OH and Just to say I love this story, so much better then anything SM could write even on a good day, and I would buy this book in a heartbeat if you sold it

I think that this might be the 3rd time I have decided to read this story---after lurking in the thread I pick up on so many things I missed & this story is so good it doesn't get old! If it was in book form I would have it highlighted and corners bent at all of my favorite parts I would love to put it on my kindle but just can't seem to figure it out----I am a techtard.

I'm really enjoying this so far!  In fact, I was reading it for six hours while I probably should have been working on  my final paper for Psychology class.  Oh, well, can't change anything now!  And it was totally worth it.  I can't wait for more!

::sighs::

This has been the most amazing rollercoaster ride.  This fic has, hands down and with no close contenders, been the most emotionally provoking piece of fiction I've ever read.

I wait with baited breath for your next installment.

You are an excellent writer. It's been nice to see a different point of view story that still makes perfect sense.

loved it make more please!

 

i did i did haha i remembered the jack as soon as she said flat as a pancake! do i get a prize? by the way, i think even though it's painfully slow, that you are ending her relationship with jacob beautifuly. if he fell off a cliff like i wanted, she would proably feel way too distraught and guilty to give in to her feelings for edward..and her just tossing him aside for the a boy she thinks could never love her wouldn't be in her character...she is slowly understanding that although jacob loves her he doesn't get her quite like she thought..and somehow edward just does. and she's terrified bevause she's never believed in fairytale love, she has to be realistic and responsible..so everything she is feeling in her mind can't possibly be real, right?

Awesome story so far!! Keep it up! I'm glued now, so I hope you post a new chapter soon!

Great job!

hah i love your end notes about the hills and laguna beach- i absolutely hate them tooo

I haven't posted any reviews yet, though I've been reading your story ALL DAY. I'm slightly obsessed with it now, and I truly hope you're going to keep adding to it - soon! I think it's wonderfully well-written and the emotions between Bella and Edward are very raw and real to me. I really really love it =)

Wow! Just WOW! I read this entire story in two days (was up till 4am the 1st day).  All i can say is WOW! I absolutely LOVE this story! I love the way you're weaving this tale and its staying pretty close to the original story timelines and challenges.  The angst is just addicting!!! You are a marvelous writer! I can't wait to read more.  A couple of things i wondered about:
1) Does Edward know Bella got accepted to Dartmouth?
2) Are Sam and Emily an item now? Will you tell us more about the situation that got her scarred? You don't have to, but i wondered about that since she was not receptive to dating him in the beginning.
3) I would love to see Jacob imprint with someone so he could leave Bella alone. He just makes me so nervous!
4) Thank you soooo much for killing the Bella tears - enough already! LOL :)
5) I love the scene where Edward goes after Jacob, i must have re-read that a million times.
6) I loved reading the part about Alice vision that prevented them from coming to Forks 3 years earlier. that was really deep. If they had come to Forks 3 years earlier, it would have been the original Twilight story. I know - like Duh, but still!!

And lastly - I LOVE THIS FRIGGIN STORY!! I can't believe how many times i skipped over it in the 'Most Recent' list because the summary listed it as a Jacob/Bella story and i don't like anything that doesnt' involve my Edward :) But when i saw how long the story was and all the great reviews (thats a best practice btw - read reviews on a story prior to reading - lol), i had to take a chance and start this story and boy am i glad i did! Kudos to you!! Now comes the part where i beg: MORE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!