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Reviewer: Lisemus (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2012 09:35 AM · On: Preface
Great story, I love your Edward in this story, he's not nearly as angst-filled as in other fics.. or, maybe he is, just a bit.
Lol, I thought it was so fun that your OC's name was Lise. That's my name, and you hardly ever hear it. Love your Lise, by the way. So, please don't kill me, you know? I know, I know, make room for Bella, but still..
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 9
I love this story!!!!! Please continue!!!! I hope Edward really does marry her! I'm sitting on the edge of my seat expecting him to bolt because it would be the "right" thing to do! Grrr.....I sincerely hope not! Love it!!!!!!
Reviewer: ISOFUNNY (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Preface
This is such a unique idea! I love it!! I was trying to find a story out there like this one!!! =D Lovely job!
Reviewer: deacongirl01 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 9
I'm really enjoying this story and I find Lise's character to be very believable and likeable. I'm eager to see where the story goes.
Reviewer: twilightlover502 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 9
excellent!
Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 9
Eek, Margaux was mean. :/ I think I have what happens figured out now though...Carlisle changes Esme and she kills Lise by accident. Eh?
Reviewer: songirl (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Preface
This is lovely Tallis. I am going to read some more.
Reviewer: yummo_Pattinson (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 8
That was very different but I enjoyed it very Kudos!
Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 8
I loved this chapter. :) Something about it...but I can't put my finger on it. Or perhaps it was the fact that I was listening to Join Me In Death by HIM all through. Hmmm... lol
Update soon mon amis!
Author's Response: I'm glad you loved this chapter. I promise another update is on it's way.
Reviewer: Zipkins (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 7
Interesting... I'm not entirely sure what to think about this,but it is interesting...
Author's Response: I'm glad that you find this fic interesting. I hope you keep wanting to read!
Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 7
Ah, I see. Lise is like Bella (in a this AU) but she's going to be killed...me thinks. One day. Hmmm, update soon!
Author's Response: Always the guesser, SeeMyEvil. I hope I can keep you on your toes!
Reviewer: Isis (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 7
Normally I don't like Edward/OC, but this story is something else (in a very good way). Lise is very much like Bella and I wonder where you're going with this. I can't wait to find out.
Author's Response: It makes me very happy to know that you consider this E/OC story something else in a very good way. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: twilightlover502 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 6
I'm so intrigued! Please continue SOON! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're intrigued! I will be updating with more frequency in the coming weeks!
Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 6
Hmmm, Edward is only 2 years old really. :/ I think he'll slip up one day.
Great chapter! Update soon
Author's Response: Thanks for continuing to read. Hopefully updates will be more frequent.
Reviewer: Cassie Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 5
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Wow.
Just... wow.
Can I just say that I think your OC is the most charming OC ever?! When you read about her, you get this feeling like you're actually there with her feeling as she's feeling. Once in a blue moon do I find amazing Edward/OC stories as this, and now you have me hooked. So watch out, because I may just hound you for updates. ;)
Once more, your Original Character is the cutest thing ever.
Pleaaaase update soon?!
- Cassie :)
Author's Response: Hey Cass,
Lise is so much fun to write, and I'm glad you're enjoying her as much as I am. I'm glad you think that Shears falls into the catagory of once in a blue moon fic.
Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 5
Hmmmm, Lise is still getting ahead of erself, but then Edward seems to be getting involved too...? Is this going to be a Lise and Edward romance, out of curiosity?
Author's Response: Well, keep reading to find out :)
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 5
Nice --- MORE
Author's Response: I promise more is on it's way.
Reviewer: twilightlover502 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 4
This is truly excellent writing... and the story is so intriguing! Please continue. I'll be checking back nearly every day =)
Author's Response: Thanks for checking in for updates. It means a lot.
Reviewer: twilightlover502 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Preface
Loved it! Amazing writing, by the way.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter! :) But Lise is getting ahead of herself...it'll only end in tears - or blood. Eek!
Update soon.
Author's Response: Tears or blood? We'll see...
Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 4
Yay for random snow! I am really liking your story and your way with words--next time I'm with someone whom I don't share much in common, your venn diagram imagry is going to pop into my head.
Thanks for writing, and I promise to keep reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Ha, I take it that you like snow then? I'm not a fan of it, not really. I'm glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: sillysac (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 4
I really like this story, but I'm not sure where it's headed. It snowed last night where I live too, an dit usually only snows in December or January!
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, silly. I promise you, soon the story will become much more clear.
Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 3
*puts story on favourites*
Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Preface
Wow, I really love the reeling of the colours, it was poetic. "pervasive indigo" was my favourite. It looks like a great story, will read more.
Author's Response: Thank you for favoriting the story. The colors were my favorite part to write, and I am very happy that you enjoyed them as well.
Reviewer: sarah-jess (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 2
Edward <3 I feel you, man.. wait, It's still the late 1910's. oh. sorry!
And this was awesome. I can't wait for the paris trip. :)
Thanks for writing the story!
Author's Response: Sorry this took so long... I think I intended to write back and then got distracted. Anyway, thank you for reading, and I do hope you like the Paris trip.
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