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Reviewer: dailey59 (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2012 09:45 AM · On: The Happily Ever After
i have read your book breaking dawn book3 i really enjoyed reading i lost a lot of sleep reading it was very good i hope some one would blessed us by puting it on audio for us eyesight no good enought to read it we listen to hollygirl757 all the time but shes stopping on book2 so if any one put book3 on audio i would like to know keep up the good work god bless
Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2012 03:07 AM · On: The Happily Ever After
This is a very well written story. I think you did amazing with Edward's point of view. I am new to fan fiction but I have throughly enjoyed this journey. I hope that you return to it someday and do the first half of BD from Edward's point of view.
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2012 06:05 AM · On: The Happily Ever After
This is an amazing and beautiful story. Congratulations on a job very well done.
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2012 11:49 PM · On: Declared
Have I mentioned the beauty you have with words?
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 11:35 AM · On: Irresistible
I love Renesmee and the father-daughter moments. I've googled pictures of Edward and Nessie- absolutely adorable, highly recommend it. In my opinion there is something irresistibly sexy about a man holding a child.
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 08:15 AM · On: Defection
You have such a profound way with words.
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 07:11 AM · On: The Future
Wow talk about intense. Regardless of how many times I've read BD, which I will never truthfully reveal, the tension and angst from this scene leaps of the page, er screen - as it were.
Beautiful imagery in your descriptions by the way.
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 06:35 AM · On: Travel Plans
Ooh the foreshadowing....
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 03:02 AM · On: My Star
New favorite chapter right here. The arm wrestling match is probably one of my favorite scenes from the entire saga and I adore the scene in the meadow.
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 06:29 PM · On: Promised
I have to say this is one of my all time favorite scenes from BD.
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 06:27 PM · On: Promised
I have to say this is one of my all time favorite scenes from BD.
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 12:39 PM · On: Awakening
Not much to say other than Love it! Edward's POV is always a favorite for me - I think because his mind reading allows the input from other character POV's as well. It's awesome how closely it follows the original and it would be awesome to write some more from earlier in BD, especially during her pregnancy. If I don't review on every chapter from here on out just assume I continue to love it and cannot stop devouring it long enough to tell you so, again. 😄
Reviewer: EdwardsMate (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 03:42 AM · On: The Happily Ever After
I only just discovered your story, and was glued to it for 3 days! What a wonderful writer you are - you really captured what I imagined Edward's voice to be, and it was fantastic to get to know the secondary characters on a deeper level. Thank you for sharing your work!
Reviewer: Rio de Janairo (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2011 11:00 PM · On: Irresistible
I have only very recently joined the Twilight Fans and found this site only a few weeks ago. I have always wanted to read the story of bella and Edward from Edwards perspective and I would like to thank you sooo much for writing this. I have read both your Prenumbra and your Metamorphosis stories and I just love them! From Metamorphosis "Irresistable" is my favourite chapter, it is so well written and you really gave me the feeling of seeing into Edwards soul. It has been a pleasure, really! Please keep writing!
Reviewer: Europa27 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 03:49 AM · On: The Happily Ever After
A very good story.... i really enjoyed reading edward's pov..... thank you
Reviewer: sept13 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 11:15 AM · On: Defection
I keep thinking each subsequent chapter is my favorite, and then I read the next one! I love how the tension builds in the chase to find Alice. The last part is so beautiful and poignant.
Reviewer: sept13 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 02:00 PM · On: The Future
I think the agonizing is perfect. You write Edward's POV so beautifully, especially with how he experiences Alice's visions and the thoughts of his family. I also always did wonder how it came to be that Jacob was sleeping in wolf form inside the house the next morning.
Reviewer: colorado (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 06:50 AM · On: The Future
I really like this chapter. I think it would be great if sometime in the future, you do this from Alice's point of view. From what she saw to the searching in South America to the time when they reunited with the family at the end of the battle.
Reviewer: colorado (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 06:50 AM · On: The Future
I really like this chapter. I think it would be great if sometime in the future, you do this from Alice's point of view. From what she saw to the searching in South America to the time when they reunited with the family at the end of the battle.
Reviewer: colorado (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 06:50 AM · On: The Future
I really like this chapter. I think it would be great if sometime in the future, you do this from Alice's point of view. From what she saw to the searching in South America to the time when they reunited with the family at the end of the battle.
Reviewer: bozack (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 06:44 AM · On: The Happily Ever After
Thank you so much for this wonderful, amazing and stunning story! I simply cannot praise your work enough - I've enjoyed every second of reading, right from the beginning to the end. You hit the characters so well, and your mad writing skillz (sorry :P) are simply the best! I love all the small hidden scenes you've put in all over the story, and even the scenes that are very well described in Breaking Dawn gets a new light with your writing.
So once again, thank you for this - I might come back and read it all again soon!
Reviewer: leeseeq (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Secrets
I love that resurfac ing of the bottle cap in this chapter! It's a perfect addition to the story line! I'm loving this story so far, especially all the additional "missing moments" I just devour them! You've woven the missing thoughts so perfectly into the story that I don't even notice where the "real" stuff ends and those begin- even though I've read breaking dawn like 20 times:) Love it.
Reviewer: leeseeq (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Surprise
I love the additional dialogue. That's the kind of thing I"m hoping to come across when I read the scenes I'm familiar with, but from a different perspecitve. I also liked the "air clearing" and thought it was very in character and believeable. I liked how you took the scene when they were talking before the wedding about Bella being able to have children and tweaked it to be from Edwards perspective. Very good.
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