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Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Morning
loved the entire beach scene...
Author's Response: Bella and I really wrestled over when and how - that girl! <><3
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Night and the Forest
*sigh*
yeah.
Author's Response: I know... don't I wish life imitated art more. <><3
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Momentum
sweet mother of chin rides.... i wasn't expecting that! woot jake! way to take the reins!
Author's Response: Anticipation and build-up are important parts of any seduction... <><3
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Dots
Great chapter! :)
Author's Response: Thank you, my dear! Good to hear from you...<><3
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Black and Blue
i love that you've given Jake a backstory to support his maturity and world outlook. so much more depth to him than just a lovesick indian boy who inherits an unwanted compulsion for shapeshifting...
Author's Response: Substance abuse is such a problem in this popoulation, it seemed a given; plus I wanted Jake to have come through something really hard - to explain his amazing patience with Bella! <><3
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Tiny Fish
wow - from swatting at a bee to full on hissy! yikes! poor Jake's really on edge!
Author's Response: Jealousy is so painful... <><3
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Insights
LOOOVE her 'scenting' him - great way to burn some new memory pathways in the brain, and REALLY love that kiss... *whew* and of course, the convo with Billy was lovely, love her recognizing his handsomeness.
Author's Response: An interesting echo of the 'meadow', don't all relationships grow on what you learned from others? This was my chance to fill out a side character who I always tho't would be pretty deep. <><3
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:24 PM · On: A Study in Black
love her realizing she never really bothered to LOOK at jake, find out who he is - he was the ultimate 'taken for granted' friend to her.
Author's Response: Time for B to get out of her self-absorbtion; enough wallowing in her loss! <><3
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:23 PM · On: After the Fall
oooh diamond! i'm so along for this ride!
Author's Response: Excellent! Buckle up...<><3
Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Dots
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what Sue discovers about Bella's ancestors!
Author's Response: Thanks! I think every one may be a bit busy for genealogy for a while...<><3
Reviewer: mzinke (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Dots
I loved the story. I loved the black's history and the lemons. The next was awesome too. Update soon
Author's Response: Thank you. The next chapter is in the cue. Glad you're having fun! <><3
Reviewer: mzinke (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Dots
I loved the story. I loved the black's history and the lemons. The next was awesome too. Update soon
Reviewer: sciphile (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Night and the Forest
Wow...fantastic sex scene! Great writing.
Author's Response: Thanks! It was good for me, too! <><3
Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 11:29 PM · On: A Study in Black
I like this story! It's good Bella didn't fall in Jacob's arms in the first chapter! It's credible, and I'm so happy to read a Jacob/Bella story! :) Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Dots
I LOVE THIS STORY - I AM A MOM OF 2 GIRLS - OBSEESED WITH TWILIGHT - I AM TEAM EDWARD - BUT I LOVE YOUR STORY - I LIKE THIS STRONG BELLA - DID JACOB IMPRINT ON BELLA?
Author's Response: I love Edward, too - I just love Jacob more! Wish I could get him to imprint on me...<><3
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 04:12 AM · On: After the Fall
I was looking at the series and i saw your banner. I couldn't not leave you a review about it! Wow!!!! Where did you find this picture of Taylor (sorry, Jacob^^) ? It's awesome. I like the whole thing!
Reviewer: monikalopez (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Dots
Simply amazing. I can't wait to read the next chapter. This is great writing. Will be waiting for the next update! =D Thank you for this great story btw!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. I'm having so much fun with this fic, glad you are, too! <><3
Reviewer: monikalopez (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Interlude - Jacob's POV
...oh my that was HOT.
May I just say this story is like driving me wild.. stayed up till 2AM last night.. and now this morning cant' stop either... amazing stuff.... WOW
Reviewer: ScarlettButler (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Insights
I really like the way you handled Bella's longing for the Cullens. The trace of venom in her bloodstream is believable and adds a new dynamic to the story that you can really take and run with. I cannot wait to read more!
Author's Response: Funny thing is, I hadn't even planned that part - it just happened while I was at the keyboard! Then it just was so right! Amazing feeling... <><3
Reviewer: fr33bird (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Dots
excellent - very exciting!
looking forward to the next installment :)
Reviewer: fr33bird (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Confusion
that was such a sweet chapter! and beautifully lemony too of course.
It's so nice getting to read about a lovely Jake, he gets such a raw deal in some of the E/B fics. This fic reminds me why I loved him in the books!
Author's Response: Thank you! This is the way I always saw Jake - and the man he would turn into. In so many fics he's a bestial jerk. I just had to post my own version *sigh*. <><3
Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Renee
In the originals, I though that SM had pretty much cut Renee out of Bella's life when she moved, other than a few mentions of emails, she was gone... I loved seeing her in this chapter, as a Mom should be, open, honest, and understanding...
You are an amazing writer, keep going, let the story take you where it may, regardless of anything else out there!!! It IS a NICE LOVE STORY, and it is beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for leaving all the lovely reviews! I have quite a glow now! My husband thinks I'm having an affair, from the way I keep staring off into space & smiling to myself... little does he know! <><3
Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Interlude - Jacob's POV
Incredible!!!!!!!!!!! I seriously CANNOT put my laptop down... I am sitting here reading your story with a big stupid grin on my face!
There are a MILLION things I could be doing right now, but I can't bring myself to stop reading. Jacob's POV on their 1st night together.. he was soooo passionate, and soft... almost made me cry.. then laugh my ass off... then cry some more!!!
You are an amazing, incredibly visual writer... can't WAIT to read more!
Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Night and the Forest
Awesome, awesome, awesome..... Romantic, just soooo.... no words to express how AMAZING that chapter was!!!
Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 06:22 AM · On: Momentum
Excellent chapter... very tasteful... yet wonderfully erotic! I absolutely adore Jacob's intense confidence... wonderful change from other stories where he is far too brash and hormone driven... here he is strong, sensual and confident..
Can't stop reading... love this story!
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