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Reviewer: principessa (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Surprise
Amazing! Please keep writing...you're feeding my twilight addiction! :-) absolutely wonderfully seamless transition of SM's dialogue into another pov. You are an incredible writer.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
I'm feeding my own addiction to Twilight through writing this story, as well as reading many of the amazing stories on this site.
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Irresistible
The more I read your story, the more I´m convinced your talent as a writer is greater then most around this site.
Another great and extensive chapter filled with details and beautifully written.
Keep it up.
sincerely,
Karina.
Author's Response: Thank you very, very much!
I'm honored that you count me among the great writers who display their work here. That is a high compliment, indeed. :D
Reviewer: Camba (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Irresistible
I hope you will continue with it. So far i enjoyed it more then the original :)
Thanks for all the work you put into it....
Ev
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
There are two more chapters that are completed, which I will be posting very soon, and then the updates on this site will be caught up with the others that I post on.
Of course, everyone here will have to wait a bit longer for updates then, but I promise that I will keep writing as diligently as I possibly can.
Reviewer: soccergirl23 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Irresistible
Great chapter as always, keep them coming!! I can't wait until it gets to the end with the almost-fight to hear the volturi's minds and when Edward finally gets a glimpse into Bella's mind!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
We've got a while to go before the confrontation with the Volturi. I'm looking forward to that particular chapter with equal parts of elation and dread. I want to capture the essence of Aro and the rest of the guard as best I can, as well as the unspoken thoughts that Edward hears during the entire exchange, and I worry a little that I won't be able to pull it off. But, as they say, I've gotta think positive! :)
Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Irresistible
yep, we can hope and wait, at the moment i'm enjoying your story as much as i did the original, love it
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: pinkylove102 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Irresistible
WRITE MORE PLEASE DIEING HERE HAHHAAH LOL UR AMAZIMG 10 10 I RATE YOU 100
Reviewer: pinkylove102 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Irresistible
WRITE MORE PLEASE DIEING HERE HAHHAAH LOL UR AMAZIMG 10 10 I RATE YOU 100
Author's Response: Thank you!
I promise that I will try my best not to kill you with suspense. There are two more chapters that are completed, and then the postings on this site will be caught up with the others.
Of course, you'll have to wait a bit longer between updates then... but not too long. Writing this story is, for me, a guilty pleasure. Like chocolate. :) I just can't seem to get enough.
Reviewer: pinkylove102 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Awakening
your a amazing wroter continue please it fabulous
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Irresistible
Another increrdible chapter....I really do love your version of these chapters better than BD (which I loved). I have been eagerly anticipating the fireplace scene and it did NOT disappoint! Very, very heartfelt and romantic! Also, as the other vampires are showing up, it's interesting to hear what's going on in their minds too. I'm excited because for the next few chapters you're going to have a lot of room to be creative...and I always completely believe and adore your extra scenes and dialogue.
Love ,love, LOVE you! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
This chapter is still my favorite, and I think it will take quite a bit for any future chapters to top it – but I guess we'll have to wait and see.
And with the visiting vampires, I do have a little more 'creative leeway' in describing them. I'll be interested to see what you and everyone else thinks. :)
Reviewer: Antonia Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Irresistible
Great as always.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Tqwerty (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Irresistible
This story is great, not only is it addicting-but it's also the closest i've ever come to being similar to the series and what i always thought they would be thinking.:)
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
I've always wanted to stay as true to the character as I possibly can, and it's so encouraging to me to hear that I'm doing a good job. :)
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 03:23 AM · On: Defection
I´m sad, relieved, anf full of hope. Job well done. Your writting style is amazing and beautiful.
On to next one.
sincerely,
Karina
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: Naymee (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 01:58 AM · On: Irresistible
So moving and desperate and lovely. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Candi_ass (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 12:11 AM · On: Irresistible
spectacular!!!!! looking forward to the rest of the story. and anything else you write. GREAT JOB!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
The next chapter should be coming very soon.
Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Irresistible
You're doing a fantastic job! I think you've captured Edward perfectly.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: LadyMacKenzie (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Irresistible
I loved this chapter!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
{{{hugs}}}
Mac
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
The next chapter will be up soon. It's a bit shorter, since it's building off of the previous chapter, but there's a lot of info in it.
Reviewer: jswham (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Irresistible
Absolutely wonderful! Every chapter is getting better.
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you!
Reviewer: twilover09 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Travel Plans
I really liked getting to see Edward's pov of Renesmee reading for the first time, but the entire chapter was great also, of course! The only thing that got me was Carlisle left to go help at the hospital, but was all of a sudden present for Alice's vision of Aro's gift arriving. It was just a little confusing.
