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Reviewer: osborne4now (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh my goodness! I love it! Keep going...can't wait to see what happens next! I love sweet, disfigured Edward!!!
Reviewer: tab83 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 3
Please update soon. I am soo anxious see where you go with this.
Reviewer: Dark-Aki (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 3
Noo! Cliffy!!!!!!! I hope they don't blame Edward for all of that, that would be so sad... they are so sweet! update soon :D :D
Reviewer: kiddielikeplay (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 3
hi there. So after crying, smiling, laughing and just plain falling in love with this story..I am here to BEG you to please continue this. I have read ALOT of fan fics in my day and I am telling you that these three chapters have captivated me like few others have. It's already so beautiful yet so heartbreaking and I implore you to please continue this with ferver. I've just started reading yesterday and have already read these three chapters over and over atleast 5 times. GREAT imagery and visual for the time period and the characters. Please dont abandon...know there are readers anxiously wating! GREAT JOB!
Reviewer: mirolare (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 3
The best wedding ever, and refeshingly innocent virgins too! But I feel horrible for what is to happen next. Please update this beautiful story ASAP. BTW...it would be sweet if Edwards dream child became a reality.
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 3
I loved this chapter. Very nice. :) And for once, the virgin Edward actually thinks like a virgin! And I like that he's more reserved when mentioning being turned on. Back then, I assume they didn't say stuff like, "My dick was throbbing/hard, etc." This was a time when people didn't really talk about sex and weren't bold when mentioning it. Good job. :)
Update soon!
Author's Response: bwahahaha this totally had my laughing out loud. lololol Thanks for the laugh! :) And you're right. It would've just seemed silly for this Edward to have said anything like that.
Reviewer: NiKKi the Vampire Princess (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 3
YAY!!! Edward and Bella...finally together! But you should get to the vampire-becoming soon, that is the major twist. Dont spend too long on this. It's getting boring.
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 2
Good chapter. And thanks for the picture of what Edward would kinda look like. :)
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good 1st chapter. :)
Reviewer: ForeverxWithyou_ (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 3
i thought there wedding was beautiful<3 you did a great job on this chapter, please update soon!
xx
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 3
OH MY GOD!! The shit is going to hit the fan now!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVED their vows and their first time. Beautifully written and I love how happy they are. I cannot wait for more of this amazing love story.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 2
OMG!! That was fabulous! I loved how Bella stood up to her mother about how she treated Edward. GAH!! WHat a complete BITCH Renee was to do that to him!Looks like Jacob is going to do something spiteful to break up Edward and Bella's relationship
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 3
so good... but oh crap!!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 1
GAH!! LOVE it! SO sweet and I cannot wait for more!
Reviewer: Giselle Giselle (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 3
I am SO excited that you updated!!!! I LOVE this story so much and I think you did a fantastic job of their wedding and their first time, it was all so romantic. I can't wait to see what happens.
Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 3
Haha...I totally do the google thing too. I think you're doing a great job at capturing the tone of the time period! Keep up the good work ;)
Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
They are perfect together. And she gave himself to her why would he hate her. I hope to find out. Soon hopefully.
Reviewer: pinkielephant (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh no!! oh no oh no oh no!!
I'm simply adoring this story. I can't wait until we get to the part in the summary- where Bella sees him as a vampire? Holy moly, I'm so excited! Thank you for writing a wonderful story.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 3
I loved this chapter. It was beautiful and sweet. Their wedding and first time were wonderful. Really perfect.
I'm worried about what's going to happen next though. Are they going to throw Edward out? And Bella's pregnant?
Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: KBfan (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 3
Happy Easter to you too! You did a great job with their "wedding" and first time. Their first time was so sweet and romantic. GREAT job!!! Please update soon I really want to know who caught them.
Reviewer: NewDAWN (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 2
Yes! Sign me up for a turn at slapping Renee senseless! That sounds like a wonderfully good idea.
Excellent writing by the way. This story idea is original and captivating. I am eager to see where it leads.
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 3
OH SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That is never a good thing........
I loved how you had them discover eachother!
Reviewer: twilove (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 3
OMG, I knew that was going to happen, that someone was going to catch them!
I love, love this story. It is heartbreaking and so sweet. Please update soon!
Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh god nooooooo!!!!!!!
how can they get caught!?!! it's renee isnt it?!?! damn her!! she can't separate them! don't let her!!
don't!! *hyperventilating*
...
ok, i've calmed down now...
that chapter was full worth the wait!! so wonderfull!! great job!!
i have a question.. is this based on montecristo the movie? or the book??!
please say the movie... in the book edmund doesn't stay with mercedes.. and that makes me sad!! :(
update soon!! :D
Author's Response: I've never read the book, and after hearing from several people that E&M don't end up together in the end, I probably won't ever touch the dang thing! lol
Reviewer: Jynxx (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 3
What a fantastic story so far! I can't wait to see what happens now that they've been caught. Silly kids, they really need to actually get married in the eyes of the town.
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