start.
Reviewer: colourguardqueen (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2008 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 2
it was too short nd she cant be james' mate. i hope there is more. Beccas pov when she finally wakes up
Reviewer: dramaqueen192870 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2008 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 2
I think it would be fun to read Esme or Edward. Esme because it would be interesting to see what she thought of the fact a girl she hardly knew had sacraficed herself for her. Edward because he's so cute when he's mad! Please update soon! =)
Reviewer: Marigold (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2008 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
I am so stoked to see where you go with this. Update soon if you can, please! :)
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2008 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
When I read the summary, I said to myself, "Self, this is something you gotta see!" I am curious to see how you justify James's decision to change Bella -- instead of just killing her. When Edward met Bella, the scent was nearly too much for him; and Emmett's singer had no chance... And they were both "vegetarians"! I wonder why/how Jamess, a tracker/human hunter would resist... As I said, this intrigues me... =D Hmm... I was thinking... What if just tasting her was enough for him? What if his desire to hurt Edward overshadowed his hunger? Hmm... Am I close at all...? “She sang to him, and he took her to be his.”“She sang to him, and he took her to be his.” I really like this line... *grin* Very nice first chapter! It was fast-paced, but it didn't rush... Very nice! Can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: Alice416 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2008 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 1
I can't wait to see if Edward gets Bella back! not to mention where James is taking her. You're a great writer, please keep writing
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2008 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
oooo..... got me interested!!!
Reviewer: dramaqueen192870 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2008 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
WOW. That was sad but well written and interesting. Please update soon!
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2008 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow, amazing and very intreguing story. look forward to more, thanks for this!
Reviewer: Debussy_This (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2008 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, I like it. I'm really interested to see where this goes!!
Reviewer: Frivi (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2008 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow! That was really something. Can't wait to read more; I promise I'll leave a much longer review later. xD
Reviewer: Reiko Katsura (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2008 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was wonderful! I was completely absorbed with your story! I love this site so much because the fan fics are so well written that it feels as if it were part of the original series itself! Of course, I'm implying to your story, as well <3 Simply amazing! I canmt wait for the next chapter!
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