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Reviewer: pearls8 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Relentless
ARG the angst is killing me, I don't really see her break down as much of a break down, but I can see what you are getting at. I hope Edward keeps persueing her, as much as it bugs her I enjoy is very much! I know that she is going through an extremely rough time, but why can't she understand I mean I suppose she does and it is just Bella being Bella...
regardless I LOVE THIS STORY!!! and I NEED and UPDATE!! Thanks!!!!
Reviewer: pearls8 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 03:45 AM · On: Monster
I have been reading through this story, and usually when I do this I do not comment on it no matter what until the end. But I can not help myself. I have ready many many fanfiction and out of all the ones I have read this is the second one to make me actually cry. Of course I would have loved for Edward to stop fighting this and kiss her, but I see that that is not what needs to happen especially not in this chapter. This chapter was amazing as is your writing, I am still silently crying as I am writing this after 5 minutes of reading this chapter. I can not wait to continue, I just wanted to express how amazing this is.
Reviewer: BellaGioia (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Sparks
So nice to read Renee acting as a mother for once. Loved this chapter.
Reviewer: BellaGioia (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Acquaintances
Edward...le sigh...yummy.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Scarred
Amazing chapter. Thank you for writing it.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Monster
As long as he doesn't leave, I'm fine with it. Althought not too happy, but trusting you.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Supernatural
It's so funny. With everything these two wacky kids have against them, I almost forgot he was a vampire. You do these charaters justice. So many have tried, and failed, but I honestly feel like this story is as good as SM's originals. Why do I think that? Because I get the same feeling I got when I'm reading this as I did when I read Twilight. That feeling that the world could fall away, but while I was reading, I would care only about reading this story and about these people.
Reviewer: BellaGioia (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Birthday Girl
I'm enjoying your story! Can't wait for things to pick up. I like Jacob, but obviously prefer Edward. Though I'm sort of sad, anticipating that perhaps Bella will have to break up with Jacob at some point? Poor thing. I don't wish him ill, ever.
No need to explain your motivation/defend your plot in the notes. You're a very good writer, and I expect all will be revealed in time. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Sparks
GOD! I can't take it...the angst..it's killing me...but I love it. Your writing is phenominal. I can't even out into words how awesome it is.
Reviewer: gnotar (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Monster
i just started reading this story and havent caught myself up with it all yet. but i just read chapter 25 and had to come review and tell you what an amazing chapter this was. wow, it blew me away, by far more of a powerful confrontation of bella telling him she knows what he is than both the twilight book and movie combined. and the part where he is rambling off the numbers and what their meanings were, wow again, sheer genius. such an amazing chapter in every aspect. ok so now that i said my peace i am off to continue reading the rest of the story thus far. :-)
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Hallowed
Squeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! Finally, she admits it. Man! We're making progress here!
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Friends
Poor Bella. She's so insecure.
I swear, this is the new Canon.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Acquaintances
Delicious writing. Listen, I left work early and came home before getting the kids just so I could read this story. That's a shame, and I'm so your bitch, but I can't help it. This story is crack.
Reviewer: EvilToaster (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 04:09 AM · On: Relentless
I love this story so much! Seriously...it's probably one of the best written and creative fanfics I've read thus far (and trust me I've read a lot of them).
And don't worry about angsty and melodramatic cause it's so perfect!
Keep it up! I'm dying to know what happens : )
Reviewer: makovitza (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Relentless
Love, love, love this story! Please keep writing - I'm hanging out for updates!
Oh, and do you do any beta work? Your writing is awesome...
:-)
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Half Truths
Wow. This was so powerful. I've been selfish and not reviewing after each chapter like I usuallly do, but this chapter knocked the wind out of me. Staggering emotions and insights. I love where you're taking this.
Reviewer: MissLucy (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Relentless
You're writing a great story, really...I don't understand why you have to defend yourself after each chapter. Your story is dynamic and interesting, and frankly...if it was just all love and fluff, it wouldn't be nearly as good. I'm really enjoying it, can't wait for more.
Please update soon!
~MissLucy
Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Relentless
I LOVE this story. I do hope that you make Bella shut-up long enough to hear Edward out though. I did want to slap her a few times!! *ducking* lol Anyways, I hope you post more ASAP!!!
Reviewer: NettieMarsh (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Relentless
i nominated your story. i wish i would have nominated it for best emo too caz you have taken me on a whirlwind adventure of some really deep and depressin emo-tions. cant wait for happy times or better/finer times in the future =]
Reviewer: SilverSeaGull (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Pumpkins
Hey, Alice fumbled with her truck, didn't she?? that pixie!!
Great chapter, I'm going to go on reading
Hugs!
Reviewer: NettieMarsh (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Fine
i loved it especially th "im fine' at the end
Reviewer: angel1babe86 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Relentless
your description of the raw emotions and the way you express the intensity of those emotions is truly amazing... I LOVE this story.. You are by far my most favorite author on fanfiction.
Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Acquaintances
Jmeyer actually led me to your story. I really like it! I love the twist you put to Twilight!! I can't wait to read the rest!
Reviewer: inlovewithavampire12 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Relentless
she has to get overthis mess and start to move forward. enough already they love each other and there is a time for forgiveness and that time is now.
Reviewer: NettieMarsh (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Sparks
i gota say i love your ocd tendencies, but man i love the banana milkshakes at steak and shake maybe i like that artificial taste. oh thas so sad. but i like their onion rings too and those seem to be quite real...lol anywho i loved your line how renee is fluent in crazy i was crackin up but yes im moving on now =D
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