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Reviewer: blovesvampires (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Reality

I'm glad Rose told Emmett.

This was a good chap. :)

You roooccckkk, dudes ;) xxxx



Author's Response:

She didn't quite tell him actually; he doesn't know that she's pregnant. Was that very unclear?

Thank you, and so do you! ;)

Reviewer: caednkat (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Reality

Great Chapter.  I hope Rose doesn't do anything stupid.  I feel so badly for Alice, I can't wait for things to get better for her.



Author's Response: They will, just hang in there with us for a few more chapter! Thank you for rating, reviewing, and reading! xoxo

Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 11: The Reality

Great Chapter.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 11: The Reality

OK I think this is a great story, after I read the first chapter I wasn't sure I should continue Edward/Rosalie well not my favorite but I am sp glad I continued Edward and Bella have such promise.  Love all your differant POV's.  Will Alice end up meeting Jasper?  Please upate soon!



Author's Response:

hi, thanks for your review! i'm glad you stuck with me, haha! they will meet soon... keep reading =)

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 11: The Reality

I'm assuming that Jasper will meet Alice at Thanksgiving and both of these tortured souls will save on another. I'll have to say that I was a little shocked that Alice is an alcholic but, I think it works well with all the other mixed up people in this story.

Poor Emmett...he loves Rose but, she doesn't trust him enough to tell him the truth. I'm not sure how he will handle what Rose is deciding to do with the pregnancy.

I guess we will have to wait to see how this all plays out. I'm guessing that Emmett's Mom is married to Edward's Dad???



Author's Response:

am i so transparent? =) damn, haha. you're not too far off the mark with most of your predictions, except the jasper and alice meeting and all their issues dropping like flies. "the course of true love n'er did run smooth" and all of that...

 

Reviewer: tentimesvamps (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Reality

I love this story! This is great... More, please, soon!!!!



Author's Response: thank you so much! that is encouraging to hear =)

Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Reality

Awesome! So, does Alice fit a Grey's Character? I mean, I don't think she does, but I'm not sure....



Author's Response:

thanks! alice is really her own character.. not really drawn from one on greys, but also too OOC to be directly from the Twilight series. unrecognizable qualities are mine =)

Reviewer: BRANDY_D (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Reality

The story is still great! I did notice that there was a misstake with a name...Leah was referred to as Kylie at one point and it kindof through me off....

 

but great job....keep it up!



Author's Response:

oooops! haha thanks for noticing and letting me know.. i decided to include Leah at the last minute =) must've missed one. thanks again!

Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Reality

Good stuff ladies! A lot of territory was covered. The start was really sad. Alice acts so chipper outwardly. Why is Rose still not telling Em?

Author's Response:

thank you! yes, i tried to get through a lot this chapter so i can start on the next one with all the thanksgivingness =) hah.

i've always thought that 'the usual alice' is totally unbelieveable and unrealistic. i made her a bit dark to suit my own tastes; everyone's got problems, right? anyway, her character will develop further in future chapters. keep reading! xo

Reviewer: amom2my3kids (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 11: The Reality

Love the chapter.. Keep it up



Author's Response:

thank you!! xox

Reviewer: LiLi82 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 4: The Supermarket

i love this story - like the split between viewpoints! really wanting bella to be with edward though and can't tell where you are going with this which is brilliant

Reviewer: sdfan92 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 10: The Necessities

MORE MORE MORE!!!!



Author's Response:

it's in the works! =)

Reviewer: Chloabella (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 10: The Necessities

OMFG!



Author's Response:

hopefully in a good way? haha =) thanks for your review!

Reviewer: cass (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 10: The Necessities

aww yeah...emmetts cute and jasper's hot ;)

on the little summary thing it says this is complete? there is more chapters isn't there?! i dont want this to end yet!

haha

 

xo



Author's Response:

nope, its definitely not complete... must've hit that by mistake :S

thanks for letting me know, and thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: dandiegoose (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 10: The Necessities

I love it! I'm a huge Twilight and Grey's fan. I think this is amazing!

Keep the chapters coming!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Kolene (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 10: The Necessities

I really like this story. It seems as if hopefully anyway that Bella and Edward's problem is over and done with for the most part.  I don't believe that you went overboard with any of it.  



Author's Response:

Awesome, I'm glad you think so!

Reviewer: juggalettels (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 10: The Necessities

That threesome was hot.  HAHA now I know why my hsband wants  me to get a girlfriend haha.  I hope Rose tells Em he truely loves her.  We will see cant wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Uhg, boys, huh? Haha, thank you!

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 10: The Necessities

hey awww i loved emmetts sweet and sensitive side at the end =]



Author's Response:

=) I love Emmett!

Reviewer: B and E 4ever (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 10: The Necessities

Dont worry about going overboard have you read The Office or I'll Be Your Lover Too (this one has Tanya,Bella, and Edward). This was just as good as those if you have not read them do so. All and all loved the chapter keep up the updates because this is one of my favorites.

Author's Response:

I have, the Office is one of my favourites! That means a lot, thanks for your input and encouragement!

Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 10: The Necessities

GREAT CHAPTER.



Author's Response:

Thanks =)

Reviewer: caednkat (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 10: The Necessities

Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 10: The Necessities

I loved the chapter with everyone's POV!!! And oh my gosh was it stimulating!!!



Author's Response:

Stimulating is what I aim for! Haha thank you!

Reviewer: MonCherie (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 10: The Necessities

AWWWWWWWWW I hope Rosalie tells em soon! :) Love this story !!!



Author's Response:

all in time! haha thanks!

Reviewer: inlove22 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 10: The Necessities

this was HOT, and rose av to trust em...

but jasper was hot



Author's Response: Jasper is seriously my favourite character. He's fun to write =)

Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 10: The Necessities

I think it is oddly curious the things that women can get away with that men cant.

I just read the first few chapters of a story here on Twilighted where Bella is married, semi-happily married, not even considering divorce or anything... and she goes out to a club and has sex with Edward... and doesn't tell him she is married until after they have sex.

I immediately thought of this story. The only difference being that Edward was separated and had filed for divorce... so he was married legaly, but not by any means emotionally or physically.

It will be interesting to see how Edward reacts in this other story, but I very much doubt he will put Bella through the ringer at all... like Bella is doing with Edward in this story. I doubt Edward will give her a speech about breaking him and making her work to regain his trust... no matter how bad she hurt him.

I think its funny how women say that men get away with too much now adays... but I think it is the opposite. I think women get away with too much, and even Bella does in fanfiction. She could murder, cheat, lie, steal... anything really... and all she would have to do is feel guilty and cry to be automatically forgiven... water under the bridge. Edward on the other hand always has to fight, and grovel, and work his way back to forgiveness and trust... and his mistakes are always rubbed in his face for the rest of whatever story he is in.

I think thats so strange. Anyways... I don't really know why I wrote all of that on here. It doesn't really have anything to do with your story... other than my comparison of how Bella reacts to getting snowed by a married man, to how Edward reacts to getting snowed by a married woman. They both get hurt, but they handle it differently. Oh well. Im so random. I guess I may be a little wierd... it probably isn't normal for a woman to rant about how women get away with too much stuff. Anyways, I am really enjoying your story. Thanks for the update, and sorry for rambling...

 



Author's Response:

I love the ones who ramble =)

Haha and I must say, I completely agree with you (generally speaking). I've tried to avoid that though; by that I mean I've tried to avoid Bella having Edward on a leash after being dishonest with her. I think that they've actually worked things out quite fairly, don't you?

Anyway, thanks for your review!
Keep reading =)

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