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Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 04:09 AM · On: My Star
So freaking good. Wonderful insights. I love Edward's POV!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: lacygrace (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 02:25 AM · On: My Star
Beautifully, eloquently, perfectly written. Your portrayal of Edward rivals that of SM herself (sacrilege, I know, but tis true). Please keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I'm so thrilled to hear that my Edward and Stephenie's mesh as far as character portrayal – I truly want to do him justice and 'let his voice be heard'.
The next chapter should be up by the weekend. I hope you like it.
Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 12:51 AM · On: My Star
*sigh* Love it.
Bella's conversation with Charlie was great and Edward and Bella's time in the meadow was just wonderful.
Two thumbs continuously up!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
And thumbs up to you for reviewing! :)
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 11:32 PM · On: My Star
That was so sweet, at the end! I really liked the way you expanded out the sun scene into a meadow moment. It felt so right. I so love Edward's POV here, seeing his love for Bella from his eyes.
Thank you for the update!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
The meadow scene just...materialized after I reached the end of the chapter in "Breaking Dawn", and I ran with it. It's one of my favorite romantic moments that I've written thus far in the story.
Reviewer: Vayls Girl (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 10:11 PM · On: My Star
You have perfectly translated Edwards view of my all time favourite scenes!
So perfectly tender through Charlies visit, and capturing the humour of the aftermath! I grinned again, and the extra scene in the meadow was as fantastic as ever!
I think its a shame I can only rate this series as a 10 - I want to add another 0.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
The interaction with Charlie was very interesting for me to write, and I enjoyed it immensely. Of course, the arm-wrestling match provided the perfect comic relief, and the little added scene in the meadow made me sigh even as I was writing it down.
And thanks for wanting to give my story a 100. I'll take the 10, though, just the same. :)
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 10:04 PM · On: First Hunt
I'm really enjoying it. You've done a wonderful job with Edward.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
My primary objective with this entire story is to portray our beloved Edward as accurately as possible, so it is wonderful to hear from readers that his character remains true throughout the story.
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 05:42 PM · On: My Star
I loved this chapter. Seeing the arm wrestle from Edwards point of view, BRILLIANT!! The scene in the meadow was gorgeous and I was just thinking "AWWWWWW!!!" while I was reading it. My one problem...I thought the Vampires in SM's world didn't have reflections in the mirror??? Am I wrong...
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
The arm-wrestling match was a blast to portray from Edward's perspective. And the meadow moment just sort of...happened in my head, so I ran with it. It's one of my favorite 'fluff' scenes so far in the story.
As for your question: the vampires in the Twilight universe have reflections, just like a human. The majority of myths about vampires are debunked in Stephenie's world, and that is one such myth.
Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Awakening
Oh this is so good. I love getting Bella's awakening from Edward's point of view. I love hearing about his desire for her--his own distractiblility in that sense. Wonderful.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
It's always been my feeling that Edward is just as easily 'dazzled' by Bella as she is by him, and Stephenie confirmed this in "Midnight Sun". So it is a lot of fun for me to play around with that idea.
Reviewer: onlybythenight (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Favor
Ok. First off, normally I never review. I'm one of those people who reads but never reviews. So this is odd for me to begin with.
Secondly, this is possibly the most eloquently written piece of fan fiction I have stumbled upon. Not to mention the most enthralling. I do believe I can feel safe in saying I was hooked from the very beginning.
The cadence and flow was spot on-- albeit the diaglogue familiar and comforting. The addition of the actual text was something that I find hinders most writers in their ability to morph the additions around something that has already been written (and therefore known).
Having read the entire story, I'm smitten. I can't get enough! And trust when I say, I don't say that often.
Keep doing what you're doing, it's fantastic.
Author's Response: Truthfully, I am guilty of shirking my 'reviewer' duties, as well. But thank you very much for taking the time to write one!
And thank you so very much for all your comments, they are deeply appreciated.
I hope that you'll continue to enjoy the story.
Reviewer: edbellafan (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Favor
Wow....I don't know what else to say...but WOW!! I really felt as though I were reading something written by Stephenie herself. You stay completely true to the characters....at no point did I feel like "that's not something he/she would say!" which is how I feel often when I read other stories on this site. I don't care for anything that departs too drastically to the way Stephenie created each character. I'm relatively new to the world of Twilight, having just finished all 4 books a month ago...and I think Edward's POV is absolutely captivating and you capture that perfectly! I will definately be checking back to read as you add more chapters! Thank you for your hard work! I love it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I know what you mean about keeping true to the characters Stephenie created: more than anything, I want this story to feel authentic. I love all of these characters, and I want to do them justice – besides having a little fun in the process. :)
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Favor
Excellent writing, as always. I'm actually enjoying this more than the real Breaking Dawn.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Wow, more than "Breaking Dawn"? That's an incredible compliment – thank you!
