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Reviewer: rhodac (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Awakening
Not to add to the pressure, but I faithfully check your story everyday looking for the last chapter. I know you are working on the last piece but I just wanted to let you know that it is difficult to have to wait. You've done an amazing job!
Author's Response: Thank you for being so diligent in checking for updates.
To ease your mind, the next chapter is in beta as we speak.
There will be one more after the new one, and I promise that I won't make everyone wait so long for the finale.
Reviewer: susanrb45 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Contrivances
Still trying to patiently wait for an update, but it's not working very well. Please update soon!!! You deffinetly get an award in my book!!!!!
Reviewer: Tionne (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Awakening
When is the next chapter coming? I am dying for you to get to the 'Happily Ever After' to hear Edward's thoughts when he can hear Bella for the first time.... please keep writing!!!
Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Contrivances
please udate soon.
Reviewer: loquacious (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Company
Thank you for including the scene with the "after" car. I actually went searching for Breaking Dawn stories to find it. My husband complained that it should have been in the book. He wanted it to include all the wolves. Your way is good too!
I'm enjoying this in some ways more than I did Breaking Dawn. I think I simply find Edward to be more interesting than Bella.
Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: soccergirl23 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Contrivances
Please try to finish the next chapter by my birthday!!! Its at the end of September. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!!!!
Reviewer: marysway (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Surprise
Just another review for yoiu that I finished this first night after she awoke and was pleased. A bit more than the book but staying with the characters. Thisis something that maybe in the next year I could let my daughters read and know that they are not getting to much. They love twlight and am jealous that I'm reading all the fanfic but due to most of the context I can't allow and this I can. Maybe not today as they are only 10 but very soon.
Reviewer: marysway (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Awakening
Just wanted to tell you real quick all though I've just read the first chapter I like it. It's refreshing. I enjoy Edwards point of view. But I also like a bit stemaer version but not something that is way over the top. Or so unlike the charcaters that have been already created so I am pleased. :-). I have not gotten into this as I've jsut read the first chapter but so far so good.
Reviewer: hush (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Contrivances
plz plz plz..........continueeeeeeeeeee....................
Reviewer: ripart85 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Contrivances
Wow.. I just finished reading everything you have posted so far, and can I just say, I'm amazed! This is just as good as the original! (Maybe better, because I enjoy Edwards POV better than Bellas) Please Please Please post the rest soon! I'm gonna go through withdraws!! Also, just a suggestion. I would love you continue the end out longer than the original. OH, and you really should go back to the begining and do the whole book in EPOV. Your amazing, keep writing, I cant wait to see what you do with this, and I cant wait to read more from you in the future!!
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Awakening
Alright, I finished all nineteen chapters of this tale and I'm sure like everyone else that has read this tale - I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter! I must say, reading Breaking Dawn (at the point of Bella becoming a vampire) through Edward's POV is awesome - but you couldn't pull it off unless you have captured the characters perfectly. Bravo on an incredible tale!
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Awakening
I'm about halfway through this tale - printed out all 438 pages - and I had to take a break JUST to let you know how much I'm blown away with your writing prowess. The third book of Breaking Dawn was my favorite part of this saga - and you just made it all the more incredible through Edward's POV. You have captured the very essense of all the characters and I cannot thank you enough.
Although I feel guilty for reading this without paying - for I'm enjoying it even moreso than Breaking Dawn - I pray that you will update soon. Again - awesome writing... awesome, awesome, awesome.
Reviewer: kerreg (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 04:17 AM · On: Contrivances
I'm relatively new to the world of fan fiction, but am an avid reader in both my personal and professional life. I think this is the 5th or 6th fanfic I've read and have certainly not been disappointed. You have done an amazing job bringing Edward's view to life. Your recounting of Renesmee's memory brought tears to my eyes. I'm so looking forward to reading the rest. I also have to mention how much I enjoyed the ending of several of the chapters. You seem to always bring Edward back to his focus, ie, his love for Bella. Perfect!
Reviewer: hush (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Contrivances
amzing.......just amazing ..........i have no words to say anything about that..........wow!........i am stunned................it was a great pleasure reading it all that i can not help myself to comment and appreciate the work you've done............thanx ..................i will surely be looking forward for the next one ........plz do continue soon ......................
