You have added so much to the dialogue of the book to make it that much better and more interesting. I love it!

I just finished your story and I loved every word of it.  I couldn’t wait to get to the end to see where your imagination was going to take us...and yet sad
because once I reached the end, it meant that there would be no more
chapters to look forward to.
 
When I first read the original Breaking Dawn, I was left so unsatisfied with it.  There was such a disconnect between Edward and Bella and so many
missing moments and unanswered questions throughout the entire book,
that it ended up (for me) being my least favorite of the entire series.
 
Through your writing and with your imagination, this book became so much
deeper, so much more satisfying.  You breathed life into each and every
person and they became flesh and blood, with their own histories, thoughts
and personalities.
 
Where once I felt kind of confused with so many names being only briefly
introduced, ... through your wonderfully detailed writing skills, I came to
know and understand and really like these secondary characters.
 
The tension with the Volturi and being able to get inside of their sinister
minds was like looking evil straight in the eye.  Getting to see what was
really going on made the drama being played out feel even more desperate
and more terrifying than I originally believed.
 
I don't know what your writing plans are for the future, but I do hope that at
some point you will consider tackling the first half of this book.  It would
make the reading experience so much more complete and fulfilling.  There
seemed (to me) to be so many missed opportunities and so many
unanswered questions in the first half too.  I guess I really want this book to
be so much more than it was, and I know that you have the talent and
imagination to do the entire story and your readers justice.
 
Lastly, I’ve read quite a few fan fiction stories, and I want you to know that
this is by far the very best that I have found.  Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us and for making the second half of the book a much more complete and satisfying experience and giving us a truly happily ever after scene to remember...it was a total joy to read! 

I knew it was worth the wait! Your ending is what the original should have been and I know that I am not alone in that sentiment. Of all the books, Breaking Dawn has always left me with mixed feelings and mostly because I thought that many things were skimmed over much too fast by SM.  I chalked it up to the genre that these books were categorized as. At the end of the day, the saga is marketed to a younger crowd and I just happen to be along for the ride.

So thank GOD for talent like you. The perceptive author who realized there was a void that needed to be filled and for being brave enough and determined enough to fill it. I had to read this last chapter twice before I could attempt to leave you a comment. Somehow, you captured the moments that I carefully stored in my head and my heart that made this story so captivating. Thank you so much for that! I feel like my Twilight Saga experience is complete.

Excellent Job!!!

I can't even describe how grateful I am to you for sharing this piece of art! I really enjoyed reading this story and I will surely read it again and again like I'm doing with the Twilight Saga... Thank you for giving me a sightfull into Edward's pespective!!!

"I swear, one of the main goals of her entire existence must be to find out if she can drive me insane."
I laughed out loud when I read this - am loving this take on Breaking Dawn and I can't wait to read your next chapters! :-)

I'm truly crying.  I can't believe it's over.  I'm mourning the end of this story just as I did the entire Twilight Saga.  I'm glad you say that you have more stories coming, as you write so beautifully.  I really felt as if I were standing in the meadow after the fight.  I absolutely love how you went into detail of both the celebration of the win, and also the desolation of the Denali Clan.  All the specific thanks and goodbyes that the allied vampires gave to each other made them more real.  The playful animosity between Rose and Jacob solidified his importance and stature in the family, and with Jasper not only championing Jacob, but accepting Esme's love brought Jasper out of the fringe.  Showing Tanya's bittersweet feelings exposed her humanity, which we knew she must have had since she did abstain from humans, but never really caught a glimpse of.  I loved hearing Alice's take on Bella's grievance and how she was both chagrined, annoyed, and amused.  And of course, you were brilliant with the last scene, pulling specific memories and feelings.  How could Edward not feel warm, loved, and lustful?  Thank you for mentioning me in your end note, I'm truly flattered.  Now take some well deserved rest, enjoy the holidays and knock my socks off with the next story!

Oh, I have a new favorite story! This first chapter is wonderful! I love seeing this from Edward's POV.

I'm am truly heartbroken that this is over. :'( But on a lighter note, this is the best story I've ever read on Twilighted, and I think you did a fabulous job. I literally squealed when I got my email notification!! You really portrayed Edward perfectly--very intelligent, but beautiful and romantic. I had a really hard time believing you're not SMeyer under a different name! (or are you... :P)

Anyhoo, I will be looking forward to your future stories. Could you write something Post-Breaking Dawn? I would love to hear your take on "what happens afterwards...". Thank you very very much for writing this amazing story.

 

~Anya

Great story, glad you have seen it through.

Thank you very much for an incredible tale.  I loved book three of Breaking Dawn most, so when I ran across your masterpiece through the eyes of Edward Cullen, you brought each in every character to life.  I cannot thank you enough. 

I cannot believe this story is over.  It has honestly been one of my favorite fanfictions of all time.  And this chapter ... wow.  It was beautiful.  I LOVED the emotion of it.  The joy, the playfulness, the sorrow, the memories, just all of it.  I'm sorry to see it go, but you ended it wonderfully.  Thanks for such a great story!