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Reviewer: sweetnees75 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Second Chances
really love!! hope you continue..
jules
Reviewer: sweetnees75 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Blast from the Past
LOVEING THIS STORY.. LOL PASS THE PENIS
JULES
Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Second Chances
Wow I love this story so far. What is Edwards problem does he want to save his marriage or what.
Reviewer: MandaMichelle (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Second Chances
are you continuing the story? sure hope so
Reviewer: tan (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Second Chances
[please] upddate soon and often, enjoying this alot.
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Blast from the Past
Please update soon, you're killing me here..
Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Second Chances
I don't know if I have ever read 6 chapters so fast before! LOVE IT! And true to your A/N I definitly have some conflicted thoughts regarding the story. It's obvious from what we've seen of Jordan through Bella's POV so far that she is not so interested in Edward or her marriage, but I'm guessing there's a whole lot more going on there. I feel bad for Edward, he deserves to be happy too and Bella shouldn't be using Tristan either (but maybe she doesn't even realize what she's doing yet). Again, great story you have here!!
-L
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Second Chances
WOW!!!This was great!!MORE,MORE,MORE!!!PLEEEASE!?!
Reviewer: NenerBener (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Second Chances
Damn its gettin hottt in here! Can't wait to read on!
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Second Chances
i have a really huge problem with infidelity, but god, this story is just so damn good i keep forgetting he's married. mmmm, yeah. more toe curling in the near future?
Author's Response: I'm not much for infidelity either, but it won't go any further than what has already happened. I can promise you that! There is more to come soon! Thanks so much for your review!
Reviewer: MommaMcCoy (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Second Chances
I'm absolutely loving the story! Can't wait to see where it goes from here!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I'm glad you are liking the story! There is more to come soon!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Second Chances
Leave it to Edward to make your toes curl! I am really interested in finding out what Jordan is thinking of their relationship. Bella is in real deep! Please update soon.
Author's Response: Mmmmm....Edward makes my toes curl for sure! Thanks for reading and reviewing! More to come soon!
Reviewer: alcg123 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Second Chances
LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you like it so far! More to come soon!
Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Second Chances
ok Jordan does not care about him, so what is going on with them. Please update soon.
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for reviewing!! :) We find out Jordan's fate in the next few chapters! More to come soon!!
Reviewer: April Luna (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Second Chances
more plz
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! More to come soon!
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Second Chances
Awww... Bella shouldn't be using that poor Tristan guy just to make a point to Edward. Tristan is gonna think she feels that "spark" and is gonna get hurt. And couldn't Bella have a mature conversation with Edward instead of putting on a scene like that in front of him? She shouldn't rub it in his face. Its obvious he is hurting. Isn't it bad enough that his own wife doesn't want him... and now he has to watch Bella have sex on the dance floor right in front of him.
Lol... I think I am going to hate where this goes for a while, because im sure it wont be resolved anytime soon. Poor Edward. I hope all the truths come out soon for his sake :) I know what its like to be the only one alone.
Anyways... I heart this story! Can't wait until the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Edward is feeling dejected, but Bella doesn't really see that since this is written in her POV. We find out more about Jordan in the next few chapters! More to come soon!
Reviewer: sweet (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Second Chances
hmmmmm...seems like Jordan wouldnt mind if Eddie and Bells hooked up.OKAY I need answers!!!UPDATE,UPDATE!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Jordan has some issues-we find out more about her in the next few chapters! More to come soon!
Reviewer: miniego (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Blast from the Past
I'm completely addicted. All the angst and tension has me coming back for more.
The inner struggle Bella has with her feelings toward Edward is absolutely perfect. She's trying to be a good friend to Jordan. I commend you for that, because some fanfics I read shows Bella giving in freely without a guilty conscious. Also, I love the fact that Edward is such an agressor. This story is quite refreshing and beliveable.
Can't wait for the next update. :)
Reviewer: shelly551 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Second Chances
oh this is getting good, please have them get together and kick the hell Jordan to the street. HaHa, your story only a suggestion. Love it, one of my faves.
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! We find out more about Jordan and her fate in the next few chapters!! More to come soon!!
Reviewer: kkroonie (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 06:22 AM · On: Second Chances
Oh. My. God. Edward is so devastatingly sexy. When is something more going to happen between him and Bella (not that I condone adultery and affairs, but this is different...it's Edward and Bella, lol)? I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! There is more Bella and Edward interaction coming soon! We all know nothing comes easily for them though!! ;)
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Second Chances
If Bella knows there isn't a spark with Tristan, why is she bothering persuing him? It seems like a waste of time for her. I for one would love to see a little more Jordan/Edward angst and fighting...that ship has sunk! Loving your story so far! :-D
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: Hey Sarah!!! We find out more about Tristan in the next chapter!! Persuing him Bella is no longer! Jordan and Edward are going to exchange some words, but it's a little bit from now! More to come soon! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it!! ;)
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Second Chances
i cant remember the other things i thought confusing, just that one i sent you, but thwere were other few things that didnt made the fanfic bad. btw, i love it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!! I'm sorry that it was confusing for you. I read through it three more times yesterday and I couldn't see where it was confusing. If you can think of what you thought was confusing again please send me a message so I can hopefully clarify for you!! More to come soon! Thanks for reading!!
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 04:18 AM · On: Second Chances
Gosh I am really enjoying the sexual tension between Bella and Edward! It is so H-O-T HOT! (Wow...is it terrible of me to admit that when he's married? Good thing this is fantasy!)
Kathy M.
Author's Response: Hey Kathy! Thanks for your review! Yes it's ok to admit you think the sexual tension between Bella and Edward is HOT! LOL! It's all good!! More to come soon! Glad you like it so far!!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 04:06 AM · On: Second Chances
Ahhhhhh, I ALWAYS love jealous Edward! More Please!!! :)
Author's Response: I love jealous Edward too! He's just delicious!! ;) More to come soon! Thanks for your review!!
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 03:41 AM · On: Second Chances
I get the impression Jordan isn't happy at all with Edward.I mean what women in their right mind would not love to come home to a home cooked meal and flowers and silky pj's. I mean come on something else is going on. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Jordan has some serious issues! We will find out about her very soon! Seriously what woman wouldn't want a man like Edward? I know I would sure like to have him! YUM! Thanks for your review!!
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