Still a wonderful story!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
And you're not the only one to catch that little inconsistency. It has since been corrected – and a new scene added to the chapter, as well – if you would like to reread it.
Reviewer: xjennjennx (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Favor
I really loved this scene in BD, it made me wanna jump in the book and slap Jacob haha. It's nice to get someone elses vision of how Edward reacted. Great stuff!
Author's Response: I kind of wanted to smack him one, too. ;P
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Irresistible
I'll be honest, this story is so good I never know where your text starts and SM's ends. I just love reading it! More please!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!
I'll be posting the next chapter soon – hopefully sometime this weekend.
Reviewer: lada_8 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Irresistible
WOW.
this was amazing. definitely a mouthful but you captured the chapter so amazingly accurate. Did you add the part were Embry and Quill and Seth are eating at the Cullens? i liked that. a small hint at the integration of that alliance, the pack and the cullens all forming friendships and coexisting in the big house, well except for Leah and Rosalie, haha. I liked that the sex scene was about the passion and emotional need, rather than just crude sex.
I love how you describe Nessie's explanation of her life. I'm very interested in how you portray hey thoughts. When she tells Edward inwardly "I love you Daddy" i cried. That moment seen from Edward's perspective was just beautiful.
The Denali vamps were great too. Tania's loyalty is something I didn't expect because it's not as explained in Breaking Dawn through Bella's POV. I'm curious to know what kind of teasing and mocking the Denali sisters did to Edward during the wedding, haha. Maybe you could do a One-shot on the side about that.
I think you should just do the whole series from his perspective, you capture him soooooo well. :) I love it when you actually write what the others are thinking, not just hinting at their thoughts, but actually reading what Edward is hearing, that's just great. i CAN'T wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Yes, I did add the part with the wolves in the house, catching a quick snack. I wanted to throw the pack back into the mix, as it were, and I missed Seth. He's such a pleasure to write. :)
Renesmee, too, is interesting to portray, as well. I like putting in those little moments where she and Bella and Edward are able to live as a family – I think it adds more emotion to the story.
As for the Denali family, I'm becoming quite attached to Kate – though Tanya, Carmen, and Eleazar are intriguing characters as well. A one-shot about their teasing at the wedding reception could be fun to write. We'll have to wait and see if I get inspired to do just that. :)
The next chapter should hopefully be up sometime this weekend.
Reviewer: poous (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Awakening
I absolutly love this story. It is extremely well written and I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Can't wait till Bella finally lets down her shield for Edward.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
But we've got a LONG way to go before we get to the moment where Edward hears Bella's mind for the first time.
We'll get there eventually, though, I promise. :)
Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Irresistible
It's so great, like anything from EPOV, thet's why everyone is waiting for Midnight Sun. I'm waiting for the rest, keep up with good work
Author's Response: Thank you!
I am most definitely among the throng of people waiting to see "Midnight Sun" completed. We can hope, right?
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Irresistible
This was definitely a major chapter in length. I'm kind of spinning a little with everything. But the things that stuck out the most for me is how vulnerable Edward is feeling - how helpless. Something he doesn't deal well with. It's interesting, the whole freezing thing the vampires do when stressed. It's always kind of baffled me why they do that. I loved seeing the support of the werewolves!
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: This one is pretty long, although I think "Travel Plans" still has it beat as far as length. This chapter has a ton of emotion in it, so that could be why it feels so overwhelming.
A vulnerable Edward was a little challenging to write, but I felt that it needed to happen, and he would only show himself in that way to Bella.
I wonder if vampires freeze when they're stressed because their minds are moving so fast that they can't focus on moving their bodies. It's just a thought.
And thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Irresistible
I drop my head to her shoulder before she can perceive the anguish distorting my features, and my embrace constricts, as though I am trying to disappear into her very soul. There are no more barriers between my innermost being and my visible self; they were washed away by the storm of need and suppressed emotion.
And I am so afraid.
this is so absolutly well written. i can really feel the fear that resonates so sincerely from Edward. You done it, in my opinion, more deeply, than stephanie meyer did. it feels more genuine perhaps. i am really loving the wonderful detail that this is bringing, even if it is a little painful to read, though that is part of its beauty.
keep up the good work. I look forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
I wanted to make his fear real, almost like it is a living entity, so that any reader would understand that the very center of his universe – his reason for existing – could be snatched away from him in the blink of an eye.
And I love details in stories, because I am a very visual person, so that's part of the reason why I write that way. I see these moments like a movie in my imagination, and I try to put what I see into words.
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