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Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 06:58 PM · On: The Dinner
I could feel that we were getting close. I'm not sure how you're gonna end it, but I am loving where we are headed now.
I'm proud of Edward for making it through dinner, but holy damn. Revalation much? Garrett? I really hope he's a good guy...Really, really.
...I have to know......Are we gonna get a lemon out of these guys? The UST is k.i.l.l.i.n.g me.
Author's Response: I am sad to say that the liklihood of a lemon is very very very slim to nonexistent.
If anything, it'd be in an outtake, and even then...
When I started I debated between giving it a T rating or an M rating and went with M due to non-lemony-type content and general darkness.
That being said -- I just don't think I'm the right type of writer to do a lemon. I'm sure it'll be a handicap in the future, but it's a limitation that I've admitted to myself and come to terms with.
Hope the end will still satisfy, lemons left to the imagination :)
Michelle
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 06:53 PM · On: The Dinner
Great job with Alice's reaction to the decision. I think it's the only thing that would deter Bella, and I'd wondered if that wouldn't be the case, that she'd just be destroyed as an obstacle by the people after Edward.
VERY curious to learn more about Garrett!
You've still got me, hook, line and sinker! Thanks for writing and sharing!!!
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 06:41 PM · On: The Dinner
Yes, Now we are getting to it. Who are the bad guys? Thank you for writing each chapter!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 05:38 PM · On: The Dinner
Well, I'm so glad that Bella can make him laugh with everything that is going on! So, is Garret a friend? Can Bella find a plan to ensure his safety?
Reviewer: archgirl (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 05:10 PM · On: The Dinner
OMG, I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 05:07 PM · On: The Dinner
DAMN!!!
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 02:52 PM · On: The Visitor
Killer chapter...great job moving the story along. Bella needed a good grounding to get her head together. :)
Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 02:45 PM · On: The Dinner
omg, only 5!!! What will I do without you again!!?? Damnit. Now I'll have to troll around for a fic as good as this one. :-( Ah well, all good things, right? Ok. Now I'm used to it. 5 chapters. Not too bad. Thanks so much for writing! I love this story. :-)
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 12:59 PM · On: The Dinner
Garrett the nomad Garett?
On no only 5 ch left...I'll be sad to see this end.
Reviewer: Ellie114 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 12:48 PM · On: The Dinner
Ahhhhh! - That's what it was like inside my head reading the last bit...not sure if I know who Garrett is yet, but I assume he's bad - in that it probably means the humans that captured Edward are around, or good - because he saved Edward.
Anyway, I always get so excited when you update this story, 'tis my favourite story in all of fanfic.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 12:43 PM · On: The Call
Was it really 19months? Thank you for finding that spark and writing again. I don't know where you are taking me but I am here for the ride. Be well. W
Reviewer: Shemhazai (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 11:39 AM · On: The Dinner
I can't tell you how happy I am that you continued this story, but I'll try: I'm so, so, so, so, so happy. Like, really. After a year of waiting, I feel as though I can't ask you to rush it, but I wanted to let you know how much I love this story and how grateful I am for every new chapter that comes out.
Author's Response: Thanks :) Chapter 28 is with the beta now, so I can assure you, at least chapter 28 will be coming ;)
Appreciate you sticking with it!
Michelle
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 10:53 AM · On: The Visitor
I'm salivating to find out about Edward's past and what happened... :)
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2011 07:56 PM · On: The Visitor
Oooh, so gripping!! I just adore this story and am so delighted to be getting to see where you take us with it! Very saturday night television series worthy!!
Thanks for writing and sharing!!!
Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2011 03:36 PM · On: The Visitor
BTW who was the man Charlie said was asking about Bella?
Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2011 03:34 PM · On: The Visitor
Totally awesome and unlike any other fic I've found. You have me fantasizing about finding my own sweet, abandoned vampire to take home. Alas I do not have a basement or a Carlisle to fix him. I guess it's just as well since I doubt my husband would be very happy to share. :(
Reviewer: madiloca (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2011 08:36 AM · On: The Reunion
Beautiful.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 07:42 PM · On: The Hunt 2
Cool chapter...I want Edward to win!
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 02:29 PM · On: The Visitor
SCANDALOUS!! Sheesh. I'm seriously going to go through a withdrawl if you disappear again...We're just getting closer and closer to so many answers!
I love that Edward snuck over to the house. I love any scene when Edward sneeks into Bella's bedroom. So high school, and so hot. Definitely highlights of my high school career :)
Reviewer: madiloca (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 10:27 AM · On: The Bath
He speaks!!!
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 09:40 AM · On: The Call
Ooof. That's kind of heavy. Aro is as useful as ever...Thanks for that. Loved the baby eating, though. Darkly hilarious :)
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 09:31 AM · On: The Hunt 2
A quick hurrah for Edward! HURRAH! Way to......stick it to Bambi? So much drama, I'm glad he made a decision and fought for it. I'm surprised he let Bella stay. Moreso that Alice didn't see this coming, unless she did, and he saw, and he knew that he wouldnt' hurt her. So many things to consider :)
Hoo rah super strong Edward!
Reviewer: swross (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 01:09 AM · On: The Visitor
I have written several chapter reviews, but always got an error code or lost the review. Finally figured out the Firefox download and hopefully this will make it to the review site! I favorited this story more than a year ago when I heard about it on the Twigasm podcast but I never started it because I heard you were on hiatus. When I got the message for an update I was so excited to find a good, new vampfic and I delved in! I am a technical writer for a living and it has been really fun to watch your confidence in your writing develop and your characters start to take over the story. You have great plot and character development as well as a seamless chapter and POV meshing. I don't even try to speculate about what is going on, but when I couldn't sleep last night I got up and spent some time with TVITB!! I am relatively new to the fandom and it is so nice to see fresh new fics still being written. Thanks for making my issues in RL smaller and giving me a great distraction! Keep writing and we will keep reading! BIG HUGS- MWAH!
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 09:15 PM · On: The Vision
Gah! Scary! It was going so well........It couldn't last forever. I love that you have such a handle on your characters that you are able to do a different POV and keep to the core of that character at all times. I don't feel like I'm reading some generic POV that just has a different title. Alice sounds like Alice, Bella sounds like Bella...etc. It's awesome.
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 08:56 PM · On: The Bracelet
Dark and twisty for sure! Poor Edward. I can't imagine the darkness in others could be so...dark. Horrible. I am so happy that he has a family behind him, now. Even if he isn't ready to have them as "family," he still stays, still listens and tries. I appreciate his strength, even if he can't see them quite yet.
In other news: Welcome back, beautiful :) I missed you. I missed our Vamp and Bella...I missed so much of this story. Thank you so much for coming back to keep up with this piece! I would have been totally cool if you had just popped up to say "Sorry guys, I just don't feel it anymore," and kind of thought you might. Alas, you have returned to me, and I am so, so happy about it.
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