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Reviews For How To Boil Water
Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 08:33 PM · On: OUT TAKE: Creme Puff's

; no more?

Reviewer: Leenie (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 12:42 PM · On: OUT TAKE: Creme Puff's

Just realized it's been over a year since you updated, I miss this story!!

Hope you will consider finishing it!

Reviewer: miamicutie96 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 11:59 AM · On: OUT TAKE: Creme Puff's

YOU'RE A FREAKING MORON. WHERE IS THE REST OF THIS THING?!?!?!?!!?!

Reviewer: Leenie (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:45 PM · On: OUT TAKE: Creme Puff's

I hope you are going to continue with this story! I miss it!!

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Late

I've only read chapters 1-10, but so far it is a wonderful story. Bella's past and mixed emotions are very realistic and Edward is the perfect guy we all know and love. I never thought as Bella as a chef, but when I read it in your story it's magical. Sometimes I am a bit confused about the time, but other than that I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Paige6 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 08:30 AM · On: How to Boil Water

I love this story so far and can not wait untill the next chapter :D please, please, please UPDATE QUICKLY!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! The next chapter should be on it's way soon.  I'm going to try to get some of it done tonight.

Reviewer: ShaeLove (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:50 PM · On: OUT TAKE: Creme Puff's

i realllllly enjoy this story, its playful and fun, and has its moments.

 

and of course is ridiculously sexy - as though this chapter wasn't proof enough of that.

 

long distance relationships are rough. i commend you for sticking to it though!

 

and i promise, if you're a complete weirdo, then we all are, in which case, we'd be the norm, therefore, not being weirdos. (in a nutshell, you aren't. )

Reviewer: butterfly_kisses (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 12:14 PM · On: OUT TAKE: Creme Puff's

OMG!!! you are amazing....please update soon



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! The next update should be posted by mid week hopefully! :)

Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:54 PM · On: OUT TAKE: Creme Puff's

If 'perv' describes the smutty fiction that I just read and squirmed through, I applaud your 'over active imagination' and encourage you to 'vent' any time you want to, pretty please?!?!

That Bella had never even imagined finishing off a guy and the unusual, but tart and tangy taste of hot ejaculate being purged into her throat as being sexy, I find incredibly funny.  It would be like pulling up at the last minute and instead of a 10, only getting a 7 or 8.  So I'm really thrilled for Edward!!!  No weirdo's here.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review! :) haha well, we just may have some future venting posted since the reponse has been very positive so far.

 

 

Reviewer: Vicklish (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:26 AM · On: How to Boil Water

Dun dun dun..How exciting! I'm loving the storyline and can't wait for things to "heat up"!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review! I'm so happy you are enjoying the story so far! :)

Reviewer: Britt01 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 10:06 PM · On: OUT TAKE: Creme Puff's

OMG, you are so not pervy!  That was sweet and hot and real and perfect!

And I understand the long distance relationship thing perfectly.  Mine has been 4 years now, the first two were MI-TX, and the past two have been ME-TX.  Sucks....



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review! I'm happy you liked it!

Oh man, cross country too! Mine is MI-FL ... sucks hardcore.  *sigh*  Four years here as well!

Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 04:51 PM · On: OUT TAKE: Creme Puff's

I have a chappie that made me feel exactly the same way.  Only mine only has Edward in it...

 

Love the chappie, love the story, I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

A chapter with only Edward that made you feel pervy? Hmm ... I might have to check that out! haha

Thank you for the review!!

Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Resemblance

Is Bella bringing out lemon meringue to them? XD



Author's Response:

lol I'm pretty sure Edward would have choked on his food if it was lemon meringue, and Bella would have turned about 10 shades of red.

