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Reviewer: Twirob (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2016 11:42 AM · On: One Shot
thank you for sharing this amazing o/s with us ;D
Reviewer: helenareject (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 11:29 AM · On: One Shot
This is great and original!
Reviewer: chrisnor (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 09:43 AM · On: One Shot
great story!!!short and sweet!
Reviewer: chrisnor (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 09:43 AM · On: One Shot
great story!!!short and sweet!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 06:43 PM · On: One Shot
This was so totally cool!!!!!! I loved how Atropes & the other fates gave Edward a second chnce to change Bella!~!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:38 PM · On: One Shot
i have to admit that i pretty much skipped the "fate" parts of the story, but loved the rest. i usually stop reading altogether when i see that sort of thing, but i really didn't want to miss out.
Reviewer: jenjen519 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 12:55 PM · On: One Shot
Wow...that was so good. I sat here crying while reading the story. I loved it!!!! Excellent...keep writing!!!!
Reviewer: Antonia Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:27 PM · On: One Shot
GREAT story!
Reviewer: I_Run_With_Vampires (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:46 AM · On: One Shot
AWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!! ADORABLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DO IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY ARE YOU STILL READING THIS WHEN YOU SHOULD BE WRITING?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 06:02 PM · On: One Shot
I stumbled across your story.... and it made me cry!! Great writing!
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:08 AM · On: One Shot
That was sad but good. Tears
Reviewer: tink0116 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 05:58 PM · On: One Shot
It's official I'm a fan...this was an awesome little one shot!!!
Reviewer: Lily Lilac (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 02:08 PM · On: One Shot
OMG!!!
YOU ARE A CREATIVE GENIOUS!!!!!!!!! (i know i spelled wrong)
Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 05:58 PM · On: One Shot
I loved it. Great story.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 03:57 PM · On: One Shot
I REALLY liked this idea.
More than you know.
That was AMAZING!!!
Reviewer: MoonSpinner (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 02:43 PM · On: One Shot
Oh that was perfect. In every way, I really enjoyed how you throughly explained each moment in her life, and the part with Edward and Atropos was very interesting. And thank-goodness he took the second chance, knowing Edward he might have considered not taking, darn masochistic! lol, great one-shot!
Reviewer: windchime (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 02:35 PM · On: One Shot
That was lovely. Well done! I'm glad they got a second chance.
Reviewer: campbti (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 02:23 PM · On: One Shot
Excellent, the issues they go through as she ages, then the tragedy of an early death to cancer. Beautifully done.
Reviewer: Autumn (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 01:25 PM · On: One Shot
BRILLIANT!!! what a beautiful story! i love it!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 11:03 AM · On: One Shot
You did a good job!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 09:14 AM · On: One Shot
I liked it a lot! Very sad, but at the same time, hopeful. It makes you wonder if Edward had been able to see some things coming, if he would have changed Bella after graduation like she asked them to do. Great job!
Reviewer: Lauribella (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 08:12 AM · On: One Shot
Very well written!
I love this idea and the way you could follow both options! Happily ever after is so nice but the complications are what make it interesting..so here we get the interesting and then the very happily ever after!
Bravo!
Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 08:12 AM · On: One Shot
That was a really nice story. Great Job!!!
Reviewer: lady_lucks (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 07:50 AM · On: One Shot
this is beautiful.
in so many ways. i must say that the fates threw me (a friend of mine has a story with atropos in the name), not many people go back so far in mythology as to try to tie these things into the vampire world.
i cannot wait to see more from you; again... this was utterly fkkng beautiful.
Reviewer: chloe9 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 03:37 AM · On: One Shot
That was beautiful! I love how you tied in the Fates, and gave a look into what Bella's life could have been like had she not been changed. Edward always assumed that she would live to see old age, but he had no way of knowing that. This was a great story!
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