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Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 3

Ohmygod. Please, please, PLEASE update as soon as possible! This story just draws me in, and I don't believe I've ever begged like this before.

Anyway, please continue this story!

Reviewer: Lovesbooks (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

omg! please update soon. pretty, pretty please!

Reviewer: misspanda (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 3

Oh, I like this story! I like the not perfect Edward you've created. I can't wait to see what happens next for these two! This story is in my favorite list

Reviewer: RingTheBella (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 3

I originally read this story over on the FF website. I just wanted to throw my two cents in here too.

I appreciate the effort (aka the googling) to get as much right as you could. I remember thinking their "wedding" night was really sweet. I know it's been awhile since you update but last I heard you had not given up completely on this and I just wanted to say there is at least one person out here who desperately hopes you will finish the story someday. I know there are only 3 chapters so far, but I really love what's you've written up to this point.

Reviewer: Jalice (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 3

Just reread the story again and anxiously waiting for an update that doesn't seem to be coming.

Anyway, I love this story and I hope you continue.

Reviewer: Banky (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this story, and genuinely hope you decide to continue, it has such heart. x

[May be wrong, but sure I originally saw this over on FF?]

Reviewer: mlover25 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 3

Bump

Reviewer: mlover25 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 3

Bump

Reviewer: monimolina (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 3

OK, stories like this one are the reason why I am so OBSESSED with Twilighted.net... 3 Chapters and I'm already hopelessly HOOKED!!! You haven't updated in forever though, I really, truly hope that you keep working on this story and update soon because it is really good, I can't wait to see what's going to happen next and how it's going to end... I'm a sucker for stories like this one as long as they don't take too long to wrap up because I love happy endings!!! ;-) Your story is very original and unique though, I love the concept that you are creating, love the idea of this unconditional love, where Bella only sees his inner beauty... I've found myself wanting to grab Edward and pull him to me and just hold him to make him feel better, you have such a way with words, you are truly amazingly gifted. Please, please, please update soon... I check in every day just FYI to see if I find a new chapter... LOL!!!

Reviewer: Disneyvampire (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 3

Having spent some time scouring Twilighted today, I found this story. It is very good, I hope you have not forgotten it and are going to finish it. I like it very much and I see that it has been sitting for awhile without an update. sad... :(

I would love to see where this story goes, where you would take the characters in this plotline. I do so hope that you will update and write more chapters for this story. It is very well written and very good!

Disney Vampire

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 3

I cant believe this story hasn't been updated since April. I can't wait to see how Edward is turned into a vampire or just what happens next. Please continue.

Author's Response:
I'm in update fail. I have the next chapter mostly written. I won't promise when it'll be updated because everytime I do that, I don't. Ugh. But I DO plan on updating sometime. Eventually. So sorry for the delay. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 3

I just started reading and like the story. I noticed it hasn't been updated in a while. Does that mean it won't be continued?

Reviewer: vertigo33 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 3

This story is absolutely amazing. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Beckylady (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 3

Love your writing! Bad, bad writer for the terrible cliffhanger.

Gah, now I need to go watch the Count of Monte Cristo again. I love that story. Though now I hate to read any more of this one until its closer to finished because i desparately need my happy ending. Hehehe...I love angst, but only if its resolved fairly quickly.

Reviewer: MoEcullen123 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 3

great story! please update soon!

Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 3

Please, please, please post soon I love this story.

Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 3

Riveting. I like the plot and how Bella and Edward relationship is progressing. Eager for more soon.

Reviewer: itunesx221 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 3

wow....i love all your work, ur stories are awesome. this is my new fav AU fic XD

and if this is following The Count of Monte Cristo then i know where things are going :*(....i want them to stay togther

plz plz plz update soon...i hate cliffys

Reviewer: twicurious (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 3

It feels authentic on many levels. I love Edward's gentle personality. It is also a fun departure for the Swan family to have means, as opposed to Edward.

I hope you'll update soon.

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 3

Hey cool story i havent read any that are set in the past and this is good =]

Reviewer: Norma_Jean (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 3

wow that was beautiful and i realy love this it isnt anything like ive read and its so good and well written oh no i can wait to see whta happens next and really hope yoy update soon amazing job

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

update!! im loving this one. im going to come here twice a week and also im leaving u a pm. update!!

Author's Response:
I'm working on the next chapter. I took some time off after my other story was plagiarised on fanfiction. It was either step away for a while or delete everything. Anyway, working on it. Thanks for your patience. :)

Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 3

AaaAah! U have to update! I'm dying here!!!!

Reviewer: arianna (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 3

I'm really enjoying this, and I think you've done a really great job with the dialog and the historical details! Totally looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: murmureetoile (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 3

Very promising story!! Continue!!

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