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Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Interlude - Jacob's POV
Good idea to throw in Jacobs pov... It was good
Author's Response: It somehow became imperative to show (some pretty memorable) things from his side. Glad you liked it! <><3
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Insights
Hmm, the Billy conversation resembles the Christian version of soul ties and the only way to break it is to renounce it...that concept you weaves with Bellas infatuation is interesting. Still appreciate Jake being a gentleman so far.
Author's Response: To tell the truth, Billy is the one who told me about that - I had something else in mind when I sat down at the keyboard! <><3
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 07:51 PM · On: A Study in Black
Just found this and I see it's finished but thought I say I like the fact that Jake is not written as a dumb kid with no manners and self control. So far I'm digging the fic.
Author's Response: Thanks! I got so weary of fics w/Jake portrayed as a moronic oaf - or worse - that I had to write my own! <><3
Reviewer: krazigal23_2004 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Epilogue
Wow. That story was amazing. Loved how Jacob and Bella both put Edward in his place. :)
Author's Response: *grin* Bella's come a long way from the girl he left lying broken in the forest! So glad you enjoyd it! <><3
Reviewer: ashleymarisa (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Momentum
For a first-timer, the love scene was great! Of course, I would have loved for Bella's....response to be a little more detailed, but it was very good. Thank you for such a beautiful story. This is how it should have happened!
Author's Response: Please, read on! The, um, details increase as their relationship grows...! (I think B was a little overwhelmed at the time, I know I would be*blush*) <><3
Reviewer: ashleymarisa (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 01:13 PM · On: A Study in Black
The story just keeps getting better! Can't want to read the entire series.
Author's Response: Great! Glad you stopped by to r&r; I think you'll enjoy the rest! <><3
Reviewer: TequilaMarie1980 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Epilogue
This by far is the best one I've read yet! Great Job!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I'm pleased you like it. <><3
Reviewer: Edwardmyedward (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Momentum
Fabulous! Extremely tasteful! But don't be shy to "trash it up" more! We Twilight fans NEED sexy lemons. God knows SM teased and starved us to death! :) Absolutely awesome! This is my SECOND read. I wanted to be completely up to speed for the next story i just found you did!
Author's Response: Ooooohh! A reread! Balm to an author's soul - truly, that's the highest compliment! As the relationship progresses, I tried to add a bit more detail...w/o going too far out of canon style. ;> You'll *ahem* enjoy 93 Million Miles, I'm sure!<><3
Reviewer: angel 057 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Momentum
I thought it was fantastic. Very well written, you did a great job. Especially for a first time.
angel 057
Author's Response: Thank you so much - I think I actually blushed when I uploaded it! <><3
Reviewer: angel 057 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Insights
I really enjoyed this chapter. I have never read one from Billy's point of view that was so in depth but could still go along with the original story line of the book. It was fantastic!!!
angel 057
Author's Response: This chap was a rather amazing experience: I had something else in mind - then Billy kind of took over! His explanations of things were so much better than the ones I had come up with!! That made me know that this fic-writing thing was gonna work out... <><3
Reviewer: angel 057 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 03:53 PM · On: After the Fall
I just read the first chapter and I like your train of thought on this particular story line. Can't wait to see what future chapters hold.
angel 057
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I just had to answer my own questions about "what if...?" <><3
Reviewer: GuysGirls3 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Epilogue
I loved this story except the part about Leah ending up a Lesbian. I really wanted her to find a man even hotter than Sam to put him into his place!!
Overall, job well done!!
Author's Response: Oh, I imagined Dee as being pretty hot, herself! Somtimes the Muse just put someting in your head that won't go away... glad you liked the rest of it! *grin* <><3
(I don't know if you'd be interested in my Leah fic 'You Belong to Me'...?)
Reviewer: lucyferina (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Epilogue
very good story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!<><3
Reviewer: nttmprmtl (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Epilogue
thanks to you I accomplished absolutely nothing at work today. This was fantastic! Thanks so much, you have a real talent.
