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Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:09 AM · On: First Day
Jessica's Stanley's mom works at the hospital w/ Dr. Cullen vs. a bank that's different..........I like twists and changes so you don't have to stick to the Twilight thing even though this story is almost finished so .....I will just continue on then.
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:04 AM · On: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen
That preface is so depressing in a way, but it's really true, and really well written.........I'm not a fan of Jacob Black either, I can't wait til Edward comes along....the only reason I'm reading this. I don't read all Jacob & Bella.
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 01:25 AM · On: Kissed
ANother wonderful chapter!
Reviewer: trophywife (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Kissed
I have waited for months to start this story because the thought of starting it and getting to this point and having to wait for updates was not something I was looking forward to. Now here I am at chapter 35, glad I finally gave in and started the story at the same time SCREAMING at myself for not just waiting until it was complete so I could read it from start to finish in one shot.
:) You have a great gift, update soon!
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Kissed
What a great chapter. I'm still loving your story and am going to start reading it from the beginning again once I get all this crap done at work today. Can't wait until you post again!
Reviewer: laurielaur (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Kissed
I had a hard time getting into the story, for about the first 10 chapters... I felt like it was the same as Stephenie Meyer's.. However, as I kept reading, I decided I liked it.. so much that I read all 35 chapters in about 2 days! I like that in some ways, it is very similar to SM's version, but that you then made it your own.. i can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Kissed
Great chapter. Loved the E/B interaction. I can't believe it's been a year. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Kissed
Cool chapter! I like how there are meeting up on the stairs in front of the house! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: justagirl (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Kissed
OH MY GOODNESS THIS CHAPTER WAS SO WORTH THE WAIT. AND YOU ARE BRILLIANT.
OOOOMG I can't stop swooning. This chapter was sooo romantic and I am totally swept up in all the electric Edward and Bella moments. Edward wanting to tell Bella about vampires and how they mate for life or whatever.... SWOON. Bella opening the door to find Edward waiting for her.... SWOON.
This story is just SO perfect in so many ways. Once you finish this, you MUST try to publish something.
Reviewer: SureYouAre (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Kissed
And yet another reason to want an Edward: natural insect repellant (and he doesn't even smell like Off!) Lovely chapter! Thanks for updating!
Reviewer: Simonelecochon (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Kissed
Great chapter!
Reviewer: dazzledspunk (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Kissed
That was an amazing chapter. It was nice to see E/B more lighthearted and happier than the angstfest in the previous chapters. Excellent imagery! =) Just yesterday, I was thinking about an IVO update and my wish was granted, :D
Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Kissed
Wow! This chapter is truly good. It will be interesting to see who massages the vitamin E into Bella's scars. Nice symbolism with the swing.
Reviewer: psvtiger (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Kissed
Excellent use of imagery as always. Each chapter amazes me more than the last. In my opinion, one of my favorite chapters to date :)
You have a beautiful way of describing a scene that allows me to follow it perfectly as if I was watching a movie. I love books that are well-written like that and I have to give you the same compliment. Great chapter!
Reviewer: Edward_love (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Kissed
Wow. Thanks for finally updating. This chapter was great and I like that you are taking your time getting Bella and Edward together. It is way more realistic that way. Please update soon. Also the paragraph on previous events was very helpful. You are amazing. Hope your wedding is more beautiful than Edward and Bella's.
Reviewer: ingenue77 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Kissed
Love this chapter!
Reviewer: SweetDulcinea (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:20 AM · On: Kissed
Awesome writing. The kisses are quite fulfilling, and the sexual/relationship tension is sweet torture. A lot can happen in 10 chapters, so I'm excited to see what else you come up with!
Reviewer: irismagic101 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Kissed
I love the Edward that you have constructed with this story. It's crazy, however, how in character this Edward is, but how he is solely your creation at the same time. I'm really fascinated with this, and I hope you continue!
Reviewer: AliceElizabeth (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Kissed
siiiigggghhh. How lovely and bantery this was. I listened to this - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-TYP7VsZ7jg&feature=related - while reading and it made a marvellous chapter simply splendid.
I had a little giggle half way through when you mentioned a place called Albequerque which cannot honestly be a real place. Albequerque. Who stumbles on a nice patch of land and thinks, ah, I know what I'll call this place- ALBEQUERQUE. Sorry. It just made me laugh lots and lots and lots.
Simply wonderful chapter, as per usual. xxxx
Reviewer: greta (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Terminal
Just read chapter 7. Not bad at all !
Reviewer: Shankill (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:42 AM · On: Kissed
This was a all-day-goofy-inducing chapter! Loved it!!!!!!! I'm so glad for Edward and Bella; it's so good she's half done with the angsty world and starting to enjoy nicer version of Edward :)
I love you story :)
that said, update pleeeaaasseeeeeeeee ;p
Reviewer: dreamingofyou (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:39 AM · On: Kissed
Thank you so much for the update. It was so worth the wait. Wonderful and brilliant!!!!! I love your story so much!
Reviewer: Utterly Absurd (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Kissed
This time last year, I was at the beach reading the first chapter of your story. I am so glad that a) I am back at the beach; and b) I am still as interested and intrigued by every chapter you post. You are an amazing story-teller. Never give up writing and when you move on from Twilight fanfic, I still want to read what you come up with, so please keep us posted!
Reviewer: dazzled22 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Kissed
oh swoooon. this Edward is so emo and angsty and wonderful and i love him. IVO is one of my all-time faves. plz update soon. thx!
Reviewer: DazzedByRob (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Kissed
best chapter ever.
yeah.
so hot. so nice. so refreshing.
gah. i love it
kiss. yeah i wrote a poem.... actually... bc i was so inspired by this chapter. lol
im a geek. but i liked it. lol
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