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Reviewer: Jenimafer (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 11
OOOOooo awesome chapter once again. Still a bit iffy on the whole james/bella thing, but ill get over it once edward comes back... He'll come back right?
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 11
This is peace?! Wow! I would say there is alot of emotional conflict in your story. Very good!
Reviewer: Hopelessly_Obsessed (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 11
OMG! I loooooved this chapter!!! Can't wait to see what happens! :D
Reviewer: Jacoblacklover (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 11
woah james will always be a creeper to me
Reviewer: twinut (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 11
I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon.
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 11
Great Chapter! James is sooooooooo bad. Love the way you write the characters! More please!
Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 11
oooh! I sense that something very important is going to happen very soon. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!! very GOOD!
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 11
Nice chapter! Disappointed that it wasn't what we thought it would be, but it was good non-the-less. Loving it! Can't wait for the next one though! Ready for some major drama!! I love drama in my fics. LOL ~Cat~
Reviewer: Momstheteacher (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 11
ok, Edward needs to show up soon. Nothing specifically against James, at least he actually goes for what he wants instead of brooding about it, but really Edward needs to step in. Nice writing
Reviewer: catvet1999 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 11
The quicker you get these out, the better!
Reviewer: Julie Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 11
And when will we be having the delightful action-filled chapter?? Love your story :)
Reviewer: gallantcorkscrews (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 11
thank you, i love seeing this. i cant wait to see bella's brain become unanchored as she is around edward again. can we get an edward p.o.v.? go to the forum! i made a post for this story.
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 11
This is one of my favorite fanfics. You write it so well. You've made James into a tolerable, complex character. I always relish the chance to read your updates. Keep up the fantastic work.
Reviewer: NoMoreThanUsual (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 11
Excellent chapter. So interesting to see James and Bella in this relationship. Your story is so completely original! I love it.
Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 11
Fantastic!
Reviewer: spaniard (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oh, this is torture! I'm only to chapter six and I have to go! This is amazing. You have a talent for suspense, and you are making me really feel for Edward. I'm so glad I check the recent updates today!
Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 11
hurry hurry hurry!
Reviewer: phantomwriter (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 10
Gah! Cliffhanger! Excellent story, I'm really enjoying it so far
Reviewer: phantomwriter (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 10
Gah! Cliffhanger! Excellent story, I'm really enjoying it so far
Reviewer: Bella126 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2008 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 1
Is it wrong that I'm enjoying James and Bella together since I'm a E/B Shipper?... Such a good story! I can't wait for more updates!
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2008 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 10
I am dieing for Bella to drop James. This is so painful to see. You are doing a great job with this story.
Reviewer: Dramatic (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2008 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 10
Hi i just want to say that im loving your story!Its a completely different take on twilight, so interesting, i actually felt sorry for James!Helps that i love the guy playing him in the movie, Cam is so fine! I have one request though, please dont have Bella just discard James when Edward finds her, hes been suprisingly good to her and i love that hes a changed man, so adorable!I love Edward dont get me wrong, who wouldnt, but please make him work for it, fight for her!So keep up the good work!I'll be waiting impatiently for the next chapter! Thanks :)
Reviewer: AsianAlice (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2008 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 10
awesome! I hope she doesnt run off with the Cullens right away, though. I actually like this James/Bella pairing. :D I hope we see more romantic scenes between James and Bella (but in the end, with Edward of course :D)
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2008 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 10
Just found your fic and read all 10 chapters. I really loved it until I read the chapter and found out Bella stayed with James for YEARS and ducked out every time one of the Cullens got close to them. It really made me mad, how stupid she was being. I honestly almost stopped reading right there, cuz while I can easily believe she would have run after seeing Edward holding Tanya, I can't believe that they wouldn't have actually gotten to her sooner (than years later), and it just seemed a little too OOC to me. *shrugs* Just my thoughts, but it's your fic, so however the characters are is how they are, whether we like it or not. LOL (No offense intended, I tend to ramble sometimes. lol) Anyway, I kept reading, and really enjoyed this chapter. Love that she flung herself into Emmett's arms, that made me smile. Can't wait to see what happens next with Jasper and Alice showing up. Can't wait to find out why Alice's visions have been all screwed up, and can't wait to see Bella and Edward reunited -somewhere down the road. LOL Keep it coming! :D
~Cat~
Reviewer: Julie Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2008 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 10
I am addicted to your story, I love how you evolved James to a vampire in love with Bella. I hope you can finish the next chapter soon! RL can get in FF way sometimes!
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