In my mind it was cheesecake, Bella is probably going to keep that recipee private for their own ... use haha

Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Lemon Meringue

And sicne this chapter came out, you made it to 300 reviews! Congrats! That's quite the milestone :)

Loved the Lemon Meringue bit... how she used it to lubricate his bit... that was seriously unexpected, and wonderful!!! Creative use of cream filling, it was... XD



Author's Response:

Hooray! You're right.  I made it to 300 because of all your super nice reviews!  Thank you so much again! :)  *throws confetti in the air*

Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Chemistry

Lemon Muffins. That's how it goes down, I hope... Muffins are my "thing" for writing, and whenever Lemony goodness happens in a story (lol) I try to include lemon muffins as a food item of some sort... Because I can XD

But wow, Typer DID like the idea! And Irina didn't--what a surprise. But I wonder... wasn't Irina one of the people who worked hard to get the show running? Isn't that what Tyler said when he introduced her? I hope it isn't possible for her to use her influence to make things hard on Edward and Bella... (and by the by, did SHE pick Edward for the show? It would be funny if she specifically pushed for him to win because he's pretty, but he doesn't fall all over himself for her... lol)



Author's Response:

Irina did have a hand in picking Edward for the show.  Irina was one of the execs to get this started, but it's mostly been Tylers baby.  She hasn't had too much to do with the show, she's been too busy enjoying her new high status.

Hmm ... lemon muffins, never tried one. :)

Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Gossip

Haha!!! who wants to bet that Tyler likes the idea? A roance always makes shows better, and the execs will think this would be great for ratings, i'd wager, lol...

Poor Edward, though... the girl just wanted to get into his pants, and wiping them off was the closest she could get, I suppose. And I love how Edward really did think they were making those instant biscuits... so adorable! XD

Reviewer: mrscullen (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Intuition

great chapter! update soon!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! :)  Next chapter should be coming up soon.

Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Late

Nice... Love how different they both thought of the conversation, and how he didn't show up, so she panicked, and Angela had to talk her down from showing up at his place...

But didn't Bella already have Edward's number? I thought that he gave it to her in case she needed to cancel their first private cooking lesson at her house... Or did I totally make that up and/or confuse it from another fic I'm reading? lol



Author's Response:

You are actually the first person to notice that!!  That was a slip up on my part.  I went through and edited that out.  Thank you! :)

Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chopsticks

Oh, don't even get me started on Jacob... I have such a strange stance when it comes to him: I love him truly, madly, deeply (yes, I'm listening to savage garden right now, lol) and desperately, but I don't like the idea of him and Bella together... You know, people actually get MAD if your Jacob is likable? Just all "why did you write him like that! he should be calling Bella a skank and trying to attack her!" And I just sit there, utterly appalled... lol.

Ah, well Jasper explains why the apartment was masculine, I suppose...

And she talked about Laurent in her sleep... why did Edward wait so long to mention it? I imagine he was jealous at first, but he probably realized it was the ex, so that faded, maybe? And I'm guessing he waited to mention it until later so the memory wouldn't mar their perfect day?



Author's Response:

Ah! I'm the same!  I really like Jacob, hes so sweet and just a really good guy, but I loathe fic's where he ends up with Bella.  I'm a hardcore canon couple fan.  It's Bella and Edward, or nothing for me. I'm so cookie cutter it's disgusting. lol

haha they get mad if he's nice? Yikes ...I haven't experienced that yet because well ... I haven't really written about him. :)

Bella was kind of having a Laurent nightmare.  The conversation before had him fresh in her mind.  The way she cried his name in her sleep freaked out/scared/worried Edward, maybe even made him a bit jealous.  He didn't know how to ask, or how to bring up her saying another man's name, so of course Edward being Edward fretted about it all day until he couldn't hold back anymore.

Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Delicious

Teehee... Edward is too good to be true. Does he have any flaws?!?! lol...

I think I'm just glad that Bella isn't second guessing herself in the monring, because if they had chemistry before... imagine how hot it will be in their kitchen NOW!!!! XD



Author's Response:

Hmm ... he doesnt have too many small flaws. just his major one of being abysmal in the kitchen.  Which is really charming more so than a flaw ... ^_^

 

Oh goodness, it gets flaming hot in the kitchen ... might want to bring out the aloe vera!

Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Help?

