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Reviewer: ipodRlover (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2018 11:24 PM · On: Kissed
Hello, went back and re-read this again. Always been a favourite of mine. I know it’s been years but always check to see if you have updated.
Reviewer: rainonme (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2015 04:56 AM · On: Kissed
Stopped by to re-read, as is my habit every other year or so. Still heart-breakingly lovely. Thank you for writing it and leaving it here for me to enjoy. For the record, I revisit your story over Twilight because I like it so much better. Just wanted to let you know.
Reviewer: alviilde (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2014 08:24 AM · On: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen
Years go by and I still come back to this story every now and then. I wish you would finish this, it is truly great :) I will keep checking and rereading, just in case. -A
Reviewer: emilychar (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2013 05:01 AM · On: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen
I miss this! Sincerely, three years later and still waiting for more...
Reviewer: Rebecca123 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 07:01 PM · On: College
I love it :) especially your Bella
Reviewer: GeezerWench (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 02:43 PM · On: Relentless
Hey! As before, I enjoy the angst! In fact, I love it.
Edward begging her to listen to him, on his knees in front of her. Trapping her between his arms. Pleading, but using his "vampire" skills against her. So sexy.
Reviewer: GeezerWench (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 01:43 PM · On: Uninvited
I enjoyed chapter 29 very much! In the Twilight Saga I expected Jake to rip up some human "accidently", but it never happened.
And everybody knows Edward's always wanted to rip up Jacob.....
Reviewer: GeezerWench (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 11:22 AM · On: Monster
Sweetie, you don't need to try to justify why you wrote what you wrote. I have been enthralled by the imagination of so many of you fanfic writers... I only wish I'd found it all sooner.
Reviewer: GeezerWench (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 12:26 AM · On: Friends
Embarrassingly, I like the angsty stuff. In fact, that's part of why I keep reading these fan fics!
Reviewer: GeezerWench (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 01:37 PM · On: Terminal
No, it doesn't suck.
Reviewer: Vanillamochalatte (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 10:35 AM · On: Scarred
HOLY CRAP! I didn't see that coming but LOVE IT! Sam is such a douche!
Reviewer: oldladytish (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 12:28 PM · On: Kissed
I love your story. I love your Bella. Jacob's letter was so scary it raised the hairs on the back of my neck. I read it until 4:00 am in the morning, or my eyes get so tired (I am an old lady), that the letters are too blurred to see. You have a gift. Thank you for sharing it with everyone fortunate enough to have your story.
Reviewer: aechorp (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 03:08 PM · On: Kissed
Nice way to end but I want more;) Great story I has a very good flow to it.
Reviewer: aechorp (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Tightrope
About time but I loved the kiss.
Reviewer: edella (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 12:26 AM · On: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen
I loved your story....but its been months since I ve seen a review...You have really brought out the characters bt now u dnt update !!!
Reviewer: Ambray (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 04:18 AM · On: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen
Gosh. I just added this story to my favourites to find you haven't updated this story in over a year!!!
This makes me incredibly sad, as like I said in my previous review, this is the best AU story I have read.
Reviewer: Ambray (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 04:16 AM · On: Kissed
I've just read this story in one sitting, and let me tell you, it is one of the best AU stories I've ever read, if not the best.
The characters are completely believable and true.
I really cannot wait until the next update.
Reviewer: mousekitty (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 01:12 PM · On: Shakespeare
The chapter was pretty good, but the End Note was best of all!
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 05:30 AM · On: Kissed
"His kiss ruined me for all other." Caused heart fail. It was almost to much to bear. :) That is how the first kiss should have been written for Bella and Edward.
You know...you could edit the author notes and repost completed. You could leave your readers to decide their future. I love reading this fan fiction. Your use of SM characters was fresh. I haven't ready anything like it. And yes, I have read many high school fics.
Can you believe the fandom is still rec'ing your fic? I can. You can leave me here but If you felt the urge...I would read more. THANK YOU for not pulling this fic. Other reader and writers need to read well written fan fiction. Be well. Thanks for sharing your fic.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 05:18 AM · On: Tightrope
Such a great chapter. No WTF or AFT for me. Bella is hurting and is hurt. I enjoyed the mental and physical battle Bella is fighting. I am moved by Bella's fear of Jacob. I loved the build up to the kiss.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 02:59 AM · On: Sixty Seconds
I have already read the completed chapters for this story. I feel you deserve the reviews even in epic fail. I can understand why you would want to to walk away from this angsty story. ;) I enjoyed Alice and Bella. It doesn't seem like a one sided friendship. Even Edward and Bella's banter is refreshing. :)
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 11:47 PM · On: Truth
Thank you for writing a thoughtful story. It really is well written and full of life chapter after chapter. Using Leah as a vehicle for Bella to learn about the vampires is well played.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Crushed
Wow that chapter was packed full of good stuff. Thanks for the AN about Billy.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 03:40 PM · On: Sparks
3300 reviews! Thank you for this Bella and Edward! I can't believe I waited so long to read this story. It has been rec'd to me so many times. Thank you for writing a reasonable Bella. :)
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 12:07 PM · On: Unrequited
Great chapter it was nice to see Alice again.
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