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Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2014 10:28 AM · On: Strawberry Blonde - Bella's Jealousy
I always thought that Edward sort of dodged a bullet in this particular part of the story!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2014 10:16 AM · On: Bella's Apology
Nice try, Bella, but you have your work cut out for you, changing Edward's limits!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2014 10:08 AM · On: Teasing
Edward may be physically seventeen, but sometimes his thinking is stuck, almost like his real age is affecting his thoughts! Makes it difficult for Bella to change his mind on almost anything!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2014 09:54 AM · On: Homecoming
It's always a fascinating experience to visit Edward's mind, especially when he's thinking of Bella, and hating Jacob!
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2013 11:35 AM · On: Strawberry Blonde - Bella's Jealousy
Thank you. That was very good.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 04:11 PM · On: Strawberry Blonde - Bella's Jealousy
Bella's angry message on Edward's phone when Alice kidnaps her is one of my favorite parts. You think she's going to take Edward's head off when he comes home. Then when he does she does a complete turn around and is so loving and forgiving. Of course, she had all the drama with Jacob telling her he wished she was dead rather than becoming a vampire. She has guilt that she escaped Alice knowing it would make Edward upset. The surprise was Edward wasn't upset about it. He made the decision that he had to accept her judgement to prevent a wedge in their relationship. Loved how you handled Edward's thinking through the situation with his surprise at her reactions. Also that you included his 17 year old lust desires when he would think and be around Bella. She definitely does push his limits and controls at ever turn. I thoroughly enjoyed the last four chapters on how you dealt with it. Especially his thoughts towards Rosalie in regards to Denali and female vampires personal interest in him. I hope he does dye all her clothes lime green, might teach her something. Not sure it would teach her to keep her mouth shut. Not Rosalie's style, but might show her, if you speak, there will be consequences to things you hold dear.
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2012 03:53 AM · On: Strawberry Blonde - Bella's Jealousy
I enjoyed reading this excerpt from Edward's POV. I believed you've captured him quite well. Thank you for sharing this!
Chyla
Reviewer: crazytwihard (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 07:10 PM · On: Bella's Apology
Nice chapter again...only I dint think edward wud enjoy the vision of billy crying over jacobs grave...that was too cold...edward isn't such a sadist...but apart from that the chp was wonderful...thoughts abt meaning to tell bella he is gonna fight and the fact that he used up his quota of restrain etc...liked it a lot
Reviewer: crazytwihard (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 06:53 PM · On: Teasing
Awesome as always:)
Reviewer: crazytwihard (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 06:37 PM · On: Homecoming
Wow...lovely chapter...u brought out edwards emotions so well...totally loved it
Reviewer: solecito (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Strawberry Blonde - Bella's Jealousy
i have read this story like 3 times already can you please o please continue it.
Reviewer: alycaly (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Strawberry Blonde - Bella's Jealousy
This was really fun to read. You did a great job getting inside Edward's head!
Reviewer: Intsu (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Strawberry Blonde - Bella's Jealousy
Thank you, I always love to hear Edward's point of view. I do hear his voice in your words.
Thank you.
Anne-Marie Witte
Reviewer: Kat-ryn (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Strawberry Blonde - Bella's Jealousy
Very nice. I do love me a nervous Edward.....
Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 11:21 AM · On: Strawberry Blonde - Bella's Jealousy
This is so very beautiful, and funny, and very well written. Ahh... Great work.
Reviewer: nisacullen (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 09:36 AM · On: Homecoming
You are one of my favorites! i reccomended dark side to everyone! another beautiful chapter but i'd expect nothing less!
Reviewer: jo4twilight (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:39 AM · On: Strawberry Blonde - Bella's Jealousy
Truly love your version of the return from hunting scene in Eclipse I have always loved this scene and enjoyed it so much in EPOV!! You have captured this to it's truest Edward & Bella form from others that I hae read. Thank you! On to read more of your writings! : )
Reviewer: addicted2twylyte (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 07:01 AM · On: Strawberry Blonde - Bella's Jealousy
That was great! The quality of your writing is excellent! Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Strawberry Blonde - Bella's Jealousy
SUCH a great story!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Teasing
How Beautiful!! ----> Her touch immediately changed me; it filled me with the completeness I felt only when we were together. The loss I carried when we were apart vanished – I was whole again.
Yummy Edward! Good job!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 05:10 AM · On: Homecoming
Great chapter! I LOVE E's POV -- always!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Strawberry Blonde - Bella's Jealousy
Great job!!!! You should (if you have not) write the proposal from Edward's POV, too!!
Author's Response: I'm loving all the reviews - thank you! Now go check out my story Seduction - I think that's what're hankering for next.
8-)
blondie
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Bella's Apology
Jacob deserved it and MORE!! You were none too hard on him. TEAM EDWARD forever!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Teasing
Getting better and better! Go Edward!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Homecoming
Awesome job!!! Love Edward's POV in this setting! Can't wait to read more!
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