So I finally get your penname... I've been trying to figure it out this whole time hahaha

And about your Tanya comment; I agree completely! I put her in a story recently, and the feedback was crazy! Bella even admitted in her mind that it was a good thing Tanya showed up, and the reviewers STILL thought she was only there to cause trouble. I find it interesting how certain stereotypes from fanfictions are now "fact" such as Tanya being a bitch, or someone to be hated for some reason or another. So I made her into a sweet girl who is a veternarian for small animals. Lol. And who helps Bella get together with Edward. Because she dpesn't deserve the rap she has... Oh, and I also made Lauren a lesbian, but THAT is another story for another time.

Ahem.

But EPOV! yay! I always enjoy these, especially if they're sudden and come out of nowhere, lol. It's good to see another personality, and how another person thinks in different situations.

And I love how Edward just keeps thinking, rather thsn giving in. Poor Bella is going to think that he doesn't want her anymore, though, if he doesn't make a decision soon! But I have to give the boy props for keeping his mind as long as he has so far... he's got some incredible self control! XD



Author's Response:

I forgot for a second that my name was abreviated on here, haha.  Yeah, green eyed girl.  On fanfiction it's actually spelled out, don't ask my why I didn't make them the same. ^_^

I agree too, there are some hardcore stereotypes forming out there.  I try really hard to avoid them when possible.  Jacob is another one that bugs me, he's not a bad guy in the books.  He's her best friend, and here there are hundreds of stories where he is an absolute creep and it kinda makes me feel bad for him. lol

I recently discovered I love writing EPOV's, especially when writing the smuttier scenes.  I wrote my first Bella lemon recently and I found it really difficult. EPOV will continue to make random appearances in the story to come.

Thank you for still reviewing!  :)

Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Cougar

Lol, you are so nice, replying to all the reviews... not many people do that--I try, but it takes me a while sometimes, lol--so thank yoiu. It makes me feel as if my words are appreciated :)

Irina... Once again, you pull a twist. Most people would use Tanya, but you're trying something different, and I like it. I wonder if Laurent will take Irina off of Edward's (unwilling XD) hands haha

I really like how Edward made the effort to take Bella home. If he had just left, Bella would have been wondering if he left alone or not, and this way, she can see that he's still interested in her. So I wonder what plan Drunken Bella is concocting to make Edward Cullen hers... I hope it's sketchy XD



Author's Response:

You're welcome!  It's a slow night for me here.  Every review is appreciated :) and it's the least I could do since you're started reviewing from chapter one.

Yeah, I think Tanya gets a pretty bad wrap in most fanfics, but really in the actual story she never did anything wrong.  Irina on the othe hand ... bad seed. lol

haha yep ... there is sketchiness coming!

Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Twilight

Laurent?!?!?! lol!

Is it terrible that the entire rest of the chapter went out of my mind when I read that line????

I'm too excited for what comes next to give a proper review, but know that I thought this chapter was utterly fanTASTIC!



Author's Response:

haha told you it would surprise you! :)

I'm so happy you're still enjoying the story!

Thank you for the continuously nice reviews!

 

Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Red Hot

So she didn't give him the apron yet? Or did the flour still get evrrywhere on his shirt, I wonder...

But really?!? They're getting together already?! I don't know if I should hope for that, or hope for an interruption of some sort (maybe her ex who burned her in the past? Angela calling? Alice calling Edward?) so that the tension could be prolonged... If it's a cliffie, that usually means that they'll be interrupted, lol.

I'm just glad that I don't have to wait to find out XD



Author's Response:

Nope, she did't give it too him yet.  She's still really unsure about where everything is heading at this point.

Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Lunch

So why does Bella save the pieces of the broken dishes? To make a mural? That sounds like a silly guess, but it's something I would do, and it would look crappy, but it wouldn't be a waste hahaha

Poor Bella is attracted to Edward... and the silly girl thinks she can fight it! HA! XD

But it was obvious Bella didn't know what she was doing by her conflicting emotions and actions in this chapter... the busy lunch hour is upon them, and she invites Edward in the back when she knows she'll have to take the time to watch out for him. She doesn't want to be attracted to him, yet she teases him with the strawberry juice. The gal sure has game when she wants to... lol...



Author's Response:

Lol soo ... broken dishes ... honestly, I dont know why she said that. My beta added that line in and I thought it was kind of funny.

Thank you again for the review!

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