Author's Response: *huge grin* I can't quite bring myself to feel guilty...Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! <><3
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 03:17 AM · On: Epilogue
I loved this story! Your insight on Bella's character development was great. I like the thought of Edward would have only waited 6 months... things would have been different. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Even tho' it took a couple of reads of the Saga for me to become a die hard wolf girl (I love E, of course, I just have a significant preference!) I adored J right from the start - and was very cross with B for her treatment of him! I always thought, if there just been a little more time for Bella to distance herself, if she'd let herslef see that love has different faces - if she'd gotten out of her own self-absorbed way!!! So glad you liked it! <><3
Reviewer: RisiePookie (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Proof of Life
Their tenderness and genuine affection comes right off the page. I thought this chapter was absolutely wonderful!
Author's Response: This chap hadn't been in my original (very incomplete) outline - I got a lot of surprise additions, actually - but it just seemed to me tha Bella would need some decompression time & uh, help to recover from her ordeal... <><3
Reviewer: RisiePookie (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Momentum
Gorgeous!
Author's Response: Ahhh...*sigh* <><3
Reviewer: RisiePookie (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Tiny Fish
Just lovely...
Author's Response: That scenario was one of the first things that came to mind when I first thought, "hey maybe I CAN write something..." <><3
Reviewer: RisiePookie (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Insights
I stumbled across this fic while looking for good Jacob/Bella and I wanted to let you know I absolutely love your writing style! Thank you for sharing with us!
Author's Response: So happy you found MS & thank you for the compliment, but I have to give Billy a lot of the credit for Chap 3 - he kinda told me what to write!! Have you checked out the Bella and Jacob Chronicles? <><3
Reviewer: gg1982 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Epilogue
OK THAT WAS THE BEST STORY I EVER READ-IM SO SO SPEECHLESS-I ALWAYZ WANTED JACOB AND BELLA 2GETHER BUT WHAT DID WAS WAY BETTER THEN I EVER THOUGHT IT COULD BE BETWEEN THEM-IM TELLIN U IF THIS GOT PUBLISHED I WOULD BE FIRST IN LINE!!! WOW I THINK ILL READ IT ALL AGAIN-TY 4 HAVIN WROTE SUCH AN AMAZIN STORY-I WLL BE ADDIN U 2 MY FAV AUTHORS! THANKS AGAIN!!
Author's Response: Isn't fanfiction GREAT!?! I was so happy to be able to give these two the ending I thought they should have (and enjoy a little vicarious living at the same time!) Have you checked out the Bella and Jacob Chronicles? Thanks for reading and reviewing! <><3
Reviewer: gg1982 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 06:22 AM · On: Easy as Breathing
THAT WAS AMAZIN! GREAT JOB!!
Author's Response: Thank you, it was a true pleasure to write something so unabashedly mushy! <><3
Reviewer: crystalaspyn (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Epilogue
Masterfull!!! I laughed my ass off due to the end of the epilogue! Justice! hee hee haw muahahaha! That was my maniacal laugh BTW! The rest of Moonshadow was absolutely beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you, I thought that Bella and Jake had been more than patient & gracious by that time! So glad you enjoyed it! <><3
Reviewer: gg1982 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Night and the Forest
MAN U KNOW HOW 2WRITE GREAT STUFF-AMAZIN IS ALL ICAN SAY!!!
Author's Response: *grin* I wanted it to be areally memorable occasion for them both...<><3
Reviewer: gg1982 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Momentum
THAT WAS THE SHIT-PARDON MY FRENCH BUT DANG- PERFECT COULDNT HAVE BEEN BETER!!!
Author's Response: Merci bien! I rather fancy that scene myself...<><3
Reviewer: terry_deanne (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 01:45 PM · On: After the Fall
This was the first Jacob & Bella story I read, it was amazing!!! I loved it, I am soooo Team Jacob, always have been & it's just so nice seeing him finaly getting what he deserves..... I've read other stories, but I've read this one a couple of times now & I think it may well be my fav... Sad it's over, but the ending was great, truly satisfying... Thank you very much for sharing. x
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so pleased it warranted a reread! Always the highest compliment. I was absolutely smitten with Jake in the Saga and just HAD to form a more satisfying ending... <><3
I just posted a follow up o/s that you should check out.
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