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Reviewer: samiamgreen (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 3

Happy Easter right back to you!!! I'm glad that you updated and really want to let you know how much I enjoy your story... I can't wait for your next update even though I'm slightly worried about what will happen to them

Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 3

Nooooooo! painful cliffie! PAINFUL CLIFFIE! Must have relief SOON! Need next chapter!

Great story concept, BTW!

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 3

Welcome back & wow. I'm looking forward to seeing more of this.

Wedding night in their eyes, they are still going to get in trouble for what they just did.

Reviewer: marvelousmarbles (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 3

Oh! Their wedding was absolutely perfect. Perfect. That's the kind of wedding I want. That kind of wedding or none at all. Really beautiful, can't wait to see what happens next, even though I'm sure it will hurt my heart..!

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 3

Great chapter! It's so sad about Edward and the way Renee treats him. I'm so happy that he and Bella had a little moment of happiness before they get caught.

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 3

happy easter to you too. i had to double chackwhen i saw you updated! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. is the influenza next chap? just one request: DONT TAKE THAT LONG INTO UPSDATING AGAIN WOMAN! I almost died. and with that cliffie. i certainly will. please please update asap.

Reviewer: bumbelbee (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 2

That was so wonderful... I love it!

Please, update soon! ;)

Reviewer: CaraMia (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 2

Uh ohh!! i feel it coming................trouble that is! I el-O-vee this story!!! ADDMOREPLEASEICANTTAKEITANYMORETHESUSPENSEISKILLINGME!!

Reviewer: CaraMia (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, this is truly a sad sad story.....but I LOVE IT!! Im only on Chapter one but so far so good!

Reviewer: mirolare (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 2

Please slap this terrible Renee some more! Wonderful characterizations. You are a great stoyteller. Update frequently, but don't forget Dangerous Affections!

Reviewer: Lyra56 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 2

So glad I came across this story. Lovely so far. I like that the physical isn't important to Bella. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter :)

Reviewer: Jenimafer (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 2

and Jacob too for that matter lol

Reviewer: Jenimafer (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 2

Aww this story is so sad, but sweet at the same time.

Looking forward to the next update =]

And in response to your question at the end; yes, yes i do want to slap renee senseless XD

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 2

*SLAP* that one was for Renee. *SLAP* that one was for Jacob.

I hope that Bella and Edward do get their happily ever after in yours story, they certainly deserve it after what they've had to go through, even so early in your story! Loving it so far, please update soon!

Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 2

Her mother is terrible!! Poor Edward. I'm anxious to see what happens next! Very creative story!! I really really like it!

Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 2

and Jacon too, he's so persistent. Can't wait till Edward is a vamp. Make it quick please, and please please update sooner!

Reviewer: mistimemory (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 2

I love this story you can't update as fast as I want to read!

Reviewer: desirardent (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 2

Oh, I like this! I've always liked Edward to the Phantom... have you ever read "Phantom" by Susan Kay?

Author's Response:
No, but I've heard so many things about it. I'm going to have to pick it up whenever I find the time.

Reviewer: raylea_olivero10 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

AHHHH! i LOVE IT!!!!!!

Reviewer: ponycrazy33 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 2

I love this!!! It is so well written! I hate Renee!!!!!

Reviewer: Anya (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 2

ooh no...im worried...telling Jacob was a bad move...jealous & angry suitor is never a good combination and definitely not a good help,how soon till Carlisle enter the scene

Author's Response:
We'll meet Carlisle soon. I'm thinking in Chapter 4. :)

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 2

I'm so glad Bella stood up to Renee. I'm really worried now though. Why would Bella tell Jacob? What if he tells Renee?

Please update soon.

Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 2

i do!! i want to do more than slap her!! arggg!!

im curious to see how it related to the count of montecristo... this is really amazing.

Reviewer: MoonSpinner (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 2

*raises hand to slap Renee* what a vile woman. Gah, lol, I no likey Renee. I am really enjoying this story, it's different from any other I have seen, very intriguing. Oh Edward the poor dear...he needs a hug or something. I volunteer! *cough* um, right yea...you are a wonderful writer, very good at descriptions and writing the dialogue. I hope to see more of this soon!

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 2

i'll find edward a job if bella let me put renee in a hospital. slap her senseless wouldnt begin to cover it. LOL, with one chapter i already want to do that. LOL. I love this story so much. update soon please :)

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