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Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 01:23 AM · On: 4 - Thrills, Chills and a little bit of Spontaneity
As a parent I can understand only one item over the relationship between Bella and Edward and that is the sex at 16. Granted it does happen all the time, but as a parent catching them in the actual act making an attempt to prevent it in the future. Trying to avoid a teenage pregnancy. Outraged about sending Bella to a boarding school to keep her away from Edward. Then making Edward a virtual prisoner in his own home. Then making plans to pull him out of regular school and sending him away as well. The parents dictating how their children's life plans should be carried out. A mother and father can only lead and recommend so far with their children. A child needs to decide what they want to be in life. Also who they love. Parents teach morality, right/wrong, ethics, and personal principles. As Bella and Edward grew up with each other as best friends, it was natural they would fall in love. You want Edward and Bella to complete college. Fine. But telling them what they are going to be doing as career and how to live their lives as adults. It was cruel how they were separated and also the no communication between themselves. It's like tearing the child in half each of them. Sending Bella away ripes her heart and soul to remain in Forks with Edward. Her body left on the train. Edward's heart and soul left with Bella on that train and his body remained behind. Two halves attempting to search for another half to make them whole. 5 years has passed and each still loves the other, misses them, and hurts daily. No other partner would every match up to their love. By fate Bella is hit by a bathroom door pushed by Edward and they have found each other. I can understand why neither Bella or Edward have visited with their parents. Also why they don't want any prestige vocation since that was the reason they were separated to begin with all those years ago. Looking forward to future chapters. I have read the other chapters up to 8 on fanfiction.net. Unique plot, great premise, enjoying thoroughly.
Reviewer: sporklover (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 11:36 PM · On: 4 - Thrills, Chills and a little bit of Spontaneity
This a great story I want to know what happens next. Please continue!!
Reviewer: Alexxia (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:07 AM · On: 4 - Thrills, Chills and a little bit of Spontaneity
yes this was very very good! this is one of my favourites and belive me i have red a few! :D when are you posting chapter 5??
Author's Response: Hey, that's great to know :) Thank you.
Sadly I don't know when I'll be posting chapter 5 because my beta reader has vanished. So it looks like this story is on permanent standstill for now, which is a shame cus it hadn't even got into it yet...
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 03:14 PM · On: 4 - Thrills, Chills and a little bit of Spontaneity
Great chapter. The dream was amazing. This story is interesting and I am excited to see where you go with this.
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks very much :D I have never written smutty stuff before, so I'm seriously happy that someone else enjoyed it, my beta said she did too! There will be more to come, I promise you. And this story is hopefully going to be pretty interesting as it folds out.
I'm not wanting to give too much away, but I'm terrified of posting the next chapter... and the one after it.
Thank you and I really, really hope you enjoy the rest of the story and keep following :)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 07:40 AM · On: 4 - Thrills, Chills and a little bit of Spontaneity
Great chapter. Please update soon?
Author's Response: I will be updating quickly, chapter five is written and six and seven are in rough right now, but as I'm working pretty closely with my beta to improve on some common writing skills like punctuation and paragraphs (embarrassing, I know,) it will take a day or two inbetween chapters. I'm a massive noob after being out of school for a few years but my beta is doing a very good job of fixing that. I need to send her flowers or something...
Thanks so much, and I really hope you enjoy the story :)
Reviewer: The Foo Fighter (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 04:35 AM · On: 1 - Catfights and Straightener Burns
I followed you from FanFiction.net and I finally found this! YEY!
Author's Response: Well, hello again! And I'm amazed that you followed me here, so thank you! :D
I think you'll find the story is a LOT better now, plus the standard of stories on here is a lot higher. Though what's weird, is that the version on FF.net has suddenly got a flurry of favourites and private messages now that I've left. Oops.
Thanks again, and I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Reviewer: duckyd16 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 11:16 PM · On: 3 - Too Late?
MAHHH
Author's Response: Haha, I'm a massive fan of a non-verbal review :D I'm just hoping that was a positive noise?! Thank you anyway.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 05:43 PM · On: 3 - Too Late?
This story is good. Please update soon?
Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 03:03 PM · On: 3 - Too Late?
The voice in my head questioned stupidly to itself whether I'd ever been able to levitate, but I didn't think so.
Nice. I'm always a fan of inner sarcastic dialogues.
Author's Response: Yeah me too. I'll put a few more in for you, here and there :) Thanks!
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:58 PM · On: 2 - Ruined Converse and Purple Shocks
No. You. Didn't! Please update soon! You cannot, I repeat, CANNOT, leave me hanging here!
Kathy M.
Author's Response: I'm uploading the next chapter to here today :) However, there always seems to be some formatting problems when I upload. I don't think my beta reader likes me very much for this! But hopefully, third time lucky... So hang in there! And thanks for a fantastic review :)
Reviewer: Dragon1974UK (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 12:02 PM · On: 2 - Ruined Converse and Purple Shocks
Again another great chapter. I can't wait to see Bella's reaction towards Edward. Please, Please update again soon. Love it, absolutely love it.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm uploading the third chapter today. I want to perfect it first...
Reviewer: Dragon1974UK (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 11:31 AM · On: 1 - Catfights and Straightener Burns
Great start. I look forward to reading more. I hope you update regularly.
Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 11:03 AM · On: 2 - Ruined Converse and Purple Shocks
more please :)
Author's Response: Oh, alright then :)
Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 09:16 AM · On: 2 - Ruined Converse and Purple Shocks
I'm curious to see where this is going. More please :)
Author's Response: It's going to some interesting places, I'll tell you that much. Hopefully I can have chapter five up soon. Thanks for following the story this far :)
Reviewer: x_twi-kat_x (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:10 AM · On: 2 - Ruined Converse and Purple Shocks
I really like this story so far!
Cant wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: That's wicked, thanks! Hopefully you won't have to wait for long. Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 11:37 AM · On: 1 - Catfights and Straightener Burns
this chapter was good, I look forward to what happens. I can only imagine what happens. I hope you continue this story
Reviewer: lobster512 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 11:20 AM · On: 1 - Catfights and Straightener Burns
Oh... nice chapter. I'm wondering who this guy she once loved was. Very intrigued indeed. Please continue!
Reviewer: JennaLCullen (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 02:43 AM · On: 1 - Catfights and Straightener Burns
Good start to the story. I was thinking Bella and Edward were going to run into each other at the bar. Can't wait to see what happens!!!
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 07:10 PM · On: 1 - Catfights and Straightener Burns
I'm so intrigued! I can't wait to find out how Bella and Edward knew each other and what happened between them. Great storyline!
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