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Reviewer: Holli (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Declared
I just finished chapter 16 and I am seriously hooked. I have enjoyed reading your version of Breaking Dawn as much if not more than the original. You are a wonderful writer. I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter and sincerly hope that you consider writing the first two books in Breaking Dawn from Edwards perspective, although I recongnize this is a selfish request. :-) Thanks for helping me with my Edward/Bella withdrawal.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I hope to have an update within the next few days, provided that I can carve out some writing time and my muse doesn't decide to take a vacation. ;P
A lot of people have requested that I go back and write the first two books from Edward's point of view. My standard reply is that I want to concentrate on finishing this story before committing to another major undertaking. We'll just have to wait and see.
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Declared
Incredible writting. I have no more words as I wipe tears away from my eyes. Beautiful.
sincerely,
Karina.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: Carbear724 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Declared
I love it very much it is like an extention of the orginal you are very talented and i cant wait til you post the next chapter...keep up the good work please im interested in knowing Edwards thoughts during the battle. =)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Hopefully, I'll have an update ready in a few days.
And I'm pretty interested in what he is thinking during the confrontation with the Volturi, too. :) We'll have to see what happens together.
Reviewer: lada_8 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Declared
WOW. This is just an amazing story. I'm in love with your writing style. it's amazing. You know when to slow down, you know when to keep the plot going, when to allow us insight into specific characters. It's just great. I daresay SM has some high expectations to meet whenever she decides to finish midnight sun because you capture Edward so amazingly.
I hadn't had a chance to catch up with the latest chapters, life gets in the way sometimes, doesn't it? But I did this past week, I read everything you had updated and it's just fantastic. I can't wait for more. I already know what happens in the story and yet I find myself equally captivated by your writing as if it were the first time I read this story.
Kepp up the amazing work! Let the creativity flow!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Life most definitely gets in the way sometimes – the lack of an recent update is proof enough of that – but I hope to finish the next chapter within a few days.
Reviewer: jenstampin (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:14 AM · On: Declared
I should have read slower. I'm loving this! Everything just fits so perfectly. Can you give an estimate as to how long it usualy takes to get the next chapter up? Just a ball park, so that I know how long I'll be holding my breath. Thanks :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Gosh, I hope you don't try to hold your breath that long. ;P But I would say that the next chapter is more than halfway done, so I'm hoping to have it up within a week at the latest.
On average, I think it takes me about two weeks to write a chapter, but a lot of factors contribute to that - like finding the time to write or if my muse decides to fill in some details. I've already passed the two-week mark on this latest chapter, I know, so I'm trying to get it done before we hit three. Cross your fingers!
Reviewer: jojomouse (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Declared
Hi there,
This is truly wonderful. Thanks so much for creating this. You have definitely helped to quench my thirst for all things BD.
Can't wait for the next installment!
:)
Author's Response: Hello to you, too - and thanks for reviewing! :D
I hope to have the next chapter ready by early next week. Please be patient for a little longer.
Reviewer: jenstampin (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Practice
What was Zafrina showing the crowd while Bella was shielding?
Author's Response: Zafrina made everyone blind, like dropping a black curtain over their eyes.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 05:36 AM · On: Declared
This was so wonderful! The emotions are so very intense. It is all encompassing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: susanrb45 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Declared
I have been enthralled with reading your whole work and I absolutly love it. I love seeing everything from Edwards POV and getting more insight into the minds of others and the story. I love how you combine the pureness of Stephenie Meyer's wonderful work and add just enough romantic detail to make this completly engrossing. You did a fantastic job and I hope you will continue with this through the end of the Breaking Dawn story.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
My primary goals all along with this story is to 1. stay as true to Stephenie's genius as possible, and 2. see the story through to the end of BD. And by golly, I'm going to do my very best to fulfill both of those goals.
Reviewer: twilightjunebug (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Declared
I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. No rush intended but can you hurry. I love reading your work.I can get totally lost in it as I did the orginal series.Again your writing has successfully woven the same spell that the orginals did and I am waiting EAGERLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL; your enthusiastic 'hurry but don't hurry' attitude brings a smile to my face. Thank you!
I hope to not keep you and everyone else waiting too much longer. I've reached the final stretch in the next chapter, and have to wrap up setting the stage for the confrontation with the Volturi. My plan is to finish it within the next few days and have it ready early next week.
Keep your fingers crossed!
Reviewer: jenstampin (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Irresistible
Oh, my heart. Edward by the fire, & pouring is heart & soul out to Bella made me love him all the more. It takes a strong man to do that, not a weak one. I sobbed. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you!
