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Reviews For Show Me
Reviewer: darkliss (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2019 03:28 PM · On: Show Me (v)

Dirty, just  how I like it x

Reviewer: Susan2e (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2012 08:09 PM · On: Show Me (v)

Awesomely delicious!

Reviewer: Susan2e (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2012 08:08 PM · On: Show Me (v)

Awesomely delicious!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2011 12:49 PM · On: Show Me (v)

So far I've read Acclimation Diaries, plus outtakes, Bizarro Twilight and nearly all your one-shots. I must say, you take this old ladies' breath away! Damn, girl, you're better than good!

Reviewer: aechorp (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 03:42 AM · On: Show Me (v)

That was fun;)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much, I'm so glad you enjoyed :)

Reviewer: tpol (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Show Me (v)

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  *MWAH*MWAH*MWHA*

Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Show Me (v)

HOLY SHIT!  This was amazing. I think I need to go smoke now! Got 3 chapters into The Acclimation Diaries and had to come see what was up with "The night before...". This was fan-fucking-tastic!



Author's Response:

*heehee* I'm glad you found "The night before..."

Thanks for reading sweets *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*

Reviewer: TheBunny (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 10:44 PM · On: Show Me (v)

!@%&$%$&@%$! THAT WAS HOT!!!



Author's Response:

BWAHAHAH!  Thank you very much!  *MWHA*MWAH*MWHA*

Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 11:14 PM · On: Show Me (v)

Well damn it, you did it again! You made me wish all the books were written like this! Would it be asking too much to ask you to write four complete books in your wonderfully wicked way? I know, like you really have that kind of time on your hands, but I think it's a really good wish none the less ;)



Author's Response:

LMAO!!  That is very sweet, thank you so much!  *MWHA*MWAH*MWAH*

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Show Me (v)

WOW, I need to excuse myself now!! my husband will thank you later LOL



Author's Response:

LOL!  Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed *MWHA*MWAH*

Reviewer: Squirt (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 03:38 AM · On: Show Me (v)

Dear BBK - this gem is definitely worth a re-read. I'll always cum back for more of your deliciously lemony smut. Luv ya!



Author's Response:

;)  Thanks babes!  *MWHA*MWAH*MWHA*

Reviewer: Squirt (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Show Me (v)

I've been in Avoidance Mode, ignoring a pile of nasty paperwork calling for my attention and I can't rip myself away from your stories. So freakin' hot! I have a very rich fantasy life and my freak flag has completely unfurled, thanks to you. Once again, I love you, BBK.



Author's Response:

This was the story that started The Acclimation Diaries :)  Wave that freak flag high and wide babe, I love you to bits and bits!!  *MWHA*MWHA*MWHA*

Reviewer: elina (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 01:51 AM · On: Show Me (v)

very nicely written!!!!! indeed!

thanx



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed!!  *MWAH*MWHA*MWAH*

Reviewer: TrueSkye (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 01:47 AM · On: Show Me (v)

Wow! The hottest fanfic! Great work.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much I'm so glad you enjoyed!  *MWAH*MWHA*MWAH*

Reviewer: TrueSkye (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 01:47 AM · On: Show Me (v)

Wow! The hottest fanfic! Great work.

Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Show Me (v)

WOW!! That was excellent.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm very happy that  you enjoyed!!  *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*

Reviewer: Squirt (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 04:42 PM · On: Show Me (v)

O-M-G! I love this one-shot too. Awsome!



Author's Response:

As you can see, I respond to all of my reviews LOL.  This one shot is actually what set The Acclimation Diaries into motion, so I have a lot of love for it!  I say thank you a lot, because I am so very thankful, not only that someone has stopped by to read my drivel, but that they have also taken the time out of their day to leave a review.  So again I say THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH!!  *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*

Reviewer: Tunesgrl (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Show Me (v)

W-O-W!  That was....incredible!  I actually think I'm having problems forming coherant thoughts myself at the moment!  Gotta say I love your version of Edward....extremely HOT! 



Author's Response:

Heehee!  Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed!!  *MWAH*

Reviewer: wannabbella (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Show Me (v)

That was sooo freakin' hot that I need a cold shower right now!!!  Thank you thank you...I can't wait to read your other story!!



Author's Response:

*teehee* Thank you very much, I hope you enjoy the other story *MWHA*MWHA*MWAH*

Reviewer: samt915 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Show Me (v)

wow, I have NEVER been so hot and heated reading one of these before.  I need a cold shower, lol.  Thanks for the umm. enjoyment??



Author's Response:

LMAO!  Thank you very much, I'm glad you...enjoyed yourself ;)  *MWAH*

Reviewer: Carbface Jones (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 08:04 PM · On: Show Me (v)

Very fun, concise, well written.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!!  *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*

Reviewer: TwilightMelissa (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Show Me (v)

loved it x x



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed!!  *MWHA*MWHA*MWAH*

Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 09:30 PM · On: Show Me (v)

That was so great! So sensual. I got lost in the story! Fuckin' awesome!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  *MWAH*

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Show Me (v)

Quite a surprise to have him in Bella's bedroom after a lukewarm shower.  Edward just lounging on her bed.  The boy didn't lounge for long.  Pushed the limits of his control and Bella's.  Removed the barrier between Bella's towel and his vision.  Too much visual stimuli to his control on himself.  Doing things to Bella vicariously with his hand over hers and watching her touch herself.  His control limits have reached their maximum.  He can't handle any further visual, sensory input before his control would be lost.  The man or the vampire or maybe both.  As it occurred he had to jump out the window before Bella reached her climax and he reached his on the run to the trees.  Whatever happened to Mr. Prude?  Extremely daring and elicited for Edward.  Exciting and enticing for both Edward and Bella.



Author's Response:

This actually was the one shot that was the catalyst for The Acclimation Diaries.  I'm glad you enjoyed!

Thanks always for reading! *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*

Reviewer: emilena (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Show Me (v)

WOW! that was awesome... and SO HOT! I can't help but wish for another chapter *crosses fingers*. You are a wonderful writer and I can't wait to read your other work! x



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! No more chapters for this but there is a companion story, The Acclimation Diaries *MWAH*

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