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Hopefully, the next update will be ready soon. Please be patient. :-)
Reviewer: julesames (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Awakening
Awesome!! You have encaptured Edward's thoughts, feelings and overall perspective perfectly. Congratultions!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Puppylve234 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Contrivances
I was just wondering if you were going to post another chapter soon? I'm dieing to know how Edward envisions the Volturi's advance and Bella's Sheild. You are a really awesomw wrighter!!!!
Author's Response: I am hoping to have it ready soon, but I really can't offer a specific timetable just yet. Honestly, I am obsessed with making this next chapter the very best it can be, and that could take a bit longer than usual. But I'll do my best to get it done ASAP.
Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 01:02 AM · On: Contrivances
Again, WOW!! I have loved every minute of reading this story. Mizra recommended this story and she is so right - it is just beautiful!!! I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
And be sure to thank Mizra for me for the recommendation. I'm glad you took her advice. :-)
I'm hoping to have a writing streak and finish up the next chapter soon, but please be patient. I'll try my best to keep the waiting to a minimum.
Reviewer: Mizra (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Contrivances
Darn it, you make me cry again tonight with this scene of goodbyes. The part with Edward and Renesmee... ugh, makes me want to go give my own dad a hug.
Kate & Garrett are still one of my favorite couples. Garrett is just a fun, fiercely-loyal character to play with.
I've never read Aro and Caius more cunning and ruthless than here. Bravo, kudos and snaps for something even more terrifying that a flaming-haired vamp like Victoria.
Author's Response: I'm sorry. Gosh, everyone's been needing the tissues lately! :-)
You know, I'd love to see more of Garrett and Kate in a story... Argh! *stuffs muse in closet to keep her from giving out any ideas*
The Volturi brothers are more creepy and frightening to me than Victoria ever was, truthfully. I mean, she had her moments, but Aro and Caius are at the top of the "Nasty Bad Guys" list.
Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Bloodlust
This story is wonderful!! I enjoy reading each chapter and do not want it to end. I love your version of Jane and Irina.
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Contrivances
You know I have to say that I dislike Aro more than Caius only because if someone feels hostile towards me I'd rather it be out in the open than have someone be a friend to your face and then stab you in the back.
The scene with Bella and Nessie was heartbreaking. To know that you HAVE to give your child up to make sure they live, I can't even imagine making that choice.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I completely agree with your reasoning of Aro. He is most definitely two-faced, and that bothers me more than open hostility.
That whole farewell moment was an emotional meltdown for me to write. Thankfully, everything turns out all right for this family.
Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Deadline
All I can say is "WOW"!! I loved this chapter and actually liked the cliffhanger!!
Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Secrets
I really enjoyed getting to know the Denali family and I loved Benjamin.
Reviewer: Dave51481 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Contrivances
I have to agree with you Garrett is an awesome character. I vote for hating Aro more - he's just as evil as Caius but he attempts to hide his true nature. I can't wait until the next chapter when Jane and Alec have thier gifts blocked by Bella and to see the mental reactions to Bella's and Benjamin's gifts. Not to mention it's when my personal favorite Twilight character comes back - Alice!! She's awesome - I love good natured people that are balls of energy. So entertaining. One more thing to add; there wasn't a moment in this story where I felt you drifted OOC. I think you truely captured every character's nature as orginally presented by Stephanine Meyer.
Looking forward to the last few chapters - can't wait to see Edward's mental reaction at the end when Bella opens her mind to him. Definatly a fitting ending to the series considering that her closed mind was the first thing that drew Edward in at the beginning of the series.
Author's Response: Thank you!
It seems like Aro is getting the most "hate" votes, and I am inclined to agree. And I am also very excited for Alice's return in the next chapter. I missed her. :-)
There is no greater encouragement for me than to hear that my portrayal of these characters is true to Stephenie's work. I love all of them so much; I want to do each and every one of them justice. So, thank you!
The epilogue is going to be very entertaining to write. I may extend it a bit from the original text, but we'll see what happens.
Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Practice
I think you did an excellent job of capturing Edward's thoughts during their practice session. I also enjoyed getting to know more about the other visitors as well.
Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Company
Loved the missing scene with the Ferrari and I am immensely enjoying this story.
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