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Reviewer: crazytwihard (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 1
i forgot to add that "charlie's five track mind" thing was amazing...lovely and hilarious...i wud love to read more of ur work..plz do write:)
Reviewer: crazytwihard (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 1
wow that was amazing...impeccable...perfect to the minutest detail...awesome use of language, edward was totally in character, the romance was so edward-bella-esque, i loved ur insights into edwards mind...in all i really enjoyed reading the story...it was very very nice:)
Reviewer: maryalicebrandon13 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
You are a wonderful writer!
Reviewer: leeseeq (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 1
Loved it! It was so sweet.
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
totally awesome.
Reviewer: westy1606 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 1
One word:beautiful. More please, and Thank-you x
Reviewer: Fanny-Amanda (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow, that was really great!
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very beautiful
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
very sweet and tender. thank you for sharing. i look forward to more stories from you.
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 1
beautiful
Reviewer: lotetree (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
I loved it.
Please write some more.
Reviewer: Bjornsdotter (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
Thank-you for sharing such a sweet story. Poor Edward, always torn between what he desires and his strong sense of right vs wrong.
Reviewer: ritz (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 1
that was sweet!..neither too romantic nir too angsty!..nice!
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
Thats really good! i like it a whole lot!
Reviewer: IluvRobandEdward (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was really good, and sweet if posable write another chapter. Please
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
so cute *-*. i loved it.
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 1
It's good, just a bit short ;)
Reviewer: AnaPrintemps (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very enjoyable. Nice introspect, not too OOC that I can't get lost in the twilight-ness of it, highly believable. Good work! I can't wait to read your other stories!
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
awesome. so touching, to get a really good look inside edward's head. a really good story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) really means a lot to get such positive feedback.
Caroline
Reviewer: sommer (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
very good. The style of writing matches that of Stephenie Meyers. It seems harmonious to read Edwards thoughts, they fit a young man who was raised in the beginning of a 20th centtury, by an upper class family which probably adhered to victorian rules of conduct. It seems strange to me when I read other author's versions of Edward who curses and voices an explicit description of an intercourse. Of course, one can never be sure, but Edward's is an image of a refine, soulful being who never is crude or out of control - that's the charm of Edward - a man from another, more romantic (albet also women rights discriminating) era. It seems appropriate while Edward is very poetic in his love declarations of Bella, and also very protective of her, he is also belittling her ability to make the right evaluation and take charge of her destiny. He is always viewing himself as the proactive, responsible protector of a frail little girl who does not know better and should not bother her pretty little head with serious desicions. You also convey the mood perfectly. I enjoyed the description of rain - truly, your words makes one aware of a miracle in and the beauty of such a mundane thing as raining. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 1
i love the description of the rain at the beginning. the whole vignette is really lovely.
Reviewer: childrenwith4legs (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
This was great! So well put together.
Very sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: cullen wannabe (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this, you kept cannon beautifully. Well done! xx
Reviewer: twipixie (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
Aw. that was really sweet. And edward in boxers...hot!
Reviewer: jeesiechreesie (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
your imagery is as clear as a photo. the first paragraph detailing the falling rain was flawless. you also personified edward; his deprecation and his desires. exceedingly well done. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I had the photo in my head and i'm so glad i seem to have been able to put it into words.
Caroline
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