I think that by the time I'm finished with this story, I'll need a new copy of "Breaking Dawn". It's getting a LOT of use.
Reviewer: 5by5creations (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Favor
Incredible! I am really enjoying this. Thank you for taking the time to write this.
I just read your bio... I too am a big BTVS fan and have developed a passion for Twilight. It's nice to have a new obsession!
I am thoroughly enjoying your writing. You have done an incredible job of capturing Edward. You should be proud!!!
Thanks again and keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
And a fellow Buffy fan, too – I knew I liked you. :) Though I think I prefer beautiful, sparkly vampires as opposed to toothy, wrinkly-faced ones like in BtVS and Angel.
Reviewer: luna48y (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Favor
The best part of hearing Edwards story is that you get so much more from other characters as well because of his ability. I'm excited to read future chapters when Bella starts getting her powers! You're doing great.
Author's Response: I completely agree. Edward's gift is a fantastic gateway into other character's minds.
Ah, Bella's power... I'm looking forward to interpreting the 'practice session' with Kate. That should be fun.
And thank you!
Reviewer: awakenthesoul (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Favor
Please write more! Soooo good!
Author's Response: Thank you!
The next chapter will be posted soon, I promise.
Reviewer: Vayls Girl (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Favor
With each chapter I'm amazed - I feel like Bella with so many superlatives floating in my head! Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
You have to love those superlatives – they keep life interesting. :)
Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 04:59 AM · On: Favor
I love, love, love how you write the interactions in this story! Amazing work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Surprise
I love that they discussed her pregnancy. That really should have happened. This is one of my absolute favorite fanfictions and I can't wait to get to the next chapter!
Author's Response: That was my feeling, as well, in regard to the resolution about Bella's pregnancy.
And I'm flattered that my story is one of your favorites! I hope that you continue to enjoy it as much as I love writing it.
Reviewer: RevVamp (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 03:10 AM · On: Favor
Once again, love the intricacies and insights that come from Edward's POV as well as Edward's gift. I especially like how truly violent and volatile Edward's inward reaction to Jacob's rashness is as compared to his external reaction. And I really can't blame either of them, both of them for their unconditional devotion to their loves, Jacob wanting to give a priceless gift to a friend, and Edward in needing to keep the secret that is law.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Edward's temper has always intrigued me, and I think he tries very hard to control it in front of Bella – though she can usually tell when he is seething beneath an otherwise calm surface. Writing the scene with Jacob from this chapter, I felt like Edward would have a dark reaction because, after all, he is a vampire. And, like you, I can appreciate both his and Jacob's line of thinking about the situation.
Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 01:59 AM · On: Favor
Fantastic Chapter! I especially loved the little (incredibly believable...and HOT) diversion by the tree. Although it wasn't necessarily in BD, it still felt very in canon. I also liked hearing what everyone was thinking during this scene. That's part of the reason why I love Edward POV, aside from the fact that you can never have enough Edward (absolute favorite character) it also allows you insight to every other character. THANK YOU for the awesome job you are doing with this story....I continue to be eager for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
*grin* I'm glad you liked the, as you labeled it, "diversion" by the tree. It was fun to write.
It's also fun to get into other characters' heads through Edward's gift, and I'm glad that you like what I've included as far as insight into what everyone else is thinking.
The next chapter should be up very soon.
Reviewer: Naymee (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Favor
This was a really good chapter. i loved it. I am now late for the school run because I couldn't leave it half read!
Loving this still, carry on the excellent work! xxx
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Though I'm sorry you're running late.
Speaking for myself, I completely lose track of time when I'm writing, so I can understand where you're coming from. Sometimes, you just need to escape from reality for a while and live in Edward's world. ;)
Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Favor
luv it
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Favor
I liked this chapter even though this is one of my least favourite parts of the book. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you'll like the next one, too.
Reviewer: Aalfons (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Favor
"So you won't feel left out."
My favourite part in this chapter, it made me laugh alot and still does when I think about it. :p
Author's Response: Hee, hee – Alice is so much fun. A little pixie power-shopper. :D
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Favor
You are doing such an excellent job of capturing their insights. I am enjoying this so incredibly much. It is brilliantly written!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
I hope that you continue to enjoy it, and that my muse continues to inspire me. :)
Reviewer: RevVamp (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Surprise
Once again, I feel you have made a flawless transition from Bella's POV to Edward's POV. I especially like the extra insight into some of the lost moments that we didn't get from Bella's POV. Like getting Seth into the house after Bella's rage snapped and her and Edward's discussion at the cottage. Again, great job and thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you!
I find that Bella's point of view is a little more straightforward than how I interpret Edward's, but it's finding that balance between the two that can be a little daunting. It's nice to hear that someone thinks I'm doing a good job. :)
There are quite a few 'breaks' in the story line throughout Book Three, and it's fun for me to try and fill in those breaks. The conversation with Seth was very entertaining to write - and is part of the reason he is one of my favorite secondary characters.
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