This is still my favorite chapter thus far. The emotions are so intense and beautiful. I felt a bit drained after writing it, but in a good way. :)
Reviewer: sealifemyra (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Favor
You have done a magnificent job with these chapters - you too are a wonderful writer and I have thoroughly enjoyed reading them and hope there are more. You should go back and do them all from the very first book in Edwards POV.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
I've thought about going back and writing the first two books from Edward's perspective, but I want to concentrate on finishing "Metamorphosis" before committing to anything else of the same scale.
Reviewer: dspring (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Declared
I'm loving the story! Can't wait for the rest! Really looking forward to when the Volturi get there and all that Edward hears from them and then what goes through his head when he realizes that Bella is shielding them all.
Great job! Thanks for sharing with us!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
That whole confrontation with the Volturi is going to be a challenge, but I think it'll be fun, too. This next chapter will be the final preparations before their arrival... *deep breath* ...and then things will get interesting.
Reviewer: WCalcione (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Declared
Keep writing. I love your take of EPOV, its hard to tell the difference between you and Stephanie. You are awesome. I anxiously await the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: twilightjunebug (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Company
YES!YES!YES!Keep it up! I love it!I really hope you are still considering doing the first two books in Edward's point of view. I would love to read it. i am saving this to my favorites so I can keep up with your work as you continue this journey.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I have those notions of writing the other two books in the back of my mind... along with the makings of a plan to write some moments from "Eclipse", which is one of my favorite books in the series.
But I haven't entertained those thoughts very much, because I am determined to devote everything I have to this story until it's finished.
Reviewer: twilightjunebug (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Talented
Keep it going sunshine your on fire!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: twilightjunebug (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Irresistible
Fabulous !!!!! Yeah, that pretty well sums it up!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: dekennybatb (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Declared
still loving each and every chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you, and I'm glad! :D
Reviewer: Naymee (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Secrets
very lovely chapter. I actually whimpered out loud at the end and my husband asked what was the matter...
I just love this story. So much.
Author's Response: Thank you!
The ending is very emotional; I might have actually whimpered at one point, too. :)
Reviewer: jenstampin (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Travel Plans
Some of my favorite parts are Renesmee & the wild flowers, when Bella plays with Edward's ring, and the chess game. But my very very favorite part was Charlie's gift. Please tell me what yours is.
Author's Response: My favorite funny moment is Charlie's gift. At first I was worried that it might come off as cheesy, but the idea was too adorable for me to pass up, and I just wrote it in.
The chess match is a scene I added after the chapter was finished because of a consistency issue, and it turned out so well that I now have three favorite moments.
My favorite emotional moment is when Edward and Bella are in their room, talking about the trip to Brazil. It seems a bit mundane, but I love it because it shows that they can take themselves away from their troubles and just be together, enjoying their love for one another.
Reviewer: soccergirl23 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Declared
Please try to get another chapter in by the time my school ends!! ( It ends June 18!!)
Author's Response: I wish that I could guarantee that it will be finished by then... but I don't think I can make that promise, hun.
However, that is a reasonably realistic goal to aim for, so I'll give it my best effort and we'll see what happens. :)
Reviewer: pink_photographer (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Declared
awesome chapter :) You are an amazing writer! I cant wait tell you get to the fight. And even better, when bella shows edward her thoughts! I always wondered what exact thoughts she was showing and what he thought about them.
exciting :)great job! thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
The confrontation with the Volturi will definitely challenge me, but in a good way, I think.
And when Bella drops her shield – I'm looking forward to that moment, too.
Reviewer: ejh0904 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Declared
I like your take on this hunt so close to Christmas - I'm so thankful that Bella and Edward are so strong as a couple; strong enough to weather even the fear of the end that seems so inevitable to them now.
You are so lyrical as a writer; I find myself following the plot but losing myself in the language. It's almost hypnotic. Beautiful job, as always.
Looking forward to Edward's take on seeing Bella use her shield so effectively. Can't wait to read about his surprise...
Author's Response: Thank you!
At first I was going to have Edward and Bella ignore the holiday when they were alone together, but after their lovemaking and Edward's renewed sense of celebration and completeness, it seemed like a perfect time for them to wish one another a Merry Christmas.
I've already started thinking about how that last scene will translate into this story, but I try not to get too caught up in it, since there's still a ways to go before then. But I have a few ideas...
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Declared
That was beautiful. You are so talented.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: Candi_ass (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Declared
i've decided your SM... just so you know but it's ok i wont tell anyone :P your story is amazine, i find myself reading and re reading your chapters just for the emotion highs i can get off your words. absolutly enchanting!!
Author's Response: Well, thank you! ;)
It's such an encouragement to me as a writer that people keep coming back to this story, reading it over and over again.
All of my reviewers are part of the driving force behind this story; your words are like a caffeine jolt to my muse.
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