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Reviews For Moonshadow
Reviewer: Griffs_Shu (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Proof of Life

Whooo! Great chapter...I always can go for some J/B lovin lol. Can't wait to read the next chapter :o) Update soon!



Author's Response:

So happy you enjoyed it! <><3

Reviewer: NewDAWN (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 07:45 PM · On: After the Fall

Wow. You have me switched to Bella/Jacob. I do think it would have been the healthier choice at the time. Neways... great chap!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I just loved how Jake was always 'there' for Bella, but always called her on her crap! What a guy (being hot and hunky helps too, of course!) <><3

Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Proof of Life

Oh! i loved this lemon! it was so juicy! And the intimacy was just beyond this world. :) i loved every second of it! more please!



Author's Response:

Nothing like some tangy refreshment! Glad it was a hit! <><3

Reviewer: MJW (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Proof of Life

I was so excited that you had added another chapter, and it was awesome by the way!!  How wonderful is Jake??  As usual he knew exactly how to make Bella feel better.  Oh, and the tattoo?!  Love it!

How could we not forgive you for squeezing in THAT lemon?!!  It was perfect!

 



Author's Response:

Jake can throw me a lifeline any time! Glad you liked the tat! Seemed like a natural. <><3

Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Proof of Life

Excellent chapter... I do LOVE your story!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! <><3

Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Proof of Life

holy crap, cant wait for this next chapter. to know if shes actually writing to him (cause where would she send a letter?), or just having a dream or something. i dont know, but am very excited to find out.



Author's Response:

More will be revealed... thanks for reading. <><3

Reviewer: toooldforthis (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Proof of Life

Well, that lemon was definitely hot and much appreciated.  I loved how you worked in a bit of depression after a near-death experience.  I think it was more than appropriate.  But, of course, I'd sign up for that kind of "therapy" any day.  Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

The therapy line starts behind me! <><3

Reviewer: ikss (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Proof of Life

Do we really need an excuse for lemony goodness and why would you ask our forgiveness? :)

Actually, I think you're totally right - this was not just hot, but important to her as well as to their relationship in the aftermath of being so close to death. It made perfect sense.

And yes...hot, hot, HOT!!!! :)



Author's Response:

It just seemed so... reasonable, Glad you enjoyed it! <><3

Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Proof of Life

Great chapter! Was a little worried about Bella's depression but, once more, Jacob knew just what to do. :) This was such a tender and loving scene, I loved it!



Author's Response:

I know that 'therapy' would do me all kinds of good! Glad you liked it! <><3

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Proof of Life

I cannot believe that you left a teaser like that! She's going to communicate with Edward? Sincethis is a Bella/Jake story, I think that it is safe to assume that things with Edward won't work out.



Author's Response:

*cackles insanely* I am sooo mean, aren't I...? <><3

Reviewer: MJW (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Magnetic North

Well it's almost 12pm here (have to get up early for work tomorrow but it was soo worth it) and I have finally caught up on all the chapters to date.  Gotta tell you that I am really enjoying this and loving Jake!  Sooo jealous of Bella right now ;-)

 

Cant wait till the next installment!



Author's Response:

I'm so flattered - you're cutting into your sleep time for this fic! I know I wish it was me having this romance! <><3

Reviewer: MJW (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Black Hole

This chapter was great!!  Finally got to see Victoria's return!!  Now off to the the next chapter to find out what happens next :-)

Reviewer: MJW (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 03:57 AM · On: Nightmares

I'm just loving this story!  I really love Jacob and Bella together and I just can't stop reading to find out what happens next!!

 

By the way .... loved the wolf ride!

Reviewer: CLBee (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Morning

I really enjoyed this chapter, nicely done :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! <><3

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Magnetic North

Yay, everyone's ok!  :)



Author's Response:

What a relief, huh? <><3

Reviewer: savwhitlock (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 06:33 PM · On: After the Fall

Love it! Love it love it. Write more =)

Especially love how Bella is actually over Edward... what with asking to die rather than being a vampire.

but... I hope Bella and Jacob don't end up related... what with their family trees possibly being linked. Ew gross repeat.

 



Author's Response:

Well, it would be like 4 or 5 generations ago... nothing to be squicky about! <><3

Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Magnetic North

that was a touching chapter. those 2 sure are cute together. are  they ever gonna find the stuff hiding under bellas floorboards? you know, the pics and what-not that edward left?...



Author's Response:

I'm going to tuck that question away for future reference, hmmm... <><3

Reviewer: aleene35 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 03:03 PM · On: After the Fall

I am busy reading all of them. I just love Jake with Bella



Author's Response:

Excellent! <><3

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Magnetic North

Love this story.  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, glad you're enjoying! <><3

Reviewer: monikalopez (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Magnetic North

ew.. lots of nasty smells to mix in.. lol.. pretty funny..

This explained a lot... still great chapter!



Author's Response:

Trust those wise old Indians to have figured out how to get around the scent issue! Thanks for all the R & R's! <><3

Reviewer: monikalopez (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Black Hole

OMG.. its so late... but I can't stop reading...
Wow, this got GOOOOOD! I was not expecting such a sudden twist with Victoria appearing so quickly.. love it!
Must read on!!!!  =D



Author's Response:

Thank you! I was so worried that I wouldn't be able to make the chapter creepy enough... <><3

Reviewer: monikalopez (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Nightmares

Yeah, okay wolf ride SO worth the wait. LOL.

May I say that was hot... Jacobs inner animal did most the work this time... *wink* lol. Very hot.
Very cute touch at the end right after comforting Bella..  they make sweet sweet love.. lol... I was like "Aww..." :)



Author's Response:

I found the ride, er, refreshing, myself! What a way to be comforted... <><3

Reviewer: monikalopez (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Dots

Yay, I finally caught up to all the past chapters I read before.. from this point on the story is all new stuff to me yay!

LOL.. first off.. wow.. I love the fact that you give Leah her little part.. it still bugged the crap out of me that in BD we never knew what path Leah would take since the whole Emily/Sam thing... that's cool.

Second, Vampires out on the run? Hmm.. this is getting interesting...

Thirice..thirdly? Third? LOL... Bella may be part indian? Hmmm. intersting twist! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I never felt Leah got a fair shake - I know what it's like being the only girl in the boy's club - she had to be tough! She also had a good reason! (There will be a bit more about her, later) Glad you're enjoying the story! <><3

Reviewer: CLBee (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Insights

I really like where this is going so far! Loved the Billy convo, that's an interesting twist! Great job :)

Author's Response:

Billy's quit a man , isn't he - now we know why Jake turned out so well! Thank you! <><3

Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Magnetic North

awww i loved the end. so sweet i could vomit rainbows :)

What a GREAT fight scene. You did such an awesome job. I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Wow! What a mental image that conjures up! I'm so happy you liked it! <><3

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